10/24/2020 c57 4eagle eyes98
Fighting with each other on the battlefield?

How far the new commanders have fallen, very unlike the Jedi principals they're suppose to embody. Especially coming from Jayla as Esinons responses feel mostly reactionary. Still no good, but at least she has reason

10/12/2020 c55 eagle eyes98
Dun dun duuuuuuunnnnn, cliffhanger.

All of the clones have really good individual personalities so far. Jeho and byte remind me of Sheldon and company from the big bang theory and the racer certainly exemplified his name early in this one. I think kt was very mature writer wise to not have Esinon catch Embo, he's probably one of the best at losing a pursuer, second only to cad bane, so that was well written and the huge force crystal seems really cool. I wonder if that had anything to do with the lockdown...

But on to bumi and Sokka, youre right. Sokka is actually getting some love now and to me he was the most impressive character of the series. He's a nonbender but he made all kf their battle strategies, planned the invasion of the fire nation, and hit combustion man's eye without line of sight by tracking the angle if the explosions. He master several different fighting styles and to me that's just more impressive than jave an inherit talent. But yes they did have to have a comic relief to which he was also the perfect role, and I think that clumsiness or exaggerated dumbness is why they don't get that attention.

Just watch out for Meelo

10/2/2020 c54 eagle eyes98
Tenzin is the most powerful bender of the series if you ask me. He doesn't really get to show that off until season 3 or so but he's a man among men. That and yes amon is better because he has a purpose beyond World domination and his intention are actually good, just executed in a way that is veryyyyy criminal

And this was amazing! I liked the 5 of them getting back together especially and seeing Bo react to everyone still being around. That was a very good moment. There will certainly be a lot of good moments because a lot of them break the normal mold, especially Glitch, Jeho, and Byte. And the ship itself sounds pretty neat.

Well done as usual

9/28/2020 c53 Guest
Ahsoka and Esinon’s friendship is so cute and sister like. I’ll definitely miss the Togruta, and I’ll be interested in seeing how her leaving will affect Anakin and if Esinon will help him out. Also I think it’d be understandable for Esinon to hold some anger towards Obi Wan. She’s more mature but I still feel as if her emotions of betrayal are still there, especially towards Clovis and now the Council.
Also I’m interested to see what happens with little Thea.
Thanks for updating! School’s been hard so I really look forward to your updates more than anything!

9/26/2020 c53 eagle eyes98
Yesssssssssssssssssssssssss. FINALLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.

I'm happy we made it this far, and actually see his name and his interactions with glitch made it so much better. I cannot wait to see the story go further and how he reacts to seeing that everyone is actually alive and well. I fell like that will be really awesome, especially with Esinon as the commander.

But the highlight of this chapter is surely Esinons reaction to losing two of her friends at one time. That moment felt so raw and you wrote it with perfection. If only she knew that she'd be seeing her again.

9/24/2020 c51 Guest
I think Ahsoka could be considered a grey Jedi but I do see where you’re coming from. I like the idea of esinon being a grey Jedi but in my opinion so is Ahsoka as she did at times disobey the council to do what she knew was right.
Also I love your canon corners, they’re all so wholesome!
Can’t wait for the next few chapters! Thanks for continuing to write, I also started school so I can relate to how hectic things can be right now. So I don’t blame you if you’re a couple days late.
Sorry, I just realised how long this comment is! Ahaha :) thanks for writing and can’t wait to see where Esinon goes next.

9/12/2020 c51 CotyT232
Yes! You're amazing, Spinner!️️️