
12/25/2024 c24 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see you back! Enjoyed how you set up the situation where Delia ended up killing for the first time. Thought the Force nudges were very well done, along with the random homicidal violence. Rather sad to see Delia so affected, and I'm sure there will be all sorts of repercussions from this, but at least she's not a sociopath... Update soon please! Looking forward to seeing what all you are going to do with this!
Excellent chapter! Glad to see you back! Enjoyed how you set up the situation where Delia ended up killing for the first time. Thought the Force nudges were very well done, along with the random homicidal violence. Rather sad to see Delia so affected, and I'm sure there will be all sorts of repercussions from this, but at least she's not a sociopath... Update soon please! Looking forward to seeing what all you are going to do with this!
12/25/2024 c24 Heptameron
Yaaaaay update,
thanks i really like galactic politics.
and seeing the effects of it going around is great
Yaaaaay update,
thanks i really like galactic politics.
and seeing the effects of it going around is great
12/25/2024 c24
25NewMystery356
Hm, I wonder if that “Emperor” reading is Fixed, or if “in motion, the future is”. Because a bunch of randos wanting to kill them THIS SOON could be pretty telling…

Hm, I wonder if that “Emperor” reading is Fixed, or if “in motion, the future is”. Because a bunch of randos wanting to kill them THIS SOON could be pretty telling…
12/25/2024 c24
4EricFreak
Merry christmas, and thanks for the chapter. Delia seems to be in a pinch, but only she can sort herself out. It's still good she has a support system though.

Merry christmas, and thanks for the chapter. Delia seems to be in a pinch, but only she can sort herself out. It's still good she has a support system though.
12/25/2024 c8
13yukicrewger2
To my knowledge, white lightsaber blades are for those that the true force (not the light or dark side) grants through meddling to certain force users who practice the true balance between light and dark.
The first canon white lightsaber that I can think of belonged to former Padawan Tano. She was Anakin's padawan during the clone wars and she left the order to do her own thing. She healed a sith kyber crystal to use for her dual wielding style and the resulting blade was white.

To my knowledge, white lightsaber blades are for those that the true force (not the light or dark side) grants through meddling to certain force users who practice the true balance between light and dark.
The first canon white lightsaber that I can think of belonged to former Padawan Tano. She was Anakin's padawan during the clone wars and she left the order to do her own thing. She healed a sith kyber crystal to use for her dual wielding style and the resulting blade was white.
12/25/2024 c24
3LongNightDragon
The first kill is never the easiest. Things are moving fast and it may not be the Force causing them.

The first kill is never the easiest. Things are moving fast and it may not be the Force causing them.
12/25/2024 c24 firelordeg
Thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue as soon as life allows. Merry Christmas! Have a good holiday.
Thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue as soon as life allows. Merry Christmas! Have a good holiday.
12/25/2024 c24 It was Guff
You’re back! Glad to see the notification for this one. A good chapter too, don’t worry too much about how long it took. You got it out in one piece, that’s what matters. Looking forward to more, and Merry Christmas!
You’re back! Glad to see the notification for this one. A good chapter too, don’t worry too much about how long it took. You got it out in one piece, that’s what matters. Looking forward to more, and Merry Christmas!
12/25/2024 c24
8T-Biggz
I feel like you're missing a key opportunity with Anakin in some way and I can't really put it in words.
Anakin spent most of his time as a Youngling and Padawan focusing more on his lightsaber training and here you have him doing the same thing a couple chapters back when he now has the opportunity to delve deeper into the force, like you alluded to at the near beginning of this story, and every time that opportunity comes around you have him simply ignore it.
I don't know. Maybe you have a long term plan cooked up somewhere and I have to wait to see the results, the only problem was the distance between this chapter and the last one.
As for Delia's trauma... you handled as well as anyone else can given the circumstances. Your reasoning was sound and how it was expressed by all parties was on point, I just feel like this is something where crucial character flaws can be brought to the forefront and addressed if approached correctly.

I feel like you're missing a key opportunity with Anakin in some way and I can't really put it in words.
Anakin spent most of his time as a Youngling and Padawan focusing more on his lightsaber training and here you have him doing the same thing a couple chapters back when he now has the opportunity to delve deeper into the force, like you alluded to at the near beginning of this story, and every time that opportunity comes around you have him simply ignore it.
I don't know. Maybe you have a long term plan cooked up somewhere and I have to wait to see the results, the only problem was the distance between this chapter and the last one.
As for Delia's trauma... you handled as well as anyone else can given the circumstances. Your reasoning was sound and how it was expressed by all parties was on point, I just feel like this is something where crucial character flaws can be brought to the forefront and addressed if approached correctly.