for Windcaster8/4/2020 c44 CotyT232
Omg, I can't wait for Obi-Wan! Also, Cody is such a worried dad. And poor Anakin, dealing with everything.
Loved this chapter!
Omg, I can't wait for Obi-Wan! Also, Cody is such a worried dad. And poor Anakin, dealing with everything.
Loved this chapter!
8/4/2020 c44 kali yugah
I am on edge here. Surely after all the Crap she has gone through she is gonna give Obi-Wan a massive Force induced kick up the arse! Maybe a bit of shouting from Cody and Anakin?
I am on edge here. Surely after all the Crap she has gone through she is gonna give Obi-Wan a massive Force induced kick up the arse! Maybe a bit of shouting from Cody and Anakin?
8/2/2020 c43 Guest
Awwwww esinon babyyyyyyyyyyy! I cried so much when she asked for Obi Wan! It split my heart in two just to see her in more pain! Beautiful chapter, very well written and I love your descriptions of fights and all! Makes it easier to picture!
Awwwww esinon babyyyyyyyyyyy! I cried so much when she asked for Obi Wan! It split my heart in two just to see her in more pain! Beautiful chapter, very well written and I love your descriptions of fights and all! Makes it easier to picture!
7/31/2020 c43 CotyT232
I'm crying! Slick, sorry, Amos, actually called her! This was so sad, and nice, and beautiful
I'm crying! Slick, sorry, Amos, actually called her! This was so sad, and nice, and beautiful
7/31/2020 c43 
10Lau-SR
Poor girl deserves to stop suffering already. A great chapter as always, and I hope to see Esinon recovering soon!
10Lau-SRPoor girl deserves to stop suffering already. A great chapter as always, and I hope to see Esinon recovering soon!
7/30/2020 c42 Guest
Jeez, poor Esinon. Girl really can’t catch a break, huh? Still was a great chapter to read and it’s always nice to see good ole Anakin and Esinon chatting. Still hoping they’ll talk more of Obi tho...
Jeez, poor Esinon. Girl really can’t catch a break, huh? Still was a great chapter to read and it’s always nice to see good ole Anakin and Esinon chatting. Still hoping they’ll talk more of Obi tho...
7/30/2020 c42 4eagle eyes98
The zygerrians are pretty nasty at what they do, I hope Esinon doesn't break under all that pressure she's going to go through in the re-education camp, or so they call it. I also loved related having slaves back to the clones. It's certainly one of the bigger debates of which I have been apart of
Very well done
4eagle eyes98The zygerrians are pretty nasty at what they do, I hope Esinon doesn't break under all that pressure she's going to go through in the re-education camp, or so they call it. I also loved related having slaves back to the clones. It's certainly one of the bigger debates of which I have been apart of
Very well done
7/25/2020 c41 Lau-SR
I finally could catch up with this story! I’m really enjoying everything so far, Esinon’s character is amazing and the way she fits and develops is incredible!
I finally could catch up with this story! I’m really enjoying everything so far, Esinon’s character is amazing and the way she fits and develops is incredible!
7/24/2020 c41 4eagle eyes98
I'm verrryyyyy interested to see how the slick situation comes back around, and this was a good temporary farewell for dogma, I liked getting to see this farm again, its one of the better episodes and I feel like bringing them here was really smart thinking
Excellent
4eagle eyes98I'm verrryyyyy interested to see how the slick situation comes back around, and this was a good temporary farewell for dogma, I liked getting to see this farm again, its one of the better episodes and I feel like bringing them here was really smart thinking
Excellent
7/24/2020 c40 eagle eyes98
Naughty naughty, bane is in for a rude awakening when Esinon gets a hold of him. At least I assume its bane. Well done on Slick's development and acceptance of Esinon's situation. It was unfortunate to see dogma take a bit of back seat but i guess that has to happen in order for slick to grow. Elliot is also really cool
Naughty naughty, bane is in for a rude awakening when Esinon gets a hold of him. At least I assume its bane. Well done on Slick's development and acceptance of Esinon's situation. It was unfortunate to see dogma take a bit of back seat but i guess that has to happen in order for slick to grow. Elliot is also really cool
7/24/2020 c41 Constanza
I loved the whole Slick's arc, and his relationship with Esinon and Dogma. And that flashback with Obi-Wan made me cry️
I loved the whole Slick's arc, and his relationship with Esinon and Dogma. And that flashback with Obi-Wan made me cry️
7/23/2020 c40 weee
Shitshitshitshitshit...shit.
Bro, I was starting to like Slick what the-?! I guess one of his triggers is Jedi, that sucks. I feel bad for the Jedi honestly, everyone thinks they're keeping the war going on purpose when really they're probably some of the people who want the war to end the most. Anyway this arc is amazing! I really like the character development and the story line. Keep up the awesome work!
Shitshitshitshitshit...shit.
Bro, I was starting to like Slick what the-?! I guess one of his triggers is Jedi, that sucks. I feel bad for the Jedi honestly, everyone thinks they're keeping the war going on purpose when really they're probably some of the people who want the war to end the most. Anyway this arc is amazing! I really like the character development and the story line. Keep up the awesome work!
7/21/2020 c40 CotyT232
AWWWW THANK YOU, SLICK!
I love how Slick and Esinon's "friendship" is improving, and how he cares for her, even if he doesn't want to admit it. You're doing a great job.
Do you know when Obi-Wan will appear again?
AWWWW THANK YOU, SLICK!
I love how Slick and Esinon's "friendship" is improving, and how he cares for her, even if he doesn't want to admit it. You're doing a great job.
Do you know when Obi-Wan will appear again?