for Eye of the Storm11/10/2022 c7 Amit Barabi
I guess Star Elves are too rare to find? I mean, Callum does not need to be the one casting the spell if he can find someone who can.
I guess Star Elves are too rare to find? I mean, Callum does not need to be the one casting the spell if he can find someone who can.
11/8/2022 c3 Amit Barabi
If Callum improves his magic skills and connections to different types of magic, should his lifespan be increased? He is the first human to make these connections, right?
If Callum improves his magic skills and connections to different types of magic, should his lifespan be increased? He is the first human to make these connections, right?
11/8/2022 c2 Amit Barabi
I like your view over writing. I try to go by the same mindset.
Also, great chapter.
I like your view over writing. I try to go by the same mindset.
Also, great chapter.
10/18/2021 c10 Reader
Did you really have to kill so many of the dragonguard?
Did you really have to kill so many of the dragonguard?
11/11/2020 c10 NightOwlHope
Hi Ocaj, awesome chapter and quite a shocking type as well. Callum getting stabbed from Rayla, and Rayla in a close depressing state about the relationship. Now his blood on her blades. Hopefully you'll post more chapters dude. Can't wait to find out what else is next.
P.s. How you been since near Thanksgiving? From your opinion, what do you think of Callum and Rayla relationship so far? Love reading the fic dude! The chapters keeps getting more and more intense.
Keep on doing an Awesome job of the story man.
NightOwlHope Signing Off!
Hi Ocaj, awesome chapter and quite a shocking type as well. Callum getting stabbed from Rayla, and Rayla in a close depressing state about the relationship. Now his blood on her blades. Hopefully you'll post more chapters dude. Can't wait to find out what else is next.
P.s. How you been since near Thanksgiving? From your opinion, what do you think of Callum and Rayla relationship so far? Love reading the fic dude! The chapters keeps getting more and more intense.
Keep on doing an Awesome job of the story man.
NightOwlHope Signing Off!
10/19/2020 c10 WaffleOverlord
Just a little foreword, in about 3 years of this site I have never reviewed, only favorite and follow... so for me to be so enraptured and enthralled in this story is an achievement to be sure.
The story and it's twist are going great and the character development and drama are amazing, and I love how you are taking this whole "humans, elves, and arcanums" deal.
Encore please!
Just a little foreword, in about 3 years of this site I have never reviewed, only favorite and follow... so for me to be so enraptured and enthralled in this story is an achievement to be sure.
The story and it's twist are going great and the character development and drama are amazing, and I love how you are taking this whole "humans, elves, and arcanums" deal.
Encore please!
10/19/2020 c10 Brenne
Oh no! OH NO! What a mess! How will Callum, Ezran, Zym, and Rayla be able to fix all this? This is so nerve wracking! I've GOT to see what happens next! Looking forward to more! XD
Oh no! OH NO! What a mess! How will Callum, Ezran, Zym, and Rayla be able to fix all this? This is so nerve wracking! I've GOT to see what happens next! Looking forward to more! XD
10/19/2020 c10 Mateusz Weryski
what have you done to my heart?! I just can't wait to see if callum is gonna be still under the spell!
what have you done to my heart?! I just can't wait to see if callum is gonna be still under the spell!
10/19/2020 c10 
1Knighthunter911700
Bra, I had been reading old fanfics because the new ones were so bad, no story, just thriller. So when I got this new chapter I had such low expectations. Guess I stand, or lay, corrected. It is one of the best chapters and seeing that he has connected to the Star arcanum should give him resistance to charms, as he is the master of his own fate.
Also the fact that Rayla actually killed him shocked me. Love this chapter and I can’t wait to see the political shit storm that is soon to follow.
1Knighthunter911700Bra, I had been reading old fanfics because the new ones were so bad, no story, just thriller. So when I got this new chapter I had such low expectations. Guess I stand, or lay, corrected. It is one of the best chapters and seeing that he has connected to the Star arcanum should give him resistance to charms, as he is the master of his own fate.
Also the fact that Rayla actually killed him shocked me. Love this chapter and I can’t wait to see the political shit storm that is soon to follow.
10/19/2020 c10 Kacper983
Now that's a grim chapter if I ever saw one. Good thing that at least king, queen, and Zym are okay-ish. What happened to Callum really is heartbreaking. I know you suggested that Rayla will follow up on Bosor's words, but I personally don't keep much hope for that. In this situation, his words could mean anything, not to mention that Aerum Umbra would certainly ignore this tiny little bit of info, especially considering that Rayla was the only one to hear them. She could be easily accused of just being biased because of her romantic involvement.
