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4/18 c3 2OmegaChrome
I'm loving this being from Motoyasu's perspective. The premise alone had me check this out. The writing is gonna have me eagerly awaiting chapters.
3/30 c3 i-love-cats-and-fics
you know i love this story just so much and i can read it out loud and actually cry when he cries but I don't omit vomit
3/25 c3 PSYCongroo
Esto es grandioso
Thanks for the chapter.
3/25 c3 xXx
This is actually really nice. I'm glad I decided to check this site instead of ao3 like I usually do! If Motoyasu needs an out for his weird behavior... I imagine just saying he had a veeeeeeeery dramatic death would do the trick.
... Hm. Actually thinking about it, the heroes that died to get to this new world were weirdly chill about the whole thing? As far as I remember anyways. Weirdly, having Motoyasu act so different makes it seem like an actual, realistic reaction to dying and then ending up someplace weird.
3/19 c3 1Ninjacya321
You know, I’m thankful that you didn’t drop this story. I remember reading this back when it was released, this story just got to me, I’m a huge fan of time travel fanfictions and I’m enamoured by how instead of choosing anyone else, you went with Motoyasu. Can’t wait for the next chapter, which hopefully won’t be in a document forgotten. Haha.
3/18 c1 WhiteVolder
Спасибо большое за проделанную работу! Очень жду следующую главу!)
10/14/2020 c2 Jackfrost0619
this is really good can't wait for the next chapter
8/3/2020 c2 3Azure Dark
I am loving this
7/3/2020 c2 18chosobestboi
More please
7/3/2020 c1 chosobestboi
Interesting..mames me under if you've read Reprise of the Spear Hero
7/2/2020 c2 3AutisticAnglophile
Hey this fic is pretty good. I'll be looking forward to the next update!
7/1/2020 c2 10dan heron
always nice to see a time travel story that focus on helping rather than just a power trip fantasy with a thinly veiled self insert

These two chapters have been very enjoyable and quick to go through
6/30/2020 c2 25The Jingo
Great start
6/30/2020 c2 53Serpent Tailed Angel
The only time the spin-off portrays Motoyasu experiencing any pain when he time-travels is when the time travel is triggered by him experiencing a fatal injury, with the pain being from the injury itself rather than the time travel. Otherwise, the process tends to be more painful for one of the other heroes. (Most often Itsuki, IIRC) It also doesn't have any negative impact on his stats. That being said, you described the pain so well, I was too focused on how great it was to even think of it in terms of canon until I read your author's note, and Motoyasu keeping an absurdly high level works well for a comedy like the spin-off, but taking a chunk out of his levels works a lot better for a fic that wants a more serious approach.

Anyway, loved the chapter. Keep up the good work.
6/30/2020 c2 TheRiddler757
I was wondering if this story was gonna get updated. Glad to see that this was left for dead.
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