for Percy Jackson and the Horror Within6/6 c15 juegos1arte19
Es emocionante, me encanta, espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo, al fin una historia de Percy Jackson en Harry Potter como el nieto de Voldemort, y además está bien narrada, un gran trabajo excelente
Es emocionante, me encanta, espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo, al fin una historia de Percy Jackson en Harry Potter como el nieto de Voldemort, y además está bien narrada, un gran trabajo excelente
6/4 c1 Juliasimon77
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma, connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation, balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease , capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma, connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation, balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease , capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
6/4 c15 Mathel
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
This is one funny story.
Also, I like that while Percy is significantly more powerful than same year Hogwarts students, he isn't stealing Harry's story (for the most part).
Although Percy being Parselmouth seems rather contrived.
It can't be purely genetic, otherwise there would be a bunch of Parselmouths every year. Genetics don't care about who is legal heir, and it would be inherited into many families, to the point where most purebloodfamilies would have a decent chance of producing a Parselmouth.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
This is one funny story.
Also, I like that while Percy is significantly more powerful than same year Hogwarts students, he isn't stealing Harry's story (for the most part).
Although Percy being Parselmouth seems rather contrived.
It can't be purely genetic, otherwise there would be a bunch of Parselmouths every year. Genetics don't care about who is legal heir, and it would be inherited into many families, to the point where most purebloodfamilies would have a decent chance of producing a Parselmouth.
6/3 c15 Neeya2
nice book more please
i like that Percy is mostly lowkey not too overly hot head or too friendly
nice book more please
i like that Percy is mostly lowkey not too overly hot head or too friendly
6/2 c15 
4Checkingdude
Might I suggest reading the official books for Star Wars, if you haven’t already that is.
4CheckingdudeMight I suggest reading the official books for Star Wars, if you haven’t already that is.
6/1 c5 1wolfwind42
“Don’t bruise as easily as regular mortals” might be a slight understatement, lmao.
1wolfwind42“Don’t bruise as easily as regular mortals” might be a slight understatement, lmao.
6/1 c7 Mathel
You know, I wanted to complain about Percy not seeing Thestrals.
But the I realized that by the end of Lightning Thief, he really hasn't seen a person die. Some of monsters died, and his mother disappeared, but no mortal died in front of him.
So good on you.
You know, I wanted to complain about Percy not seeing Thestrals.
But the I realized that by the end of Lightning Thief, he really hasn't seen a person die. Some of monsters died, and his mother disappeared, but no mortal died in front of him.
So good on you.
5/30 c15 scl04
Great to see a new chapter once again and a fantastic one where Percy talks for the first time with his wizar-Hitler grandparent, or well a part of his soul at least.
It was cool to read Percy noticing the similarities between Tom and likely Sally even if the demigod didn’t put it together, due to his previous clues and experiences however Percy doesn’t fall for Tom’s manipulation and his resistance to magic prevents him from getting possessed by the diary with Voldemort having felt a connection between both of them too so I’m eager to read how this continues.
Especially since Percy got the diary taken by Harry due to happenstance, so who knows maybe Voldemort will try to frame Percy somehow before the diary is again taken by Ginny or something like that, by the way the moment with the Valentine was funny, I guess that Percy still being a kid wouldn’t get too many but as he grows up into his looks compared to gods and all…Susan certainly noticed careful Annabeth~ LOL.
I’ll be waiting for more even if it takes a while for this story to be updated, hopefully there’s more after this “book” too. Thanks for all of your hard work!
Great to see a new chapter once again and a fantastic one where Percy talks for the first time with his wizar-Hitler grandparent, or well a part of his soul at least.
It was cool to read Percy noticing the similarities between Tom and likely Sally even if the demigod didn’t put it together, due to his previous clues and experiences however Percy doesn’t fall for Tom’s manipulation and his resistance to magic prevents him from getting possessed by the diary with Voldemort having felt a connection between both of them too so I’m eager to read how this continues.
Especially since Percy got the diary taken by Harry due to happenstance, so who knows maybe Voldemort will try to frame Percy somehow before the diary is again taken by Ginny or something like that, by the way the moment with the Valentine was funny, I guess that Percy still being a kid wouldn’t get too many but as he grows up into his looks compared to gods and all…Susan certainly noticed careful Annabeth~ LOL.
I’ll be waiting for more even if it takes a while for this story to be updated, hopefully there’s more after this “book” too. Thanks for all of your hard work!
5/30 c15 11Limited Edge
Awesome chapter! I really like the smalls traits you had Tom show that were similar to Percy, without them being too much alike. Keeps the mystery up for them both! Also, Percy's distrust of Tom makes perfect sense. As we saw with Cedric, he is wary of trusting older guys because of Luke, and due to his experience with monsters he's more rational in realizing a Aragog wouldn't be the monster he's looking for. Also- him using the name Peter Johnson name made me smile :) smart way as well to get the diary back into Harry's hand, and in the future back to Ginny's I assume. Looking forward to the next chapter!
11Limited EdgeAwesome chapter! I really like the smalls traits you had Tom show that were similar to Percy, without them being too much alike. Keeps the mystery up for them both! Also, Percy's distrust of Tom makes perfect sense. As we saw with Cedric, he is wary of trusting older guys because of Luke, and due to his experience with monsters he's more rational in realizing a Aragog wouldn't be the monster he's looking for. Also- him using the name Peter Johnson name made me smile :) smart way as well to get the diary back into Harry's hand, and in the future back to Ginny's I assume. Looking forward to the next chapter!
5/30 c15 Creativenameok
The Star Wars the Clone Wars (2008) series might have more padme/anakin content, if you haven’t seen it yet.
The Star Wars the Clone Wars (2008) series might have more padme/anakin content, if you haven’t seen it yet.
5/28 c2 Guest
I really like how neither Dumbledore nor Sally actually lie.
I really like how neither Dumbledore nor Sally actually lie.
3/31 c14 Rishi.v
I am honestly impressed by the story. The writing is fabulous, but the key, shining factor is how easily you mold and intertwine their worlds while introducing non intrusive elements to complement the story. I swear to God, this is waaayy too well written. Please don't stop it.
I am honestly impressed by the story. The writing is fabulous, but the key, shining factor is how easily you mold and intertwine their worlds while introducing non intrusive elements to complement the story. I swear to God, this is waaayy too well written. Please don't stop it.