2/13/2020 c2 Guest
I like this so far, and it seems stupid and cliche, but will we get glimpses back at Remnant every chapter to see how people are handling his disapearance there? Maybe have some people come after him, maybe even have a chance of him getting back?
-Omega
I like this so far, and it seems stupid and cliche, but will we get glimpses back at Remnant every chapter to see how people are handling his disapearance there? Maybe have some people come after him, maybe even have a chance of him getting back?
-Omega
2/14/2020 c2 10MM Browsing
this probably the best if not thy best betray jaune fic i ever read.
the rwby gang didn't become a bitchy out of nowhere nor they didn't really become one
you did within character and realistic way
you bring out their flaw and weakness of their character
it make me wish someone make a reaction rwby theater as the older rwby gang like from vol 7 watch the younger rwby character from vol 1 make them realize how much they grow up from their weak and pity self and know jaune can become a great huntman as any of them.
Dr. Marcoh, is he Tim Marcoh, formerly the Crystal Alchemist? BTW does Dr. Marcoh also learn dust weaving as well. i won't be surprise if Dr. Marcoh and jaune combine dust/glyphs and Alchemist
maybe make a substitutes dust
BTW how far is marcoh into space-time and what can he use it for
like can he teleport
Bone Weaver Alchemist, i'm guessing jaune is a super doctor able to heal people and also empower himself and other to become super strong and fast including their alchemist
if you do make a sequel and jaune return i wonder if jaune become young again and only a day as past in remnants
how much jaune learn Alchemy
just fun to imagine how strong and what effect alchemy react to rwby gang and the world
Amestrian alchemy and Xingese alkahestry
Ishvalan
does jaune have Ishvalan tattoo so on
this probably the best if not thy best betray jaune fic i ever read.
the rwby gang didn't become a bitchy out of nowhere nor they didn't really become one
you did within character and realistic way
you bring out their flaw and weakness of their character
it make me wish someone make a reaction rwby theater as the older rwby gang like from vol 7 watch the younger rwby character from vol 1 make them realize how much they grow up from their weak and pity self and know jaune can become a great huntman as any of them.
Dr. Marcoh, is he Tim Marcoh, formerly the Crystal Alchemist? BTW does Dr. Marcoh also learn dust weaving as well. i won't be surprise if Dr. Marcoh and jaune combine dust/glyphs and Alchemist
maybe make a substitutes dust
BTW how far is marcoh into space-time and what can he use it for
like can he teleport
Bone Weaver Alchemist, i'm guessing jaune is a super doctor able to heal people and also empower himself and other to become super strong and fast including their alchemist
if you do make a sequel and jaune return i wonder if jaune become young again and only a day as past in remnants
how much jaune learn Alchemy
just fun to imagine how strong and what effect alchemy react to rwby gang and the world
Amestrian alchemy and Xingese alkahestry
Ishvalan
does jaune have Ishvalan tattoo so on
2/14/2020 c2 DivineWhiskey
What limbs did Jaune lose, maybe two mechanical arms to be different from Edward. It would be badass to be a swordsman with two metal arms. Maybe make the arms a alloy so Pyrrha can’t manipulate it
What limbs did Jaune lose, maybe two mechanical arms to be different from Edward. It would be badass to be a swordsman with two metal arms. Maybe make the arms a alloy so Pyrrha can’t manipulate it
2/13/2020 c1 MM Browsing
what i want to know did jaune's friend leave a good note instead of being betray
which i hope is the later and not the former since i seen plenty of betray fic on jaune already or at least more realistic in character
so i vote yes with the flashback
second is what can jaune do with alchemist and semblance. how jaune grow from there
third what up with the glove
what i want to know did jaune's friend leave a good note instead of being betray
which i hope is the later and not the former since i seen plenty of betray fic on jaune already or at least more realistic in character
so i vote yes with the flashback
second is what can jaune do with alchemist and semblance. how jaune grow from there
third what up with the glove
2/13/2020 c1 X3runner
Bone Weaver Sounds interesting can’t wait for the next chapter kinda hoping it’s Like kimimaro from naruto
Bone Weaver Sounds interesting can’t wait for the next chapter kinda hoping it’s Like kimimaro from naruto
2/13/2020 c1 DivineWhiskey
Perhaps Jaune could be hanging out with Maria Ross when Hughes finds out the truth, and goes with him when he sees him freaking out and saves him from envy
Perhaps Jaune could be hanging out with Maria Ross when Hughes finds out the truth, and goes with him when he sees him freaking out and saves him from envy
2/12/2020 c1 the-lost-memories6
I think giving a chapter that explains how jaune got there would be better, flash backs Are not always the brst.
I think giving a chapter that explains how jaune got there would be better, flash backs Are not always the brst.