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3/2 c1 17Unicadia
I've been meaning to review more of your stories! :)
I love the idea behind this - swapping what we usually think of with Jehan and Bahorel. I love juxtapositions and turning expectations on their heads, and that is what I love about this piece. Awesome job!
2/28 c1 11civilizedrevolutionary
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I - AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

This? Is? Amazing? And so so heart-wrenching and beautiful and - the friendship feels and Bahorel's worry and Jehan's impatience to DO something I just - I love the rhyme and the little argument between them. I love Bahorel's sudden protectiveness, and Jehan's absolute determination to fight because even though he's a poet he's intrepid and will stand his ground in a fight - you have slain me. I think this is one of my favorite poems of yours I've read so far! So much feeling and complexity comes across in this and I LOVE IT and want to make everyone else on this planet read it and love it too. :D

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