for Save scumming? It's on my character sheet6/20 c174 
1DemonRaily
How the fuck is he going to get out of this one? Shirou despite the constant Flanderisation is not a master chef, but he is still an amazing home cook all the same.
1DemonRailyHow the fuck is he going to get out of this one? Shirou despite the constant Flanderisation is not a master chef, but he is still an amazing home cook all the same.
6/13 c173 6Xorn
Sol D Mars It's just the title Hieda prefers. His class is Caster, he's just got a thing about magic (he hates it).
6XornSol D Mars It's just the title Hieda prefers. His class is Caster, he's just got a thing about magic (he hates it).
6/12 c31 Guest
Too fast paced. Way too fast. The action is nearly non-existent with few lines covering it all and this is a Fate fic!
Too fast paced. Way too fast. The action is nearly non-existent with few lines covering it all and this is a Fate fic!
6/11 c21 2DBoblivion
ah shit! this is the second time Ive seen a servant with command seals, the last time was a JP Emiya in Apocrypha fic which was peak despite using google translate. This fight was pretty good
2DBoblivionah shit! this is the second time Ive seen a servant with command seals, the last time was a JP Emiya in Apocrypha fic which was peak despite using google translate. This fight was pretty good
6/11 c8 DBoblivion
subaru really wouldve fit in Team A with how much of a blend of weird and normal he is.
although instead of 'made a deal with a demon named shaytan' it might be better to include a 'type of demon called shaytinsince shaytan is just a title used for any evil being 'especially iblis but used for some evil humans. Shaytin/een is the plural for shaytan of and is comprised of mostly djinn, among them are Iblis's decsendants as well. as humans who are his minions
subaru really wouldve fit in Team A with how much of a blend of weird and normal he is.
although instead of 'made a deal with a demon named shaytan' it might be better to include a 'type of demon called shaytinsince shaytan is just a title used for any evil being 'especially iblis but used for some evil humans. Shaytin/een is the plural for shaytan of and is comprised of mostly djinn, among them are Iblis's decsendants as well. as humans who are his minions
6/10 c173 1DemonRaily
Having some Recorder character moments is nice. Also him only being summoned once before should mean he more or less remembers his entire summoning even of he disassociates from it?
1DemonRailyHaving some Recorder character moments is nice. Also him only being summoned once before should mean he more or less remembers his entire summoning even of he disassociates from it?
6/6 c1 Z.L.C. genesmith
Here's a fun new rumor for you!
The Pleiades Watcher gets sniped by a newly summoned Servant. The Servant then makes HER way to Subaru and Miyako, (even a cursory glance is enough to confirm that the Servant in question is most definitely female in every possible way) to report her takedown of the Pleiades Watcher, in the hopes of getting Subaru to form a contract with her, all while hiding the ulterior motive of wanting to get into his pants, for reasons that even she doesn't fully understand! (The reason, is that a number of the Witch factors inside Subaru are drawing the Servant to him like catnip!)
Here's a fun new rumor for you!
The Pleiades Watcher gets sniped by a newly summoned Servant. The Servant then makes HER way to Subaru and Miyako, (even a cursory glance is enough to confirm that the Servant in question is most definitely female in every possible way) to report her takedown of the Pleiades Watcher, in the hopes of getting Subaru to form a contract with her, all while hiding the ulterior motive of wanting to get into his pants, for reasons that even she doesn't fully understand! (The reason, is that a number of the Witch factors inside Subaru are drawing the Servant to him like catnip!)
6/4 c171 2thus dud
Double upload very nice
Tatari?(tokyo ghoul again!) Pleiades watcher Tezcatlipoca. Insane stuff. The pacing and creativity have been stellar since okeanos started. Dust of Osiris& The books of the dead in the same singularity is such a good crossover. "Save all of the primates", great line, so stoked for act 3.
