for Everybody Loves Cookies4/10/2020 c3 Draegoon
Flirty Cinder is Flirty, well actually she seems more like the type to seduce rather than flirt but flirty sounds better than seductive. also amazing job as per usual, have a random Natsu eat the flames sent your way (he'll say they taste bad but make him do it anyway), and death to flamers.
Flirty Cinder is Flirty, well actually she seems more like the type to seduce rather than flirt but flirty sounds better than seductive. also amazing job as per usual, have a random Natsu eat the flames sent your way (he'll say they taste bad but make him do it anyway), and death to flamers.
4/10/2020 c3 
3Placated Uzumaki
If raven cheated on naruto with tai, please tell me that eventually there's gonna be a serious discussion between the two of them about it. Thats not one of those things you just forgive and forget about, no matter how much you love someone, that's one of the biggest betrayals of trust
3Placated UzumakiIf raven cheated on naruto with tai, please tell me that eventually there's gonna be a serious discussion between the two of them about it. Thats not one of those things you just forgive and forget about, no matter how much you love someone, that's one of the biggest betrayals of trust
4/10/2020 c3 3SoloChrollo
Gosh I love Raven. Naruto and raven pairings are my fav and seeing them act like that is just so wholesome. Cant wait for next chapter and seeing the preview of Cinder too?
3SoloChrolloGosh I love Raven. Naruto and raven pairings are my fav and seeing them act like that is just so wholesome. Cant wait for next chapter and seeing the preview of Cinder too?
4/10/2020 c3 Dragonkit31
This is seriously my favorite story right now, the absolute chaos naruto will bring with raven and freaking Nora is going to be gold. I can’t wait lol
This is seriously my favorite story right now, the absolute chaos naruto will bring with raven and freaking Nora is going to be gold. I can’t wait lol
4/10/2020 c3 Ravens3rdWing
I... have no clue what to say. It’s a very funny story and I was told to review so here I am. Reviewing.
I... have no clue what to say. It’s a very funny story and I was told to review so here I am. Reviewing.
4/10/2020 c3 AkihitoTheExiled
This chapter has me LMAO completely and my ribs hurt from laughing too much! =D
This chapter has me LMAO completely and my ribs hurt from laughing too much! =D
4/10/2020 c3 WeAreVenom5
I like this chapter, I also appreciate the time you are taking with the Berserker, you clearly love that story as much as we do. And I appreciate that you work and write everything for us even though you don’t have, I hope you realize you are inspiring any people such as myself to not give up and do something impactful for the lives of others and ourselves.
I like this chapter, I also appreciate the time you are taking with the Berserker, you clearly love that story as much as we do. And I appreciate that you work and write everything for us even though you don’t have, I hope you realize you are inspiring any people such as myself to not give up and do something impactful for the lives of others and ourselves.
4/10/2020 c3 Guest
Also, you probably don’t need to be told to ignore Gry and that one Guest from the 24th of March. Both of them are jealous of the fact you’re actually a good author and that you’ve been around longer than most of the big names in the community. Have a good rest of your year NZ
Also, you probably don’t need to be told to ignore Gry and that one Guest from the 24th of March. Both of them are jealous of the fact you’re actually a good author and that you’ve been around longer than most of the big names in the community. Have a good rest of your year NZ
4/10/2020 c3 Guest
NZ, I don’t think I’ve mentioned it in the past few years, but you are the absolute best! You finding RWBY was a gift from the gods, this story even more so.
ReaperofThings2002
NZ, I don’t think I’ve mentioned it in the past few years, but you are the absolute best! You finding RWBY was a gift from the gods, this story even more so.
ReaperofThings2002
4/10/2020 c3 Spacecore94
Again you have put a smile on my face. One thing though that has me curious is... what is his history with Winter?
Again you have put a smile on my face. One thing though that has me curious is... what is his history with Winter?
4/10/2020 c3 HitoNoName
let me get it right, Naruto and Raven were in a relationship and then Raven betrayed him
let me get it right, Naruto and Raven were in a relationship and then Raven betrayed him