for Trust Issues2/10/2021 c8 hlahabibty
You're doing a wonderful job with this story. I really enjoy how you interweave Chet's personal problems with the case. It's very organic.
I hope Chet's mom comes around. Marisol is wonderful.
You're doing a wonderful job with this story. I really enjoy how you interweave Chet's personal problems with the case. It's very organic.
I hope Chet's mom comes around. Marisol is wonderful.
2/10/2021 c8 BMSH
Hmmm - a complication. Interesting. I'd forgotten Augusta didn't like Marisol. That has to be the worst. Many years ago, when I met my husband, he wanted to meet my parents. We were living in a different state at the time and my parents came to visit. My mother really liked him but deliberately didn't tell me because she thought I'd break up with him if I knew she liked him - and she was probably right - cuz I was a brat. Anyway, my family adores him and I can't imagine life where they didn't. So Augusta needs to figure things out and embrace Cherisol.
Hmmm - a complication. Interesting. I'd forgotten Augusta didn't like Marisol. That has to be the worst. Many years ago, when I met my husband, he wanted to meet my parents. We were living in a different state at the time and my parents came to visit. My mother really liked him but deliberately didn't tell me because she thought I'd break up with him if I knew she liked him - and she was probably right - cuz I was a brat. Anyway, my family adores him and I can't imagine life where they didn't. So Augusta needs to figure things out and embrace Cherisol.
2/1/2021 c7 
33Xenitha
Nice. Poor Chet, having to be deceptive. Hope he can pull it off! Frank and Joe? They can lie like a pair of rugs...
33XenithaNice. Poor Chet, having to be deceptive. Hope he can pull it off! Frank and Joe? They can lie like a pair of rugs...
1/24/2021 c7 hlahabibty
Where to start? I hope all is well with you. I'm glad you and your family tested negative.
Stay safe!
I'm with Joe's spidey-senses tingling on Tom. Something is rotten in Denmark here.
I wonder if there's something he's not telling Joe.
I love how Chet handles himself in this story. He could be a private eye himself!
Where to start? I hope all is well with you. I'm glad you and your family tested negative.
Stay safe!
I'm with Joe's spidey-senses tingling on Tom. Something is rotten in Denmark here.
I wonder if there's something he's not telling Joe.
I love how Chet handles himself in this story. He could be a private eye himself!
1/24/2021 c7 16Jilsen
Chet is doing such a great job! I love reading about his adventures. Thank you for the new chapter. Glad to hear that you are all safe and healthy after your scare. I understand about one's brain being mush. As always, you leave me wanting another chapter now!
16JilsenChet is doing such a great job! I love reading about his adventures. Thank you for the new chapter. Glad to hear that you are all safe and healthy after your scare. I understand about one's brain being mush. As always, you leave me wanting another chapter now!
1/24/2021 c7 BMSH
I do so enjoy your updates. I'm definitely with Chet - it's hard being a servant to two masters. I foresee a big fall for Brad...eventually.
I do so enjoy your updates. I'm definitely with Chet - it's hard being a servant to two masters. I foresee a big fall for Brad...eventually.
1/23/2021 c7 sm2003495
So glad that you are doing ok..its hard to be creative in a rime like this..another amazing chapter. Chet is building trust. Poor lady, she must have had a rough life..can't wait for your update! Update soon and take care!
So glad that you are doing ok..its hard to be creative in a rime like this..another amazing chapter. Chet is building trust. Poor lady, she must have had a rough life..can't wait for your update! Update soon and take care!
1/23/2021 c7 max2013
Way to go Chet! Joe, I sort of agree about not liking Tom, but he is trying to solve his sisters murder which gives him some points-and awesome cover up in his office-smooth.
Way to go Chet! Joe, I sort of agree about not liking Tom, but he is trying to solve his sisters murder which gives him some points-and awesome cover up in his office-smooth.
1/23/2021 c7 MargaretA66
Glad to see a new chapter from you. I am mentally so over this pandemic. I live alone and am fortunate enough to have a job where I can work from home, but the lack of socialization is getting to me. But I am not going out. I am looking forward to it.
Glad to see a new chapter from you. I am mentally so over this pandemic. I live alone and am fortunate enough to have a job where I can work from home, but the lack of socialization is getting to me. But I am not going out. I am looking forward to it.
1/23/2021 c7 79Paulina Ann
Yea! So glad you are back! And I'm glad all are well. :) Even though it's been awhile, the story flowed right along. I really liked Joe at Tom's office. And now to see what Chet finds out the records room... Keep up the good work. :)
79Paulina AnnYea! So glad you are back! And I'm glad all are well. :) Even though it's been awhile, the story flowed right along. I really liked Joe at Tom's office. And now to see what Chet finds out the records room... Keep up the good work. :)
11/24/2020 c6 16Jilsen
What a nice character study of Chet. Really enjoyed this chapter. And Chet, I don't think you are in over your head. Well, at least, I hope you aren't.
16JilsenWhat a nice character study of Chet. Really enjoyed this chapter. And Chet, I don't think you are in over your head. Well, at least, I hope you aren't.
11/22/2020 c6 BMSH
That was actually a lovely chapter, even without the boys. It was nice to learn about Chet and his methods. He'll be a good addition to their skill set. I bet you'd do well if you tried your hand at other than fan fiction!
That was actually a lovely chapter, even without the boys. It was nice to learn about Chet and his methods. He'll be a good addition to their skill set. I bet you'd do well if you tried your hand at other than fan fiction!
11/21/2020 c6 hlahabibty
I think this might be my favorite chapter so far. You write Chet very well.
I don't know why I was surprised at how good he is at this; he's been helping Frank and Joe
for a while now. Oooooh maybe he should be the third detective at their agency ;)
A lot of odd stuff about that place. Methinks there's some dark secret.
Great job!
I think this might be my favorite chapter so far. You write Chet very well.
I don't know why I was surprised at how good he is at this; he's been helping Frank and Joe
for a while now. Oooooh maybe he should be the third detective at their agency ;)
A lot of odd stuff about that place. Methinks there's some dark secret.
Great job!
11/21/2020 c6 max2013
LOVE THIS CHAPTER-Chet's dad is the bomb and his mom is typical small town-love Jerry and his cousin-Chet, all of this is too close to home making deception difficult-the Hardy's will understand.
LOVE THIS CHAPTER-Chet's dad is the bomb and his mom is typical small town-love Jerry and his cousin-Chet, all of this is too close to home making deception difficult-the Hardy's will understand.