Now, to Callum. For a moment, in the end, I thought that he'll return to the land of living as some sort of an astral being. I guess I played too much Final Fantasy lately, but I digress. Callum will be in an even worse position than he already was. Claudia will revive him, that's a given. What happens next, I can only guess. If she follows up with her plans to un-charm him, I wouldn't want to be in Callum's skin. IF he remembers what happened then, he will be broken in every sense of the word. Now, I'll toy with the "what would I do in his place". Three things, I would probably hunt down people responsible for what happened and all the dark mages I could find, write a letter to the Storm Spire explaining everything (not that it would be worth much in the king's eyes), and take my own life or just vanish from the face of the earth. I wouldn't be able to live with the knowledge of the things I, willingly or not, did. No idea how Callum's going to pull this off.
Oof, is it just me or this review got really dark?
It's also probably the longest review I ever wrote.
Now that's a grim chapter if I ever saw one. Good thing that at least king, queen, and Zym are okay-ish. What happened to Callum really is heartbreaking. I know you suggested that Rayla will follow up on Bosor's words, but I personally don't keep much hope for that. In this situation, his words could mean anything, not to mention that Aerum Umbra would certainly ignore this tiny little bit of info, especially considering that Rayla was the only one to hear them. She could be easily accused of just being biased because of her romantic involvement.
Now, to Callum. For a moment, in the end, I thought that he'll return to the land of living as some sort of an astral being. I guess I played too much Final Fantasy lately, but I digress. Callum will be in an even worse position than he already was. Claudia will revive him, that's a given. What happens next, I can only guess. If she follows up with her plans to un-charm him, I wouldn't want to be in Callum's skin. IF he remembers what happened then, he will be broken in every sense of the word. Now, I'll toy with the "what would I do in his place". Three things, I would probably hunt down people responsible for what happened and all the dark mages I could find, write a letter to the Storm Spire explaining everything (not that it would be worth much in the king's eyes), and take my own life or just vanish from the face of the earth. I wouldn't be able to live with the knowledge of the things I, willingly or not, did. No idea how Callum's going to pull this off.
Oof, is it just me or this review got really dark?
It's also probably the longest review I ever wrote.
10/18/2020 c10 15Oragonking
Oh man, Zubeia, Umbra, and all the Dragons are making a big mistake. They'll became the same as the Dark Mages, invading and taking the lifes of innocents. By the way, Callum returning back to the world, I have a hunch who is helping him.
But seriously man, this story makes me want to send my own characters into your world and put a stop to the hideous crime the Dragons are about to commit... maybe someday I will.
15OragonkingOh man, Zubeia, Umbra, and all the Dragons are making a big mistake. They'll became the same as the Dark Mages, invading and taking the lifes of innocents. By the way, Callum returning back to the world, I have a hunch who is helping him.
But seriously man, this story makes me want to send my own characters into your world and put a stop to the hideous crime the Dragons are about to commit... maybe someday I will.
10/18/2020 c10 Gustrubio
Well this certainly bring back memoirs, like ATLAB Book 2 end, we finish the book with a heavy heart and no hope what so ever T-T, but are immensely rewarded in book 3 with all our dreams coming true :), so yeah let's not lose hope just yet, even more with the promise of Rayllum in the next book ;).
The fight scenes were good enough for me, not to simple but not overly detailed so good job there.
Other than that i hope your life is better and more calm by the end of November, stay safe.
Well this certainly bring back memoirs, like ATLAB Book 2 end, we finish the book with a heavy heart and no hope what so ever T-T, but are immensely rewarded in book 3 with all our dreams coming true :), so yeah let's not lose hope just yet, even more with the promise of Rayllum in the next book ;).
The fight scenes were good enough for me, not to simple but not overly detailed so good job there.
Other than that i hope your life is better and more calm by the end of November, stay safe.
10/18/2020 c10 11Rainbowhawk1993
Man... What is Rayla to do now? War is coming and she's caught in the middle of it.
But I'm curious about what's going to happen to Callum now that he's going to be brought back to life by Claudia. Will his connection to the Star Arcanum allow him to become immune to the charm and he'll communicate with Rayla in her dreams?
Anyway, really looking forward to the next story when you get to it.
11Rainbowhawk1993Man... What is Rayla to do now? War is coming and she's caught in the middle of it.
But I'm curious about what's going to happen to Callum now that he's going to be brought back to life by Claudia. Will his connection to the Star Arcanum allow him to become immune to the charm and he'll communicate with Rayla in her dreams?
Anyway, really looking forward to the next story when you get to it.