for The Adventures of Augment Gothic (A Star Trek SI)11h c1 hilgahilmaus
Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous -emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention, this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.
Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous -emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention, this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.
6/18 c49 
1Dark White Fang
I may be mistaken but I though that Gothic's sword and knife did have an antiproton edge not a plasma one. And if I remember right, antiproton doesn't cauterize the cut, the effect is more "like God took a scoop out of the flesh" or something like that.
1Dark White FangI may be mistaken but I though that Gothic's sword and knife did have an antiproton edge not a plasma one. And if I remember right, antiproton doesn't cauterize the cut, the effect is more "like God took a scoop out of the flesh" or something like that.
6/17 c59 39tutcat
Android’s that can get pregnant (Armatig 3) which also gives you SOBsisters of battle)
But he has to get at least 1 or two ED209’s for boarding
39tutcatAndroid’s that can get pregnant (Armatig 3) which also gives you SOBsisters of battle)
But he has to get at least 1 or two ED209’s for boarding
6/16 c1 Guest
I really hope the trend to fave full introspections(?) in the middle of a conversation wouldn't continue. I get it that it's to show how fast his brain is now but... when you get back at the conversation i have to also go back to see who is talking and what was the subject.
Anyway with that said, i would still read it though reluctantly (VERY reluctantly!) and probably skip those. *Shrugs* what can i say? It's a good story (at least from the first ch) and i like the style(?) of it.
I really hope the trend to fave full introspections(?) in the middle of a conversation wouldn't continue. I get it that it's to show how fast his brain is now but... when you get back at the conversation i have to also go back to see who is talking and what was the subject.
Anyway with that said, i would still read it though reluctantly (VERY reluctantly!) and probably skip those. *Shrugs* what can i say? It's a good story (at least from the first ch) and i like the style(?) of it.
6/13 c59 Belthazor2
For the crazy guest reviewer:
Seek some help man. All fanfics die an early dead. And that's fine. Authors don't get paid. Life gets in the way. No reason to start leaving reviews like a meth addict.
For Joe:
Thanks for all the work so far. It has its ups and downs but keep it up.
For the crazy guest reviewer:
Seek some help man. All fanfics die an early dead. And that's fine. Authors don't get paid. Life gets in the way. No reason to start leaving reviews like a meth addict.
For Joe:
Thanks for all the work so far. It has its ups and downs but keep it up.
6/12 c59 SageLevi
Awesome story man, so much reread value and so many ways the story can go! I hope we get regular updates as I’ll be here the whole way
Awesome story man, so much reread value and so many ways the story can go! I hope we get regular updates as I’ll be here the whole way
6/11 c59 Guest
Sadly methinks the last commenter is right, these missing updates do not portend well for the story’s continuation. Which is a shame, I’ve been following this for about 2 years now and I’d hate to see this wither on the vine. Really hope I’m wrong in my prognostication.
Sadly methinks the last commenter is right, these missing updates do not portend well for the story’s continuation. Which is a shame, I’ve been following this for about 2 years now and I’d hate to see this wither on the vine. Really hope I’m wrong in my prognostication.
6/11 c59 Guest
Usually when a fic starts missing scheduled updates (especially on a generous once per month one) it means the fic is going to die soon.
RIP, I enjoyed the story up to this point... o7
Usually when a fic starts missing scheduled updates (especially on a generous once per month one) it means the fic is going to die soon.
RIP, I enjoyed the story up to this point... o7
6/9 c1 Guest
The story was getting somewhere and it’s late again. Disappointed, hope it’s not a 2 month wait like last time. Again.
The story was getting somewhere and it’s late again. Disappointed, hope it’s not a 2 month wait like last time. Again.
6/8 c59 Maverick123214685
Romulans already had micro singularity cores. So they may come out with much more powerful ships soon, as examining collector cores could give them the boost they need to make them / husnock quality cores.
If starfleet get extra annoying he should call sloan and offer to trade a klingon inflitration for help making them back off. (The minos klingon attack he linked to starfleet’s visit but wanted to keep quiet at the time)
If bajor join the federation, unless he can make multiple additions to the articles of joining (such as the ones that let the andorrians keep their imperial fleet) he might be best served publicly claiming the planet minos for himself, and the neighbouring planets (which he mines) as the gothic empire (population 1). Might be best to try and recall any minos citizens first, to firm up his position via a proper election (though supported by many bribes). Given its sales record, I doubt it is part of the federation.
He should rescue the other augments from federation facilities and bring them to minos. And leave option for others who are oppressed to come. He should free other augs like jack and patrick from institute and bring to either minos or a world near minos that they can claim and protect. Let them have unrestricted internet etc. give them good lives.
