
2/9/2020 c1 Guest
At first I thought you had a name change, then I clicked on it to discover you switched it over. I reread it. I enjoyed it once more but the new additions are welcome. You cleaned it up a little better too. The new additions gave life into the story, especially the last section from the Tribe in the Center. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this family. And you made your namesake character (I think it's that) have to go on a journey to find them. I wonder if there are any others in the same situation. I notice that his love interest hasn't been shown or her friends for that matter. I hope they're okay.
At first I thought you had a name change, then I clicked on it to discover you switched it over. I reread it. I enjoyed it once more but the new additions are welcome. You cleaned it up a little better too. The new additions gave life into the story, especially the last section from the Tribe in the Center. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this family. And you made your namesake character (I think it's that) have to go on a journey to find them. I wonder if there are any others in the same situation. I notice that his love interest hasn't been shown or her friends for that matter. I hope they're okay.