Recorder put in an all-star performance, he definitley should taunt Subaru some. Love the cast for the arc, very fresh, lot of good mystery with them. Zombie Pepe, ghost pepe and rumor pepe. We're eating so good.
2thus dudDouble upload very nice
Tatari?(tokyo ghoul again!) Pleiades watcher Tezcatlipoca. Insane stuff. The pacing and creativity have been stellar since okeanos started. Dust of Osiris& The books of the dead in the same singularity is such a good crossover. "Save all of the primates", great line, so stoked for act 3.
Recorder put in an all-star performance, he definitley should taunt Subaru some. Love the cast for the arc, very fresh, lot of good mystery with them. Zombie Pepe, ghost pepe and rumor pepe. We're eating so good.
6/2 c171 1DemonRaily
How many Peperonicos are running around there? We have a dead one, alive one with Romani and another one who goes by his real name robbing the imperial palace.
1DemonRailyHow many Peperonicos are running around there? We have a dead one, alive one with Romani and another one who goes by his real name robbing the imperial palace.
5/29 c169 KeepbreathingIasrio
This is really good, I just read the entire thing over a few days and it really surprised me, originally I was keeping it as a secondary one, reading the smaller chapters when I didn't have time for the other Fate fic I was reading, but I kept finding myself more excited for this story rather than the other, and originally it surprised me, since I'm not that big of a fan of crossovers, so really, congratulations, this is really good.
As I said, I really liked the story, Prelati was the perfect mix between a enduring antagonist that the audience eventually likes for its charisma and the made to be hated character, I still want his head on a pike, but that's a job well done I would say, Greedbaru/Rigel was dealt with quicker than I imagined, specially with how long Orleans took, but I would say he was handled well, his romance with Medea was a very interesting interpretation that I liked it, correct me if I'm wrong, but Rem's new body turned to look like Satella right before this began, correct? that is the interpretation I got off with because of the whole something happened that it shouldn't, but at the same time, what is happening now seems to suggest she turned into Emilia instead because people at Chaldea thought they were the same.
My ramblings aside, I liked it, hope you have a good day or night, and I shall patiently wait for the next chapter.
(Also, the event from 2009 is probably related to Miyako right, if I were to guess it also involves why Fujimaru isn't here, considering what Gudako said in that Valentine's day portion I assume she is one of the 2 mentioned here, the other either being Gudao or some other character from Type-Moon lore I don't know)
(Also also, I'm pretty sure this is my first comment in this site, and I don't quite know the exact manners of here, so I hope I'm not messing anything up)
This is really good, I just read the entire thing over a few days and it really surprised me, originally I was keeping it as a secondary one, reading the smaller chapters when I didn't have time for the other Fate fic I was reading, but I kept finding myself more excited for this story rather than the other, and originally it surprised me, since I'm not that big of a fan of crossovers, so really, congratulations, this is really good.
As I said, I really liked the story, Prelati was the perfect mix between a enduring antagonist that the audience eventually likes for its charisma and the made to be hated character, I still want his head on a pike, but that's a job well done I would say, Greedbaru/Rigel was dealt with quicker than I imagined, specially with how long Orleans took, but I would say he was handled well, his romance with Medea was a very interesting interpretation that I liked it, correct me if I'm wrong, but Rem's new body turned to look like Satella right before this began, correct? that is the interpretation I got off with because of the whole something happened that it shouldn't, but at the same time, what is happening now seems to suggest she turned into Emilia instead because people at Chaldea thought they were the same.
My ramblings aside, I liked it, hope you have a good day or night, and I shall patiently wait for the next chapter.
(Also, the event from 2009 is probably related to Miyako right, if I were to guess it also involves why Fujimaru isn't here, considering what Gudako said in that Valentine's day portion I assume she is one of the 2 mentioned here, the other either being Gudao or some other character from Type-Moon lore I don't know)
(Also also, I'm pretty sure this is my first comment in this site, and I don't quite know the exact manners of here, so I hope I'm not messing anything up)