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1/20 c38 Emperor sasuke
good writing and disappointing story, sorry i am done here.
1/20 c37 Emperor sasuke
so much for a good chapter.
1/20 c36 Emperor sasuke
the disappointment i felt in this chapter is more than anything i felt until now, so much bs trying make people happy.
1/20 c35 Emperor sasuke
i would have liked it if you write the psychopath, murder and insane adam taurus, rather than this mess, he is becoming boring after his 'character development', just plain boring, submissve and victim. like i said blake not feeling anything about him in the first place is big fat bs, this story would have been better if adam is with blake or no one. "i want to chase blake to beacon" is just nil to me now, it's just to make adam fit in the academy and nothing else. it doesn't matter if adam love blake or not, his reasoning coming for beacon and What he is doing in the first place doesn't make sense.
1/19 c34 Emperor sasuke
"if yang was hurt, they would see one", i cringe at this.
1/19 c32 Emperor sasuke
thanks for the chapter, as always adam x blake.
1/19 c32 Emperor sasuke
Please author don't write that excuse "character development", something's don't have to change, to make them develp
1/19 c31 Emperor sasuke
lol
1/19 c30 Emperor sasuke
"they threatened my team", i don't know What to say, this is just sad.
1/19 c29 Emperor sasuke
thank you for the chapter, as usual i am disappointed at blake.
1/19 c28 Emperor sasuke
two problems, first the whole anti blake x adam thing is backfiring, i don't know what do you want with the romantic part but i still see and feel in your story adam still loves blake, yes that's What i get, the most disappointing thing in this story is adam not confronting blake in the first place when he see her, that just seem some plot hole to make adam and his team more close like a family, it just seem to me bull that adam in that time caring about anything other than confronting blake, the second yang and adam, i don't know Where to start, *sigh* it's just wasn't working to me, like yang consider adam asshole, broody,
edgy kind a guy and make fun of him, and he counterattack with his own snark, then they began training like good friends, then one day they out, drink, have sex, then suddenly yang loved him, and the worst part is "maybe there was something to her idea" holy, i just cringed, CRINGED, it just seem forced, you know i don't even once, in this entire chapter 28, feel or think that adam love yang. i will be blunt i think you are afraid to make this adam x blake story for whatever reason, and you are making them hate each other, blake point of view about adam seem weird, like she is seeing stranger rather than her partner two problems, first the whole anti blake x adam thing is backfiring, i don't know what do you want with the romantic part but i still see and feel in your story adam still loves blake, yes that's What i get, the most disappointing thing in this story is adam not confronting blake in the first place when he see her, that just seem some plot hole to make adam and his team more close like a family, it just seem to me bull that adam in that time caring about anything other than confronting blake, the second yang and adam, i don't know Where to start, *sigh* it's just wasn't working to me, like yang consider adam asshole, broody,
edgy kind a guy and make fun of him, and he counterattack with his own snark, then they began training like good friends, then one day they out, drink, have sex, then suddenly yang loved him, and the worst part is "maybe there was something to her idea" holy, i just cringed, CRINGED, it just seem forced, you know i don't even once, in this entire chapter 28, feel or think that adam love yang. i will be blunt i think you are afraid to make this adam x blake story for whatever reason, and you are making them hate each other, blake point of view about adam seem weird, like she is seeing stranger rather than her partner in crime and lover who shared same goal with her at some point of time. his 'obsession' over blake seem more of love than his 'love' for yang. thank you, it's pain in the ass writing English (even if you call it that.)
1/18 c18 Emperor sasuke
genius, absolute maniac genius author. yes, i fell the emotion there...ahhahhahahahahahaha.
1/18 c13 Guest
this is great considering you are dealing with difficult character.
1/18 c9 Emperor sasuke
thanks for the chapter.
1/18 c7 Guest
thanks for the chapter
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