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2/12/2020 c1 Guest
This hurts my eyes. Get a beta. It’s awful. Poor punctuation and grammar. Improper word choice in several spots. Just no.

2/13/2020 c1 AnakinSmom
Oh O! More please!

2/12/2020 c2

7Lizzie Paige
Poor girl...a living nightmare.

2/12/2020 c2 lillianolivia.white
Mercy, I hope they bought her a blanket, food and water. This is scary.

2/12/2020 c2 sherylb
So scary!

2/12/2020 c2 motherbeatrice
holy crap, this is so scary...love it, bring it on...lol...

2/12/2020 c2 2muchtrouble
You have vividly described her situation and her fear.

2/12/2020 c2 Rita01tx
Poor kid! Wakin' up to that kind of reality would be a damn good excuse to escape back to peaceful oblivion!

2/12/2020 c2 biblepam
Wow

2/12/2020 c2 joshuasmom131
Need more! Please...who took bella? Is this a bella Edward HEA?

2/11/2020 c1 madas
More Please ( and make it snappy :-) I beg you unashamedly )

2/10/2020 c1 lillianolivia.white
This sat me on the edge of my seat. Great first chapter.

2/10/2020 c1 joshuasmom131
Wow! Great first chapter, can’t wait for more!

2/10/2020 c1 greygirl2358
Interesting! Please update soon.

2/10/2020 c1 MadMooey18
Ooh I likey, I likey. It’s amazingly suspenseful and I really want to know the fucker who hurt her. I bet it’s James or Laurent or Demitri...?

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