for Everybody Loves Cookies3/13/2023 c9 
5C3nterF0ld
wait wait WAIT. you mention mage, warrior, thief. reminiscent of certain standing stones. and now you're talking about an assassin named sapphire. there's no fucking way she's sapphire from the thieves guild is she?!
5C3nterF0ldwait wait WAIT. you mention mage, warrior, thief. reminiscent of certain standing stones. and now you're talking about an assassin named sapphire. there's no fucking way she's sapphire from the thieves guild is she?!
2/16/2023 c20 pertemis4lyfe
if you don't update this in the next minute I will cancel your life subscription my guy
if you don't update this in the next minute I will cancel your life subscription my guy
12/4/2022 c20 Codenamed-Bolt
Great story. It’s definitely one of the funniest Naruto x RWBY crossovers I’ve read. The only thing that I’m confused about is the number of kids that are all 17: Pyrrha, Nora, Yang. The timelines didn’t seem to line up the way it was portrayed in the story. Yes, Naruto left before he knew about them, but, it does take nine months to pop out a baby. It’s just a little weird. I’m kind of hoping all the Naruto spawn get together and either prank Paparuto or try to jump him.
Honestly, the only thing I don’t like about this story: Taiyang. Man is by far my favorite adult in the canon series. Seeing him done this way kinda hurt. But, the story overall is worth a minor dislike. I look forward to the next chapters.
Great story. It’s definitely one of the funniest Naruto x RWBY crossovers I’ve read. The only thing that I’m confused about is the number of kids that are all 17: Pyrrha, Nora, Yang. The timelines didn’t seem to line up the way it was portrayed in the story. Yes, Naruto left before he knew about them, but, it does take nine months to pop out a baby. It’s just a little weird. I’m kind of hoping all the Naruto spawn get together and either prank Paparuto or try to jump him.
Honestly, the only thing I don’t like about this story: Taiyang. Man is by far my favorite adult in the canon series. Seeing him done this way kinda hurt. But, the story overall is worth a minor dislike. I look forward to the next chapters.
11/29/2022 c6 Kiyan Tribe
Honestly how can Naruto abandon his children for 17 years in every single of your RWBY fic. It's not even funny anymore.
Honestly how can Naruto abandon his children for 17 years in every single of your RWBY fic. It's not even funny anymore.
11/18/2022 c19 TheAgelessMenace
HA its hilarious I just made that exact same quote before I scrolled to see the bottom 6 sentences and when I read it I howled
HA its hilarious I just made that exact same quote before I scrolled to see the bottom 6 sentences and when I read it I howled
11/18/2022 c2 TheAgelessMenace
Did anyone see the song reference to the wolf in sheeps clothing song at the end of this chapter
Did anyone see the song reference to the wolf in sheeps clothing song at the end of this chapter
11/1/2022 c1 Guest
I Can't wait for the next chapter!
I Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/27/2022 c14 31Curiosity44
lol what a legendary line. I can tell exactly what movie this inspiration came from. Funny enough, i just saw it on netflix for the second time recently.
31Curiosity44lol what a legendary line. I can tell exactly what movie this inspiration came from. Funny enough, i just saw it on netflix for the second time recently.