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4/29/2020 c1 170hippiechick2112
I was actually a little confused and had to keep remembering you wrote this like a script. If you polish up your writing a little, it can be understood better. Definitely something that will happen in the series. Great job!
3/24/2020 c1 yourteacher
So fun that this is in script format! The opening description really helped sell the scene, but using italics to offset the action descriptions would be wise. (They may have already been in italics, but may have changed them.)

Strong dialogue, particularly from H and B. (The Arin part is particularly funny!)

Be sure to keep to keep your writing polished, too.

Thanks for sharing!

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