for The Beast of Beacon3/20 c41 Onomatopoeia007
This was such an unique story.
It's too rare to see Adam as the MC, fanfic use him as a plot device so the MC can get closer to blake and most time he's the average punch clock villain that gets curb-stomped by the hero.
He's redemption was well written, all the fight scenes were he was involved were awesome and his relationship with Yang was enjoyable.
I never expected the day where someone would write Velvet and Coco as the antagonist of an story but you surely made it well. Cinder went down as the insufferable jackass and Ironwood acted like the serious but not downright antagonist he was in the latter volumes.
Thank you for writting this.
This was such an unique story.
It's too rare to see Adam as the MC, fanfic use him as a plot device so the MC can get closer to blake and most time he's the average punch clock villain that gets curb-stomped by the hero.
He's redemption was well written, all the fight scenes were he was involved were awesome and his relationship with Yang was enjoyable.
I never expected the day where someone would write Velvet and Coco as the antagonist of an story but you surely made it well. Cinder went down as the insufferable jackass and Ironwood acted like the serious but not downright antagonist he was in the latter volumes.
Thank you for writting this.
3/20 c40 Onomatopoeia007
Such an amazing last battle, Cinder really got treated as the superpowerful idiot she was in the series.
I wonder how this will end.
Such an amazing last battle, Cinder really got treated as the superpowerful idiot she was in the series.
I wonder how this will end.
3/20 c37 Onomatopoeia007
Sure, try to take on the guy who used to be the boogeyman of the White Fang for years.
It surely can't go wrong.
Sure, try to take on the guy who used to be the boogeyman of the White Fang for years.
It surely can't go wrong.
3/20 c35 Onomatopoeia007
Please not again.
I was screaming bloody murder when the bastards killed Penny twice, don't make watch it again!
Please not again.
I was screaming bloody murder when the bastards killed Penny twice, don't make watch it again!
3/20 c34 Onomatopoeia007
Taken as hostage? Maybe.
Busy dealing with racists or the white fang? Probably.
Incoming grimm attack? Ohhh boy, surely it is.
Taken as hostage? Maybe.
Busy dealing with racists or the white fang? Probably.
Incoming grimm attack? Ohhh boy, surely it is.
3/19 c31 Onomatopoeia007
He just has to take off the mask to make the Schnees look like devils... but now he has bonded with Weiss and something like that would murder her reputation.
He just has to take off the mask to make the Schnees look like devils... but now he has bonded with Weiss and something like that would murder her reputation.