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10/1/2020 c6 MelanthaRyon
You could make both Sebastián and Ciel refer to Grell as a "he" meanwhile Alex uses femenine pronouns. That way it would show two points of view on a single topic, as I doubt someone as Grell would be taken seriously by her choice ( be it because of the current time and closed ideas people allowed in their heads or because her personality can cause the bad impression of not being serious ).
Anyhow it's your choice, excellent chapter!
9/9/2020 c5 Gecko-loser
I'm sorry if I'm bothering you by asking but could you please continue this?I like it so far and this is one of the only black butler inserted oc stories that I like,its really nice how you keep them in charcter (I am not good at reviewing sorry) well they seem in charcter too me heh,good story
8/28/2020 c5 ImAFuckinFujoshit
Thank god! I finally read this! TwT
I'm gonna wait for the next update .
8/23/2020 c5 1DemonWolf25
It didn't have a plot before? Ok

I like the he just went back to bed.

Can't wait to read more :)
8/20/2020 c4 ImAFuckinFujoshit
Oof!
8/8/2020 c4 DemonWolf25
You are the only writer I have read where the person that was pulled into the story has said anything about Ciel's twin.
8/8/2020 c3 1Amber Mint
Ok, so seeing Ciel did NOT make Alex happier BUT THATS OK! Now he gets to crossdress for free!
8/8/2020 c2 Amber Mint
Poor Alex, he's stuck in another universe and he's all alone. Maybe he'll feel better once he sees Ciel or something. I can actually see him hanging out with Finnan as well... Oh, I loved how to him the obvious choice was to knock someone unconscious and steal their clothes lol
8/8/2020 c1 Amber Mint
I really like how this story is turning out! Alex has such a great personality, and I totally believe Caz needed some revenge. And yes, it is totally normal to buy 10 bags of chips and 9 buckets of ice-cream. (That might even be too little)
7/20/2020 c3 1DemonWolf25
Im not to sure about this story but it has made me laugh so i will give it a chance.
3/19/2020 c1 blaisetroise
interesting so far! curious as to what happens next!

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