for Windcaster7/21/2020 c40 Guest
Oh Slick. He’s gotten quite protective, huh? Can’t blame him though, I love his development and his ‘growing’ friendship with Esinon. Also THEA! Haven’t seen her in ages so that was a lovely surprise! Also Esinon’s family being huge, I felt that.
LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter, can’t wait for the next one! :)
Oh Slick. He’s gotten quite protective, huh? Can’t blame him though, I love his development and his ‘growing’ friendship with Esinon. Also THEA! Haven’t seen her in ages so that was a lovely surprise! Also Esinon’s family being huge, I felt that.
LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter, can’t wait for the next one! :)
7/21/2020 c39 
4eagle eyes98
Ahh it took me so long before I had time to read this one! But I guess the good news is now I get to read to two chapters in one day.
I loved the argument right after they agreed to get along, that was really funny and we'll written, and Esinon acting kind if like of mom was in her character for sure. Well written! And your crushing Slick's character development.
Awesome sauce
4eagle eyes98Ahh it took me so long before I had time to read this one! But I guess the good news is now I get to read to two chapters in one day.
I loved the argument right after they agreed to get along, that was really funny and we'll written, and Esinon acting kind if like of mom was in her character for sure. Well written! And your crushing Slick's character development.
Awesome sauce
7/17/2020 c39 Guest
I’m glad Slick is beginning to warm up a bit to Esinon and I also love that she’s no longer just letting him run his mouth! Loved this wholesome chapter very much.
I’m glad Slick is beginning to warm up a bit to Esinon and I also love that she’s no longer just letting him run his mouth! Loved this wholesome chapter very much.
7/17/2020 c1 5Jack Redhawke
Not tryna flame here, but I read the summary and I gotta say that is the most d&d sounding Star Wars name I’ve ever heard.
5Jack RedhawkeNot tryna flame here, but I read the summary and I gotta say that is the most d&d sounding Star Wars name I’ve ever heard.
7/15/2020 c38 CotyT232
I love this! I need Obi-Wan and Esinon to reunite! And I hope that Slick realizes that Esinon wants to help them
I love this! I need Obi-Wan and Esinon to reunite! And I hope that Slick realizes that Esinon wants to help them
7/14/2020 c38 Guest
I’m really excited to see Dogma, Slick and. Esinon I feel like they’ll have a bunch of not exactly “fun” but intriguing adventures. Loved this one! Can’t wait for the next one!
I’m really excited to see Dogma, Slick and. Esinon I feel like they’ll have a bunch of not exactly “fun” but intriguing adventures. Loved this one! Can’t wait for the next one!
7/14/2020 c38 4eagle eyes98
This chapter was massive! And well done I can't imagine how Esinon is going to react when she finds out that if she killed hardeen, it would have actually been Kenobi. And while I got tired of slick fairly quickly it looks like he might shape up to be pretty alright. Poor Esinon is dealing with so much rage, I wonder how Korkie would've felt to see her like that...
Well done as always!
4eagle eyes98This chapter was massive! And well done I can't imagine how Esinon is going to react when she finds out that if she killed hardeen, it would have actually been Kenobi. And while I got tired of slick fairly quickly it looks like he might shape up to be pretty alright. Poor Esinon is dealing with so much rage, I wonder how Korkie would've felt to see her like that...
Well done as always!
7/14/2020 c38 1Mads-Chikistorm
oooohhhh man I love how you're writing Silck and Esinon's relationship
1Mads-Chikistormoooohhhh man I love how you're writing Silck and Esinon's relationship
7/12/2020 c37 Guest
Ahahwshsh3dnfnduivn LOVED ITTTTTTTTTTTTT! KORKIE AND ESINON ARE WAY TO CUTEEEE AND ADROBABLE! Also loved Korki’s final comment of not making their relationship a battlefield that had me laughing. AMAZING
Ahahwshsh3dnfnduivn LOVED ITTTTTTTTTTTTT! KORKIE AND ESINON ARE WAY TO CUTEEEE AND ADROBABLE! Also loved Korki’s final comment of not making their relationship a battlefield that had me laughing. AMAZING
7/11/2020 c37 4eagle eyes98
The griping is already hilarious! They shall bbe very cute indeed. I pray Esinon doesn't fall to a similar fate which Anakin and Padme are doomed to encounter.
As for the clone...well that would have be none other than slick :)
Was i right?
4eagle eyes98The griping is already hilarious! They shall bbe very cute indeed. I pray Esinon doesn't fall to a similar fate which Anakin and Padme are doomed to encounter.
As for the clone...well that would have be none other than slick :)
Was i right?
7/9/2020 c36 CotyT232
That Anakin and Esinon moment at the hospital made me cry. They miss Obi-Wan so much
That Anakin and Esinon moment at the hospital made me cry. They miss Obi-Wan so much
7/8/2020 c36 Electra Tauro
I f******g LOVE this story! Please go on wiht this amazing job.
When I read that Obi-Wan was going to be "killed" sooner than in the series I started freaking out for Esinon, and now I NEED to see/read those two meeting again, I need Esinon shouting at him telling him how such an idiot he is, I need Obi-Wan just staring at her feeling guilty (because he IS), I need Esinon to end up crying because she really thought he was gone and I NEED THOSE TWO ON A HUG!
I f******g LOVE this story! Please go on wiht this amazing job.
When I read that Obi-Wan was going to be "killed" sooner than in the series I started freaking out for Esinon, and now I NEED to see/read those two meeting again, I need Esinon shouting at him telling him how such an idiot he is, I need Obi-Wan just staring at her feeling guilty (because he IS), I need Esinon to end up crying because she really thought he was gone and I NEED THOSE TWO ON A HUG!
7/7/2020 c36 Guest
I hate seeing Esinon go through all this pain and grief but I feel like it’s important character development which is why I love how you write! You make me fall in love with every single character so thank you!
I hate seeing Esinon go through all this pain and grief but I feel like it’s important character development which is why I love how you write! You make me fall in love with every single character so thank you!