
12/4/2020 c12 TheSoundOfThunderingEngines
This was an amazing. Long but good. Glad to see Jon getting powerful.
This was an amazing. Long but good. Glad to see Jon getting powerful.
12/4/2020 c12 Amelia831
You got really have Jon lose v-card before a woman becomes ambitious enough to sway Jon into her hands. Practically all the women want him now cause he’s the apprentice of Nox and I know half of them want him for power or their children to be powerful.
I’m still hoping to see Robb progress cause he is training similar but not as much as Jon is but at least hoping enough he could be a challenge to Jon in battle. Also it’s cool Jon has a freaking white lightsaber! I wonder it be name Winter or something else. I kinda expect a dark saber but white lightsabers are cool too!
You got really have Jon lose v-card before a woman becomes ambitious enough to sway Jon into her hands. Practically all the women want him now cause he’s the apprentice of Nox and I know half of them want him for power or their children to be powerful.
I’m still hoping to see Robb progress cause he is training similar but not as much as Jon is but at least hoping enough he could be a challenge to Jon in battle. Also it’s cool Jon has a freaking white lightsaber! I wonder it be name Winter or something else. I kinda expect a dark saber but white lightsabers are cool too!
12/4/2020 c12 Seawurm
Damn, that was one heck of a chapter! I didn't think that Arieanne would jump towards Jon so quickly. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Damn, that was one heck of a chapter! I didn't think that Arieanne would jump towards Jon so quickly. Can't wait to see what happens next.
12/4/2020 c12 Hadrian.Caeser
I can't wait for their return to the North. Thank you for such a long chapter
I can't wait for their return to the North. Thank you for such a long chapter
12/4/2020 c12
6Black Magic99
lol that's an interesting pairing idea, or will Jon find himself the #1 bachelor

lol that's an interesting pairing idea, or will Jon find himself the #1 bachelor
12/4/2020 c12 asonia99
Yeah, I don't think Jon wouldn't get the feeling she's using him, whether from the Force, comon sense or Nox. Or atleast as soon as he grows up somewhat older. Which makes her urgency justified I guess.
Yeah, I don't think Jon wouldn't get the feeling she's using him, whether from the Force, comon sense or Nox. Or atleast as soon as he grows up somewhat older. Which makes her urgency justified I guess.
12/4/2020 c12
7NightBringer325
I almost feel sorry for Jon at this moment he has practically half the kingdom either wanting him dead or married into their families. At least he has Nox to help him out somewhat so long as he isn't testing or teasing Jon for it.

I almost feel sorry for Jon at this moment he has practically half the kingdom either wanting him dead or married into their families. At least he has Nox to help him out somewhat so long as he isn't testing or teasing Jon for it.
12/4/2020 c12 red demon161
Yes an update. A great chapter. It's nice to see they got such a great haul. The trip more then paid for itself. Though they didn't get any dragonbone bows, I figure there would be some around.
One things jumps out at me, would a Valyrian steel mace actually be effective? From what I've heard Valyrian steel is very light a mace would need to be heavy.
I liked Asha's thoughts on Nox. Now she has to convince Ned to let her keep the captured pirate ship. Maybe if she sits in his lap and calls him daddy. :)
Arianne is a bit different here. In canon she was dumber than a bag of hammers. Let hope she relives Jon of his pesky v-card.
Hopefully Nox will be awarded with some land when he returns to the North. Being elevated to lord but not given land could be seen as a slight against Nox, especially as it's Ned's land to do with as he wishes.
Yes an update. A great chapter. It's nice to see they got such a great haul. The trip more then paid for itself. Though they didn't get any dragonbone bows, I figure there would be some around.
One things jumps out at me, would a Valyrian steel mace actually be effective? From what I've heard Valyrian steel is very light a mace would need to be heavy.
I liked Asha's thoughts on Nox. Now she has to convince Ned to let her keep the captured pirate ship. Maybe if she sits in his lap and calls him daddy. :)
Arianne is a bit different here. In canon she was dumber than a bag of hammers. Let hope she relives Jon of his pesky v-card.
Hopefully Nox will be awarded with some land when he returns to the North. Being elevated to lord but not given land could be seen as a slight against Nox, especially as it's Ned's land to do with as he wishes.
12/4/2020 c12
1shivangoes
Great chapter! Always look forward for the updates to these, but if possible maybe you can show us whats happening with the rest. Also will there be conflict between robb and jon? considering that jon has his own lightsaber and is an apprentice now?

Great chapter! Always look forward for the updates to these, but if possible maybe you can show us whats happening with the rest. Also will there be conflict between robb and jon? considering that jon has his own lightsaber and is an apprentice now?
12/4/2020 c12
5Darth Ralan
magnificent. simply magnificent. and finally to see Jon Snow got his lightsaber, that's a treasure... and holy shit, you make him use makashi and juyo? now that's badass! But the major mindblower is that Gerion Lannister is force sensitive. HOLY shit indeed. I do wonder who Jon will be paired with. is it singular or will he be a pheromones storm that attracts many?

magnificent. simply magnificent. and finally to see Jon Snow got his lightsaber, that's a treasure... and holy shit, you make him use makashi and juyo? now that's badass! But the major mindblower is that Gerion Lannister is force sensitive. HOLY shit indeed. I do wonder who Jon will be paired with. is it singular or will he be a pheromones storm that attracts many?