for Everybody Loves Cookies3/31/2023 c21 DrJhonnylol
Another history that I burned through today I definitely love your history’s they are so good and well portrayed keep the good work. <3
Another history that I burned through today I definitely love your history’s they are so good and well portrayed keep the good work. <3
3/31/2023 c21 Inugami-Wolf2
First of all I love most of your stories, I have been reading them for several years. Second, I hope you continue with your stories for a couple more years and CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 15 YEARS WRITING THINGS THAT ENTERTAIN PEOPLE. Third, I was reading comments from the last chapter to see if anyone had any idea about the last member of Adam's team, and I read things that left me with enormous anger, the type of person who says that type of thing disgusted me, DON'T PAY ATTENTION TO HIM TO THAT KIND OF SON OF A BITCH THAT HAS NO LIFE. Thank you very much for continuing to make stories, I mean it. Last thing, if you don't understand some of the things I wrote about, it's because I'm using the translator, since I don't know English. Good luck with your life and your stories.
First of all I love most of your stories, I have been reading them for several years. Second, I hope you continue with your stories for a couple more years and CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 15 YEARS WRITING THINGS THAT ENTERTAIN PEOPLE. Third, I was reading comments from the last chapter to see if anyone had any idea about the last member of Adam's team, and I read things that left me with enormous anger, the type of person who says that type of thing disgusted me, DON'T PAY ATTENTION TO HIM TO THAT KIND OF SON OF A BITCH THAT HAS NO LIFE. Thank you very much for continuing to make stories, I mean it. Last thing, if you don't understand some of the things I wrote about, it's because I'm using the translator, since I don't know English. Good luck with your life and your stories.
3/30/2023 c21 
3Jinx for Life
Your naruto became more of a menace after Puss in Boots came out... I like it. Nay. I LOVE IT
3Jinx for LifeYour naruto became more of a menace after Puss in Boots came out... I like it. Nay. I LOVE IT
3/28/2023 c21 8Blu3b3rryT3a
All the madness~!
Naruto really was bored huh? Same for Raven/Sapphire/Vanessa.
Watts is gonna blow up the stadium isn't he.
Hmm, the Maiden candidate... I really have no clue.
Same for the fourth member of Adam's team. Let's see, the letters so far are ARN- is the fourth member Winter?
Best of luck!
8Blu3b3rryT3aAll the madness~!
Naruto really was bored huh? Same for Raven/Sapphire/Vanessa.
Watts is gonna blow up the stadium isn't he.
Hmm, the Maiden candidate... I really have no clue.
Same for the fourth member of Adam's team. Let's see, the letters so far are ARN- is the fourth member Winter?
Best of luck!
3/18/2023 c21 SubzeroLin
Yes not only a puss in boots refrence but also a hellsing on the the last preview. Also anyone else think its naruto fem clone fighting the tournament. If so everyone is fucked.
Yes not only a puss in boots refrence but also a hellsing on the the last preview. Also anyone else think its naruto fem clone fighting the tournament. If so everyone is fucked.
3/16/2023 c21 Guest
more please
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3/15/2023 c21 Guest
Please ignore that c’nt who seemingly can only write two sentences on repeat
Your great your work is great ignore the shit bag
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Your great your work is great ignore the shit bag
3/15/2023 c20 violastrum
For starters, that one person is stupidly persistent and annoying. The Mods really need to shut that person down hard.
Yes, your Naruto always tend to be over the top and absurdly strong, but given who and what he is and compare it to RWBY, then yeah. he comes off as one, not a bad thing. Sometimes you just need a little curbstomp fic in your life. It's called crackfics and they are good for the soul! That said, this bit of weirdness is definitely a what the Ef I've been enjoying. I just said and binged the whole thing and it's been a pretty fun ride, I gotta say. Glad to see this one didn't vanish into the ether and I'm definitely voting to see this one finished. The dynamics of the three women are hilarious and I'm eagerly looking to see how this ends. i actually caught the part about the wasting disease Nora mentioned, so when I heard Roman say the same... Heh. You mad genius.
For starters, that one person is stupidly persistent and annoying. The Mods really need to shut that person down hard.
Yes, your Naruto always tend to be over the top and absurdly strong, but given who and what he is and compare it to RWBY, then yeah. he comes off as one, not a bad thing. Sometimes you just need a little curbstomp fic in your life. It's called crackfics and they are good for the soul! That said, this bit of weirdness is definitely a what the Ef I've been enjoying. I just said and binged the whole thing and it's been a pretty fun ride, I gotta say. Glad to see this one didn't vanish into the ether and I'm definitely voting to see this one finished. The dynamics of the three women are hilarious and I'm eagerly looking to see how this ends. i actually caught the part about the wasting disease Nora mentioned, so when I heard Roman say the same... Heh. You mad genius.
3/15/2023 c21 Guest
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3/15/2023 c21 Guest
Been looking forward to this one. Never enough RWBY.
Been looking forward to this one. Never enough RWBY.