
5/21 c37 Raven1302
Tyrian Callows would be a monster if he was ever to join the joshin cultists from Naruto lol. Bro you have some the perfect set ups for spin offs in the story like team crimson working for their grandpa or tyrian winter and the limo driver starting a journey together!
Tyrian Callows would be a monster if he was ever to join the joshin cultists from Naruto lol. Bro you have some the perfect set ups for spin offs in the story like team crimson working for their grandpa or tyrian winter and the limo driver starting a journey together!
5/18 c37
2Ahposhon
So I have a question for you good sir! Well really two actually! What ages would you say everyone is at this point in the story, and is Nicholas in end stage of his cancer? I don't really know much about cancer and the different stages so I don't know how far along his is. Keep up the good work on the story though, I really enjoy your writing and hope to see more of it!

So I have a question for you good sir! Well really two actually! What ages would you say everyone is at this point in the story, and is Nicholas in end stage of his cancer? I don't really know much about cancer and the different stages so I don't know how far along his is. Keep up the good work on the story though, I really enjoy your writing and hope to see more of it!
5/16 c37 jknapper1998
Loving this story. Can’t wait to see when Cinder and her team start some trouble.
Loving this story. Can’t wait to see when Cinder and her team start some trouble.
5/16 c37 BlackJack9961
well written Neon. Also calling it now Pyrra's going to have Uzumaki as one of her family names, and at least 6 half siblings (the Shnee trio, Ruby, Yang, and Blake) and 4 step siblings (Cinder, Roman, Neo, and Senna). oh the glorious chaos to come once the kids are Beacon age!
well written Neon. Also calling it now Pyrra's going to have Uzumaki as one of her family names, and at least 6 half siblings (the Shnee trio, Ruby, Yang, and Blake) and 4 step siblings (Cinder, Roman, Neo, and Senna). oh the glorious chaos to come once the kids are Beacon age!
5/9 c37 epsilon306
I made some drawings with AI from the fanfic, I don't know how to send them to you.
I made some drawings with AI from the fanfic, I don't know how to send them to you.
5/8 c19 gmhribrahimsoleh89
Good sir. You are not letting me down whatsoever. I’ll be content with however much content you put out. This story reminded me your other story,Take the girl” which I also love
Good sir. You are not letting me down whatsoever. I’ll be content with however much content you put out. This story reminded me your other story,Take the girl” which I also love
5/8 c37 Guest
FUCK EM UP NARUTO!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
FUCK EM UP NARUTO!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
5/7 c21 percy jockson
as a dark souls fan reading how you are doing in elden ring made me lol cuz i know the pain
as a dark souls fan reading how you are doing in elden ring made me lol cuz i know the pain
5/7 c11 gmhribrahimsoleh89
Pardon my crass language. Every chapter is f**king amazing. The divergent, the what ifs and the butterfly effect. Come on come on. Doing amazing
Pardon my crass language. Every chapter is f**king amazing. The divergent, the what ifs and the butterfly effect. Come on come on. Doing amazing
5/6 c12 Sakumon16
No. I’m out of here. Jacques should have died or been imprisoned a long time ago. But letting him get away with this? I will no longer read this. Oh well, I suppose not every story that I read is the right thing for me.
No. I’m out of here. Jacques should have died or been imprisoned a long time ago. But letting him get away with this? I will no longer read this. Oh well, I suppose not every story that I read is the right thing for me.
5/6 c11 Sakumon16
Well, I certainly didn’t see that bit with Marcus coming. He’s Willow’s long lost half brother? Also, the Schnees and their friends are badass
Well, I certainly didn’t see that bit with Marcus coming. He’s Willow’s long lost half brother? Also, the Schnees and their friends are badass