for A Second Chance12/24/2020 c2 Guest
Ok I am not a fan of getting the same chapter from a different Pov so I skipped this one. Didn't help that it was obi-wan either not really a fan of him.
Ok I am not a fan of getting the same chapter from a different Pov so I skipped this one. Didn't help that it was obi-wan either not really a fan of him.
12/24/2020 c1 Guest
I agree there isn't enough anakin goes back in time. Tho I would like to see more Padme goes back in time as well.
Off to a good start a little slow but still good.
I agree there isn't enough anakin goes back in time. Tho I would like to see more Padme goes back in time as well.
Off to a good start a little slow but still good.
12/20/2020 c1 mark.lyons.3682
Wow, Sweetie, this is magnificent. This is the answer to the yearning of every fan who wanted to redeem Anakin.
This is the a sequel that follows Anakin beyond his death without needing to answer the most cryptic question of judgement and the very purpose of life directly.
I’m yearning to read more (yes, I’m one of those fans).
Love, Dad
Wow, Sweetie, this is magnificent. This is the answer to the yearning of every fan who wanted to redeem Anakin.
This is the a sequel that follows Anakin beyond his death without needing to answer the most cryptic question of judgement and the very purpose of life directly.
I’m yearning to read more (yes, I’m one of those fans).
Love, Dad
10/28/2020 c6 Guest
This is a really good story. I hope you keep going with it.
This is a really good story. I hope you keep going with it.
10/16/2020 c6 
11Katla1
Holy heck! There is not a fanfiction out there that I look forward to more, right now.
Anakin sleeping was so soft, and I love it. Another moment to add to my feels trip. And the description of the /darkness/ was... woah. Anakin feels so different, and I love how you showed this from Obi's POV.
/Do you remember how you felt when Master Jinn died?/ Straight up burst into tears here. :'(
"And please, call me Padme" Not gonna lie, this felt out of nowhere in such a tense moment.
The conversation with the Council was not at all like I thought it would be, but it was amazing! The fact the all the shatterpoints have moved, that the balance of the Force itself has shifted so powerfully, IS INCREDIBLE. I'm so glad you included this detail!
Fantastic chapter, as usual. A highlight of my day!
11Katla1Holy heck! There is not a fanfiction out there that I look forward to more, right now.
Anakin sleeping was so soft, and I love it. Another moment to add to my feels trip. And the description of the /darkness/ was... woah. Anakin feels so different, and I love how you showed this from Obi's POV.
/Do you remember how you felt when Master Jinn died?/ Straight up burst into tears here. :'(
"And please, call me Padme" Not gonna lie, this felt out of nowhere in such a tense moment.
The conversation with the Council was not at all like I thought it would be, but it was amazing! The fact the all the shatterpoints have moved, that the balance of the Force itself has shifted so powerfully, IS INCREDIBLE. I'm so glad you included this detail!
Fantastic chapter, as usual. A highlight of my day!
10/15/2020 c1 Guest
Suggestion that would be interesting to see the Thrawn alliances book shows Vader knew abt the bendu it is left unclear if he knew ahsokas affiliation it would be interesting to see him Kenobi ahsoka all go see him before he confronts sidious
Suggestion that would be interesting to see the Thrawn alliances book shows Vader knew abt the bendu it is left unclear if he knew ahsokas affiliation it would be interesting to see him Kenobi ahsoka all go see him before he confronts sidious
10/15/2020 c5 Guest
It was Tarkin who pressured the Jedi High Council to expel Ahsoka in the first place.
It was Tarkin who pressured the Jedi High Council to expel Ahsoka in the first place.
10/15/2020 c5 Guest
Have Anakin kill Tarkin.
Have Anakin kill Tarkin.
10/14/2020 c6 Mike
Good chapter! Wonder if the Emperor is sensing any of this?
Good chapter! Wonder if the Emperor is sensing any of this?
10/14/2020 c6 Luvvykitty
I LOVED it, the character development is crucial and was spot on in this update! Thanks for sharing your gift :)
I LOVED it, the character development is crucial and was spot on in this update! Thanks for sharing your gift :)
10/14/2020 c6 15gammaxmen80
Anakin needs to get his shit together. Because if the Council sensed the change in the Force, then so did Sidious.
15gammaxmen80Anakin needs to get his shit together. Because if the Council sensed the change in the Force, then so did Sidious.
10/14/2020 c2 Duellist
I like the premise, but I have to tell you up-front that rehashing the same scene from the POV of the only other character in it in the first place isn’t really wonderful. If multiple POV are needed, let them come out the first time. Otherwise, I recommend that you tell the story from one POV, at least for the chapter or scene, and don’t re-hash it.
I like the premise, but I have to tell you up-front that rehashing the same scene from the POV of the only other character in it in the first place isn’t really wonderful. If multiple POV are needed, let them come out the first time. Otherwise, I recommend that you tell the story from one POV, at least for the chapter or scene, and don’t re-hash it.
10/8/2020 c5 4SnowflakesandMozart
I read chapter 4 when you posted, but I didn't have time to write a real response, so I just kept the tab open on my tablet. Then, before I could write that review, you posted again! Good on you! :-)
These two chapters aren't filled with much plot, but this one in particular does so much for character. It's obvious that Obi-Wan wants to make things right with Anakin, and it's both amusing and sad that Anakin doesn't even know why he's apologizing. Though I confess I was hoping they would reach Padme's apartment in this chapter, it ends in a good place with Anakin uneasily caught between the peace that's infusing him and his own urgency to fix everything. Nice work!
P.S. This story isn't showing up on my notifications, even though I was sure I had followed it. Anyway, I've corrected the oversight now!
4SnowflakesandMozartI read chapter 4 when you posted, but I didn't have time to write a real response, so I just kept the tab open on my tablet. Then, before I could write that review, you posted again! Good on you! :-)
These two chapters aren't filled with much plot, but this one in particular does so much for character. It's obvious that Obi-Wan wants to make things right with Anakin, and it's both amusing and sad that Anakin doesn't even know why he's apologizing. Though I confess I was hoping they would reach Padme's apartment in this chapter, it ends in a good place with Anakin uneasily caught between the peace that's infusing him and his own urgency to fix everything. Nice work!
P.S. This story isn't showing up on my notifications, even though I was sure I had followed it. Anyway, I've corrected the oversight now!