for Bloodlines10/13/2021 c2 Sebine
For a story written in '03, with no actual details, you made up some pretty good shit
For a story written in '03, with no actual details, you made up some pretty good shit
8/31/2021 c1 FeelSpyre
2003 people 2003... grow up mongrels, stop hating on a story for unjustified reasons
2003 people 2003... grow up mongrels, stop hating on a story for unjustified reasons
5/1/2021 c2 Yami Fenikkusu
Sorry I’m dropping this. Haruka Uzumaki fr. I know you going AU. But I only see Kushina as Naruto mother.
Sorry I’m dropping this. Haruka Uzumaki fr. I know you going AU. But I only see Kushina as Naruto mother.
9/26/2020 c5 margins
fix your fucking margins
fix your fucking margins
7/24/2020 c2 Flame punch
Wow this is old, I forgot we all used to have a bunch of theories about who his parents are. I haven’t heard the name Kazama Arashi for like 15 years and that makes me feel old. Did we even know about Kushina and Minato before shippuden? Ugg I just realized I’m in my mid twenties which makes me almost Kakashi’s age and older than Kushina and Minato were when they died... mind blown.
Wow this is old, I forgot we all used to have a bunch of theories about who his parents are. I haven’t heard the name Kazama Arashi for like 15 years and that makes me feel old. Did we even know about Kushina and Minato before shippuden? Ugg I just realized I’m in my mid twenties which makes me almost Kakashi’s age and older than Kushina and Minato were when they died... mind blown.
5/21/2020 c19 Pucusi81
Seriously you started this story with an original story line, and then you took it to the lunacy side of stupid. You lost your thought pattern trying to create a different plot that it became nonsense. Listen create first your characters in your mind then write about them as you see them. Try to picture where you want them to go. Don't create your plot on the fly. Action, a little romance character exchange and for heavens sake ppl Fights! Let's not forget humor in the mix.
Seriously you started this story with an original story line, and then you took it to the lunacy side of stupid. You lost your thought pattern trying to create a different plot that it became nonsense. Listen create first your characters in your mind then write about them as you see them. Try to picture where you want them to go. Don't create your plot on the fly. Action, a little romance character exchange and for heavens sake ppl Fights! Let's not forget humor in the mix.
10/5/2019 c20 
5Byakko's Kitten
So. This is a story I come back to time and time again. It was one of my first forays into the Naruto fandom, and continue’s to remain a favorite. It’s interesting, has a good plotline, and has a very diverse cast. It’s fun, and light-hearted and I love it.
5Byakko's KittenSo. This is a story I come back to time and time again. It was one of my first forays into the Naruto fandom, and continue’s to remain a favorite. It’s interesting, has a good plotline, and has a very diverse cast. It’s fun, and light-hearted and I love it.
7/13/2019 c2 Nate
Trash fic.
Trash fic.
3/10/2019 c20 Guest
This fiction fucking sucks
This fiction fucking sucks