Romulans already had micro singularity cores. So they may come out with much more powerful ships soon, as examining collector cores could give them the boost they need to make them / husnock quality cores.
If starfleet get extra annoying he should call sloan and offer to trade a klingon inflitration for help making them back off. (The minos klingon attack he linked to starfleet’s visit but wanted to keep quiet at the time)
If bajor join the federation, unless he can make multiple additions to the articles of joining (such as the ones that let the andorrians keep their imperial fleet) he might be best served publicly claiming the planet minos for himself, and the neighbouring planets (which he mines) as the gothic empire (population 1). Might be best to try and recall any minos citizens first, to firm up his position via a proper election (though supported by many bribes). Given its sales record, I doubt it is part of the federation.
He should rescue the other augments from federation facilities and bring them to minos. And leave option for others who are oppressed to come. He should free other augs like jack and patrick from institute and bring to either minos or a world near minos that they can claim and protect. Let them have unrestricted internet etc. give them good lives.
6/7 c1 Guest
61 hasn't dropped on patron it seems. Another late chapter. Not looking good.
61 hasn't dropped on patron it seems. Another late chapter. Not looking good.
6/1 c59 Guest
How about giving Pressman something to do, to keep him busy, to make him worry, to totally stress him out?
Make tens of thousands of small orders of various things and have them shipped all over the place, from anywhere to anywhere, as long as it goes through Federation space.
Include things that could be used for questionable things, still perfectly legal of course and with all the required paperwork.
Include things that make no sense but sound highly suspicious, especially to someone who already thinks the worst of you.
Include things that simply make no sense at all and are all the more suspicious for it (like sending a small container full of nothing but sand to a desert planet to be dumped on a worthless useless plot of land Gothic bought for pennies).
And include things that are perfectly harmless and where no tariffs, taxes or anything will need to be paid, because it's destined for some charitable cause - which Pressman will not want to believe or will make him look for an ulterior motive.
Oh, and include some shipments that will make Pressman know that you are bullshitting him, like sending refrigerators to the Inuit or coals to Newcastle.
And maybe some thoughtful gifts to Starfleet, like some of those holotools for selected officers - maybe with the request to test and review.
And have many things shipped that could easily have been replicated in whatever place their destined for. Make Pressman wonder why they weren't replicated...
How about giving Pressman something to do, to keep him busy, to make him worry, to totally stress him out?
Make tens of thousands of small orders of various things and have them shipped all over the place, from anywhere to anywhere, as long as it goes through Federation space.
Include things that could be used for questionable things, still perfectly legal of course and with all the required paperwork.
Include things that make no sense but sound highly suspicious, especially to someone who already thinks the worst of you.
Include things that simply make no sense at all and are all the more suspicious for it (like sending a small container full of nothing but sand to a desert planet to be dumped on a worthless useless plot of land Gothic bought for pennies).
And include things that are perfectly harmless and where no tariffs, taxes or anything will need to be paid, because it's destined for some charitable cause - which Pressman will not want to believe or will make him look for an ulterior motive.
Oh, and include some shipments that will make Pressman know that you are bullshitting him, like sending refrigerators to the Inuit or coals to Newcastle.
And maybe some thoughtful gifts to Starfleet, like some of those holotools for selected officers - maybe with the request to test and review.
And have many things shipped that could easily have been replicated in whatever place their destined for. Make Pressman wonder why they weren't replicated...
5/24 c59 Just guessing
I’m really loving this story as I hope for more chapters to come. But I was wondering if you’ll do a story where a OC is reborn as the infamous villain from DC Comics Lex Luthor cause I would love to see a story like that plus I’ve rarely seen save for one story regarding Superman’s villain being reborn which in of itself is unique.
I’m really loving this story as I hope for more chapters to come. But I was wondering if you’ll do a story where a OC is reborn as the infamous villain from DC Comics Lex Luthor cause I would love to see a story like that plus I’ve rarely seen save for one story regarding Superman’s villain being reborn which in of itself is unique.
5/15 c8 Swill123
Immensely disappointed with the size of his ship. It's only 40ft longer than the Falcon(which probably has basically the same interior volume)! Is his goal to have a crew? If so then it seems really REALLY small. Especially for Star Trek where ships are MASSIVE.
Immensely disappointed with the size of his ship. It's only 40ft longer than the Falcon(which probably has basically the same interior volume)! Is his goal to have a crew? If so then it seems really REALLY small. Especially for Star Trek where ships are MASSIVE.