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3/3 c10 Guest
Arghhh this such a cool story! Will you be continuing this? Because I really like the concept and your writing is great!
1/22/2021 c10 50acosta perez jose ramiro
It's always good when Becky and Tobey can actually have a conversation that ends in a somewhat nice manner.

Keep the good writing.
1/11/2021 c1 3Thornz49
Welcome to Fair City!
9/4/2020 c9 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Very nice chapter here. Sure, it's not easy for Tobey, but this is the nicest he has been to Becky in forever.

Keep the good writing.
8/25/2020 c8 guest
i love this story! i never considered how becky and tobey could bond over not having a complete set of biological parents — very interesting. you’ve done a great job
6/29/2020 c8 18EmpressLoveSiren23
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6/5/2020 c8 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Nice one, and yeah, Becky is far more understanding than Tobey realizes, and she had needed to come up with excuses and 'quick emergency measures' because of her double life, so she's unlikely to snitch on Tobey as long as he compromises to watch his behavior.

Keep the good writing
3/20/2020 c7 acosta perez jose ramiro
Cool update, and yeah, Claire is obviously hesitant about telling Theodore about the robots, specially since Tobey uses them for criminal acts, and Theodore might blame himself that.

Keep the good writing.
3/9/2020 c6 2adrienna73
This was great. I feel like this story with have lots of character development in it.
3/7/2020 c6 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Good one here. And yeah, Tobey's parents are treating each other in a very business-like manner.

Keep the good writing.
3/6/2020 c5 acosta perez jose ramiro
Good chapter here, and nice idea about having Claire's point of view

Keep the good writing.
3/5/2020 c4 acosta perez jose ramiro
Another good one. Yeah, WG should probably tell Tobey how she met his dad, since he's surely seeing him later and Tobey will find out anyway.

Keep the good writing.
3/1/2020 c3 acosta perez jose ramiro
Yeah, guess Mr McCallister will not react kindly when he learns his son is a supervillain. He'll probably blame himself for not being there to help educate the boy.

Keep the good writing.
2/28/2020 c2 acosta perez jose ramiro
Another good one, and yeah, Tobey really doesn't know how to appreciate when someone shows him some basic human decency, mostly because he rarely shows it himself.

Keep the good writing.
2/27/2020 c1 acosta perez jose ramiro
Whoa, this was quite a surprise.

Keep the good writing.

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