for One Night Stand9/20/2008 c3 Stephycats7785
So clark doesnt know? This makes things interesting, and about my review last chapter it was my mistake, I didnt realize he was talking bout Lois not her
So clark doesnt know? This makes things interesting, and about my review last chapter it was my mistake, I didnt realize he was talking bout Lois not her
9/20/2008 c2 Stephycats7785
I liked this. I do have one question..he called her Ms Lane not Ms Sullivan why is that?
I liked this. I do have one question..he called her Ms Lane not Ms Sullivan why is that?
8/9/2008 c7 b4 Dawn 101
Very interesting story, but I don't think Lex would have proposed to Chloe after a day. I wish you would have given some time for their relationship to develop more.
It could have been better, but I liked it.
Very interesting story, but I don't think Lex would have proposed to Chloe after a day. I wish you would have given some time for their relationship to develop more.
It could have been better, but I liked it.
12/28/2006 c7 
19kekamarie
This was horribly written. I thik you should get a beta who will help you. Also you spelled things wrong like Luthor you spelled it Luther. You are making the story go by way to fast slow it down some. No one in their right mind would agree to a marriage proposal when they haven't seen the guy in 3 years. Sorry but this is just my feelings on your fic.
19kekamarieThis was horribly written. I thik you should get a beta who will help you. Also you spelled things wrong like Luthor you spelled it Luther. You are making the story go by way to fast slow it down some. No one in their right mind would agree to a marriage proposal when they haven't seen the guy in 3 years. Sorry but this is just my feelings on your fic.
3/22/2004 c7 autumngold
Thank you for this wonderful story! I love your happy ending! Lex and Chloe together and in love! Those are always the best stories! Thank you for writing!
Thank you for this wonderful story! I love your happy ending! Lex and Chloe together and in love! Those are always the best stories! Thank you for writing!
9/13/2003 c7 1scifichick774
*arched eyebrow*
That's it? That's the end?
*grumbles*
And here I was hoping to see Clark and Lois get hurt somehow...I know, I know, not an angst fic. Still, good job. :)
1scifichick774*arched eyebrow*
That's it? That's the end?
*grumbles*
And here I was hoping to see Clark and Lois get hurt somehow...I know, I know, not an angst fic. Still, good job. :)
9/13/2003 c6 scifichick774
Hmm...the convo between Chloe and Gabe should be very interesting.
And - as much as I dislike the guy - at least Clark helped Chloe out.
Hmm...the convo between Chloe and Gabe should be very interesting.
And - as much as I dislike the guy - at least Clark helped Chloe out.
9/13/2003 c5 scifichick774
Hee.
He loves her. So sweet. And I can see why Chloe would be stunned at the admission.
Hee.
He loves her. So sweet. And I can see why Chloe would be stunned at the admission.