for Trust Issues7/7/2022 c22 max2013
Tom, your gratitude is lacking-Frank, amazed you are still living after Laura and Gertrude-thank you for the update and looking forward to the epi.
Tom, your gratitude is lacking-Frank, amazed you are still living after Laura and Gertrude-thank you for the update and looking forward to the epi.
7/7/2022 c22 BMSH
I love your family moments - Laura's rage, Fenton and Joe's sheepishness, Aunt Gertrude's admonishments. I love Kara and Joe. Propose already Joe.
I'm glad Tom has some sense of shame. Good thing you made Brad worse because both of them deserve being pushed in front of a speeding train.
Congrats on the wedding.
I love your family moments - Laura's rage, Fenton and Joe's sheepishness, Aunt Gertrude's admonishments. I love Kara and Joe. Propose already Joe.
I'm glad Tom has some sense of shame. Good thing you made Brad worse because both of them deserve being pushed in front of a speeding train.
Congrats on the wedding.
6/10/2022 c21 
16Jilsen
Quick question; towards the beginning it says, "as the elevator approached the floor Frank had been on ..." Should that read "Chet" instead of "Frank?"
I loved Chief Collig in this chapter! I loved his whole conversation with Chet. It had me smiling and laughing at points. Great work! You are really good at fleshing out the various characters and bringing them to life.
Chet was great as he has been throughout this entire story. I loved his scene at the end and his sudden confidence. You have done such a great job with his character. Really lovely work!
Hope your wedding is/was wonderful!
16JilsenQuick question; towards the beginning it says, "as the elevator approached the floor Frank had been on ..." Should that read "Chet" instead of "Frank?"
I loved Chief Collig in this chapter! I loved his whole conversation with Chet. It had me smiling and laughing at points. Great work! You are really good at fleshing out the various characters and bringing them to life.
Chet was great as he has been throughout this entire story. I loved his scene at the end and his sudden confidence. You have done such a great job with his character. Really lovely work!
Hope your wedding is/was wonderful!
5/19/2022 c21 Candylou
Chet definitely did his job really well and having chief collig there, helped also. So sad what rotten people can do to a good place. Hopefully, joe can help frank recover at least a little bit before fenton and especially laura and anna sees him. Update as soon as you can.
Chet definitely did his job really well and having chief collig there, helped also. So sad what rotten people can do to a good place. Hopefully, joe can help frank recover at least a little bit before fenton and especially laura and anna sees him. Update as soon as you can.
5/19/2022 c21 Xenitha
Poor Chet. They boys owe him a vacation after this.
Poor Chet. They boys owe him a vacation after this.
5/19/2022 c21 BMSH
Is it good or bad that I'm loving your chapters with Chet as the main character? You've done such a good job of fleshing (no pun intended to blue spine Chet) him out - or maybe he just has the best part of the story! Congratulations on your wedding!
Is it good or bad that I'm loving your chapters with Chet as the main character? You've done such a good job of fleshing (no pun intended to blue spine Chet) him out - or maybe he just has the best part of the story! Congratulations on your wedding!
5/19/2022 c21 sm2003495
First of all congratulations on your wedding..so happy to hear..and this was an awesome chapter. Despite not have frank or Joe in it :D. Ties up things really well..can't wait for the chapter in which Frank recovers :)
First of all congratulations on your wedding..so happy to hear..and this was an awesome chapter. Despite not have frank or Joe in it :D. Ties up things really well..can't wait for the chapter in which Frank recovers :)
4/17/2022 c20 Jilsen
An excellent chapter. Frank needed that anger from Joe. I'm happy Frank was able to recover, remarkably well, without medical intervention. If it were me, given his condition, he would have been in the hospital!
So, we still don't know what happened to Dr. Nash ...
An excellent chapter. Frank needed that anger from Joe. I'm happy Frank was able to recover, remarkably well, without medical intervention. If it were me, given his condition, he would have been in the hospital!
So, we still don't know what happened to Dr. Nash ...
4/15/2022 c20 33Xenitha
Nice to see Joe get some of his own back. Frank is the thinker, the intellectual, leaving Joe to rescue him. About time Frank got to see the other side of the coin. Any chance we can be a bug on the wall when Frank talks to his Dad?
33XenithaNice to see Joe get some of his own back. Frank is the thinker, the intellectual, leaving Joe to rescue him. About time Frank got to see the other side of the coin. Any chance we can be a bug on the wall when Frank talks to his Dad?
4/15/2022 c20 sm2003495
Yes! Glad Joe vented out..caregivers do t usually express their frustration and that impacts them a lot..and Frank was clever enough to understand. So glad that he is gng to be ok..hope they solve the mystery of the papers..and frank gains weight and goes to the gym soon..hard to see him like this :) great writing as always!
Yes! Glad Joe vented out..caregivers do t usually express their frustration and that impacts them a lot..and Frank was clever enough to understand. So glad that he is gng to be ok..hope they solve the mystery of the papers..and frank gains weight and goes to the gym soon..hard to see him like this :) great writing as always!
4/13/2022 c20 BMSH
Great chapter. Absolutely loved the anger radiating from Joe and Frank's absolute cluelessness. And wow he did give himself an eating disorder. Very cocky Frank!
Great chapter. Absolutely loved the anger radiating from Joe and Frank's absolute cluelessness. And wow he did give himself an eating disorder. Very cocky Frank!
4/13/2022 c20 MargaretA66
Wow, Joe's anger is understandable, but I did not expect that.
Congratulations on hte upcoming Wedding and I am glad you are finishing this excellent story. I enjoy your writing.
Wow, Joe's anger is understandable, but I did not expect that.
Congratulations on hte upcoming Wedding and I am glad you are finishing this excellent story. I enjoy your writing.