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5/9 c4 1Boid Man
Loving this! Can't wait to see what fresh hell Pit is gling to wake up to!
5/5 c4 1Hurtturnip
Hey everyone Hurtturnip here just to let you know that pls do post reviews as it helps me to correct my errors
See ya
4/14 c2 Gnaw55617
I like this story so far, it's actually kinda cute seeing how the character act around one another casually. I like how Viridi is acting towards pit, it reminds me of what people call a tsundere.

One thing i also find interesting is that pit is somewhat curious about his origin and who is parents are and the phenomenon around it like the split forest, it feels like it's building up to lead into something interesting.

This is a nice small story I'll be sticking around for, it's a great way to make your first fanfic, hopefully the chapters will be a bit longer, but small steps. I wish you luck on this fanfic
8/10

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