for The Sting2/24/2021 c19 Vadercat
Interesting twist in the story, I am curious why you brought them back to Haiti and what Callen is going to accomplish there. If Velazquez is disabled and Zamora is jailed who else is hunting Callen did and the team and how will you be getting them back together? Did the doctor cure Callen of the the flesh eating bacteria? Are the medications being applied to help with recovery and prevention. I'm not sure anyone in NCIS would care to jump into the water with that lurking around. Keep in mind even if you had no open sores on your body it only has to come in contact with your eyes to find an entry in the body.
Interesting twist in the story, I am curious why you brought them back to Haiti and what Callen is going to accomplish there. If Velazquez is disabled and Zamora is jailed who else is hunting Callen did and the team and how will you be getting them back together? Did the doctor cure Callen of the the flesh eating bacteria? Are the medications being applied to help with recovery and prevention. I'm not sure anyone in NCIS would care to jump into the water with that lurking around. Keep in mind even if you had no open sores on your body it only has to come in contact with your eyes to find an entry in the body.
2/24/2021 c7 Vadercat
Well Callen does have a point, they switch up their routines, they change their clothes, languages, etc, but Sam never changes his car.
Well Callen does have a point, they switch up their routines, they change their clothes, languages, etc, but Sam never changes his car.
1/28/2021 c19 trscrny
Another thrilling chapter. While I'm not a fan of authors flip flopping between present and past, I found that once I got into the flow of it , it wasn't too hard to keep track. I do wonder what Callen has in mind, though! Thank you for sharing your talents.,
Hope you and yours are staying safe.,
Teresa
Another thrilling chapter. While I'm not a fan of authors flip flopping between present and past, I found that once I got into the flow of it , it wasn't too hard to keep track. I do wonder what Callen has in mind, though! Thank you for sharing your talents.,
Hope you and yours are staying safe.,
Teresa
12/28/2020 c18 Linda Wigington
Great chapter! Callen is recuperating and must rely on his team. Hetty has done what she could to protect Callen. Now he still isn’t safe and we are in a tense situation as Callen and Sam must escape. What to do? The water holds the answer. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Great chapter! Callen is recuperating and must rely on his team. Hetty has done what she could to protect Callen. Now he still isn’t safe and we are in a tense situation as Callen and Sam must escape. What to do? The water holds the answer. Looking forward to the next chapter.
12/23/2020 c18 trscrny
Holy cow! This is so exciting! I am not sad that this story is continuing, by the way! Although I am looking forward to rereading it once it is finished, I am loving every chapter you serve up. Wonderful writing and Callen - can't ask for more than that, eh?! LOL!
Thank you for sharing.
Stay safe
Teresa
Holy cow! This is so exciting! I am not sad that this story is continuing, by the way! Although I am looking forward to rereading it once it is finished, I am loving every chapter you serve up. Wonderful writing and Callen - can't ask for more than that, eh?! LOL!
Thank you for sharing.
Stay safe
Teresa
11/29/2020 c17 Linda Wigington
This is for chapter 16/17. Both exciting chapters. We now know they are after Callen because of Mexico. Callen is healing but is as stubborn as usual. He wants to leave to protect his team but Hetty has him on desk duty. Callen finds it difficult to understand why they are after him alone. Perhaps Eric has the answer to the question. Looking forward to the next chapter.
This is for chapter 16/17. Both exciting chapters. We now know they are after Callen because of Mexico. Callen is healing but is as stubborn as usual. He wants to leave to protect his team but Hetty has him on desk duty. Callen finds it difficult to understand why they are after him alone. Perhaps Eric has the answer to the question. Looking forward to the next chapter.
11/29/2020 c17 Varvarra11
Hm,what did Eric find out?Is Callen still Holding back?Please more.
Hm,what did Eric find out?Is Callen still Holding back?Please more.
11/27/2020 c17 trscrny
And thank you for posting a new chapter...a very good new chapter! You truly bring out Callen's understandable frustration. And I really like his conversation with Sam. More, soon, I hope.
Stay safe!
Teresa
And thank you for posting a new chapter...a very good new chapter! You truly bring out Callen's understandable frustration. And I really like his conversation with Sam. More, soon, I hope.
Stay safe!
Teresa
11/16/2020 c1 Bandit8
*own and Great.
*own and Great.
11/16/2020 c16 Bandit8
Ah!Callen wants to hunt on his Story.
Ah!Callen wants to hunt on his Story.