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11/20/2021 c2 ParadoxTheory374
Quite annoying this guy is.
5/19/2020 c1 3frytrix
So If he have a single coin of gold, his stand can turn into gold and mass produce it?
5/9/2020 c2 GXVIII
can't he copy his stand's powers?
4/11/2020 c1 Helg
Shard points are underused:
Gestalation 15drop in 3vigilant 1slautelhouse 2endbringer 4 emosions 2 27
Element 3 2*second triggers 6unlimited 7 stand 7 presense 2 26
Character pointes are underused
Gestalation 15drop in 3vigilant 3slauterhouse 4endbringer 3no identety2 30
Element 3stealth suit 2 2*blades 2martial 4 stealth 3parkour 2 hacking 1plot 1 2*second triggers 8 26
Somehow you counted plot convenience as shard point (wich is not) and added extra second trigger only in character pointes. Poor work with easy math poor work for story.
And it showes - elemental somehow allowes generate and control element. Come on, Abbadon shard gives stronger power, but so much stronger? No. Same for peak condition - endless stamina doesn't mean endless energy for changer power. Well pocket room means no passing of time for living crearures inside it, but stronger power allowes sences for stand's master - that is possible. Unlimited shard work is the worst, as always. No, you can't copy thinker powers, they are not visible. The same for tinker, stranger and most master really. At best with Abba's shard you can recieve all of the powers from cape, if you can see at least one.
The funny problem is - unlimited shard work allowes use of copies, but how many at time? It cost is only 7, so with Abba's shard 2 - 3 copies in any moment of time. Worm universe meanes suffering in the end.
4/6/2020 c2 Edocsiru
Holy shit, this is filled with nonsense. Have you even read Worm? There's bad fanon and then there's shamefully bad fanon; this is the later.
4/6/2020 c1 Edocsiru
lol, silencers don't -no matter what the TV says- actually silence the gun, at most they make it safe for your ears to shoot a gun. What I'm trying to say is that shooting a "silenced" gun in an alley will be heard by everyone in a couple of blocks around you.
4/5/2020 c3 superpierce
good chapter hopefully John's plans don't get messed up by Amy.
4/5/2020 c1 SvenTheDecoy
ive googled everything i can think of. wtf is a "stand"?
4/5/2020 c3 Silber D. Wolf
4/5/2020 c3 2Lord All Bright
Did he let her think he lied on purpose?
3/30/2020 c2 Lord All Bright
His powers seems very... Coherent.
3/29/2020 c2 Silber D. Wolf
awesome chapter
3/28/2020 c2 MoreRational
Good work.
3/25/2020 c1 The Lazy Dragon
I havent seen a very pormising cyoa worm story in a long time!
I hope this continues.
But if not thank you for making it
3/3/2020 c1 Edocsiru
The fuck is an antivillain? A villain that plays with dolls? Anyway, this is either a nutcase vigilante or just a villain.
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