for Trust Issues11/12/2022 c23 
79Paulina Ann
FFN didn't let me know of these chapters! What a fantastic end to your story! And I'm excited to see what the new one is. Loved Laura's reaction to it all :)
79Paulina AnnFFN didn't let me know of these chapters! What a fantastic end to your story! And I'm excited to see what the new one is. Loved Laura's reaction to it all :)
8/11/2022 c23 Candylou
At least, frank knew when it was time to ask for help, and joe wasn't afraid to call him on it. Even though, frank was already willing to get the help. So happy for chet, getting a partnership with frank and joe, and also getting engaged at the same time. It's nice for his dad to be his best man, but his mother probably was not happy about the engagement. It's wonderful that their childhood friendship with each other has lasted. I don't know why, but I have a feeling that their next case coming that frank should be as happy as he was, when deciding to take it. I have a bad feeling that frank should not be so happy. Also, i think the client's reaction to joe being the ones to meet with her instead of frank, was kind of strange. I mean, frank took the worst risk, but they all saved her life. Looking forward to the next story.
At least, frank knew when it was time to ask for help, and joe wasn't afraid to call him on it. Even though, frank was already willing to get the help. So happy for chet, getting a partnership with frank and joe, and also getting engaged at the same time. It's nice for his dad to be his best man, but his mother probably was not happy about the engagement. It's wonderful that their childhood friendship with each other has lasted. I don't know why, but I have a feeling that their next case coming that frank should be as happy as he was, when deciding to take it. I have a bad feeling that frank should not be so happy. Also, i think the client's reaction to joe being the ones to meet with her instead of frank, was kind of strange. I mean, frank took the worst risk, but they all saved her life. Looking forward to the next story.
8/11/2022 c23 Xenitha
A great end to this story and I'm very jazzed that you're starting another one! Chet's bachelor party will be great also! Terrorists? Gang-bangers? Spies dressed as waiters?
A great end to this story and I'm very jazzed that you're starting another one! Chet's bachelor party will be great also! Terrorists? Gang-bangers? Spies dressed as waiters?
8/11/2022 c23 BMSH
The reason I love your stories is that:
1. You are a good writer
2. You've created a world with fully fleshed out characters and even make me want to know their stories.
I love the hints you've dropped for your next direction. So many things going on (also a reason to love). The wedding will be awesome.
Thanks!
The reason I love your stories is that:
1. You are a good writer
2. You've created a world with fully fleshed out characters and even make me want to know their stories.
I love the hints you've dropped for your next direction. So many things going on (also a reason to love). The wedding will be awesome.
Thanks!
8/11/2022 c23 15Jilsen
This was a great wrap up to a wonderful story. I was happy to see Frank went to Dr. Finley and stayed for a week or so. It's good that he took his health seriously and I think it was important for you to highlight. Much more realistic this way. No one just bounces back from what Frank put himself through so, thanks for showing us his journey.
Yay! for Chet and Marisol. I was rooting for them. It's also nice to know that Chet is now a part of the brothers agency. He's such a great character in your capable hands and I look forward to seeing more of him.
And it looks like you have the beginnings of two cases for your next story. I shall keep an eye out for it. Thank you for sharing your talents with us!
15JilsenThis was a great wrap up to a wonderful story. I was happy to see Frank went to Dr. Finley and stayed for a week or so. It's good that he took his health seriously and I think it was important for you to highlight. Much more realistic this way. No one just bounces back from what Frank put himself through so, thanks for showing us his journey.
Yay! for Chet and Marisol. I was rooting for them. It's also nice to know that Chet is now a part of the brothers agency. He's such a great character in your capable hands and I look forward to seeing more of him.
And it looks like you have the beginnings of two cases for your next story. I shall keep an eye out for it. Thank you for sharing your talents with us!
8/11/2022 c23 caseykam
Thanks for finishing this one on a high note. I am a nurse and while I am no expert on it, I have taken care of some anorexic patients over the years. I've been enjoying the story, however Frank rationing his food in this chapter was the one that really got me in the heart. I'm so glad this one had a happy ending as so many of these cases in real life don't. I look forward to seeing your new story. God bless. :)
Thanks for finishing this one on a high note. I am a nurse and while I am no expert on it, I have taken care of some anorexic patients over the years. I've been enjoying the story, however Frank rationing his food in this chapter was the one that really got me in the heart. I'm so glad this one had a happy ending as so many of these cases in real life don't. I look forward to seeing your new story. God bless. :)
8/11/2022 c23 sm2003495
Congratulations on your wedding! So glad to read this chapter and doubly happy to see Frank is getting better. There is good news all srouns. A new contract, new partner, Chets marriage ..so very happy. I love this universe and the way you potray the hardy's. Hoping there is another story in the works..
Congratulations on your wedding! So glad to read this chapter and doubly happy to see Frank is getting better. There is good news all srouns. A new contract, new partner, Chets marriage ..so very happy. I love this universe and the way you potray the hardy's. Hoping there is another story in the works..
8/10/2022 c23 max2013
Glad Frank got help-happy dance for Chet and Marisol-and now the guys are going international-looking forward to that-thank you for this awesome ride!
Glad Frank got help-happy dance for Chet and Marisol-and now the guys are going international-looking forward to that-thank you for this awesome ride!
7/9/2022 c22 Candylou
UT is good frank is getting better. It its also good laura and Gertrude didn't do more damage to joe and fenton. I'm sure they could tell frank couldn't take anything because of this health. Joe is right that they owe so much to chet. Hopefully, frank won't have any long term effects from this case, but will continue to get back to what he was before. Update when you can.
UT is good frank is getting better. It its also good laura and Gertrude didn't do more damage to joe and fenton. I'm sure they could tell frank couldn't take anything because of this health. Joe is right that they owe so much to chet. Hopefully, frank won't have any long term effects from this case, but will continue to get back to what he was before. Update when you can.
7/8/2022 c22 Jilsen
Such a nice heartfelt chapter. I enjoyed all the catching up with the different characters. I have to say that Tom was a big disappointment. Does he only care about money? And the business? Well, at least he did muster some sympathy once he saw Frank and the condition he's in.
I am notoriously wrong on how many chapters I have left, too. ;) No problem, it's nice to know I will have another chapter to read.
Such a nice heartfelt chapter. I enjoyed all the catching up with the different characters. I have to say that Tom was a big disappointment. Does he only care about money? And the business? Well, at least he did muster some sympathy once he saw Frank and the condition he's in.
I am notoriously wrong on how many chapters I have left, too. ;) No problem, it's nice to know I will have another chapter to read.
7/7/2022 c22 Xenitha
Ahhh...loved Laura's reaction to Frank's having gone undercover. Yes, we know where Joe gets his temper from. And congrats on the wedding!
Ahhh...loved Laura's reaction to Frank's having gone undercover. Yes, we know where Joe gets his temper from. And congrats on the wedding!