for One Minute at a Time4/5/2020 c1 
52Signy1
Oh, nicely, *nicely* done. The breathless scansion- especially that last bit, with the shortening lines- does a good job of conveying the controlled panic in the words. Some great single lines, too- the repetition, contrasting 'out of luck/ Soon out of reach' is evocative, and I liked the grim reminder 'does not mean they'll never miss.' Nice job.
52Signy1Oh, nicely, *nicely* done. The breathless scansion- especially that last bit, with the shortening lines- does a good job of conveying the controlled panic in the words. Some great single lines, too- the repetition, contrasting 'out of luck/ Soon out of reach' is evocative, and I liked the grim reminder 'does not mean they'll never miss.' Nice job.
3/11/2020 c1 18Ennui Enigma
The short stanzas present a brisk and urgent pacing to this poem. Very apt in nature to the overall message. I love how much you can convey in this 'minute read' as well! Most enjoyed. Thank you.
18Ennui EnigmaThe short stanzas present a brisk and urgent pacing to this poem. Very apt in nature to the overall message. I love how much you can convey in this 'minute read' as well! Most enjoyed. Thank you.
3/10/2020 c1 71snooky-9093
A very timely piece of work that deftly portrays, as you said, the brief, unexpected moment where everything can come crashing down. It appears our rewatch is continuing to foment creativity!
71snooky-9093A very timely piece of work that deftly portrays, as you said, the brief, unexpected moment where everything can come crashing down. It appears our rewatch is continuing to foment creativity!