12/4/2023 c1 1LoneSilverW0lf
Meddling siblings, potential healing concerning Jaune's crippling self doubt, soul searching, Renora getting together together, Jaune getting some loving, sign me up! I can't wait to see where this goes!
Meddling siblings, potential healing concerning Jaune's crippling self doubt, soul searching, Renora getting together together, Jaune getting some loving, sign me up! I can't wait to see where this goes!
4/23/2023 c1 Guest
Could have been good, except this never went anywhere.
Could have been good, except this never went anywhere.
10/16/2021 c1 daniel8472
That was a really good start to this story. I'd love to see what you do next with it, looking forward to another chapter when you're ready
That was a really good start to this story. I'd love to see what you do next with it, looking forward to another chapter when you're ready
1/27/2021 c1 2ShadowRex232
I absolutely love this, when i saw the post date but I hope you make a chapter two.
I absolutely love this, when i saw the post date but I hope you make a chapter two.
10/7/2020 c1 67bubbajack
Okay you've got my attention with the first chap, and I'm wondering 'Now what?'. Carry on.
Okay you've got my attention with the first chap, and I'm wondering 'Now what?'. Carry on.
8/5/2020 c1 Bored librarian
Where is the next chapter button? I need it
Where is the next chapter button? I need it
6/22/2020 c1 8Bartholemeow
After reading the other reviews, I've found it difficult to criticize this without rubbing salt into your wounds.
But, seeing the popularity of this fanfic, I think it would be in your best interest to improve the fic so that the negative comments are drowned out by the positive ones.
If you wish to hear my advice, please PM me. If not, then best of luck to you.
After reading the other reviews, I've found it difficult to criticize this without rubbing salt into your wounds.
But, seeing the popularity of this fanfic, I think it would be in your best interest to improve the fic so that the negative comments are drowned out by the positive ones.
If you wish to hear my advice, please PM me. If not, then best of luck to you.
5/9/2020 c1 The Guy
More please!
More please!
3/17/2020 c1 Guest
That was really good. I like the idea cause its so funny and out of no ware. I'm guess the next chapter are gonna be from each of the girls perspective as to get the idea of when and why they fell for jaune and maybe have them all want to tell at the end of the chapters. Its a unique concept which I haven't seen much of in a while. I hope you update soon and have a good day.
That was really good. I like the idea cause its so funny and out of no ware. I'm guess the next chapter are gonna be from each of the girls perspective as to get the idea of when and why they fell for jaune and maybe have them all want to tell at the end of the chapters. Its a unique concept which I haven't seen much of in a while. I hope you update soon and have a good day.
3/16/2020 c1 Guest
Ah yes, the typical “why would any girl like me?” idiotic choice for a fanfic that directly contradicts Jaune’s character. Do I need to remind you be chased after Weiss Schnee who is literally the most unreachable and out of your league girl you can find yet Jaune believed he could date her?
Like seriously, I know you’re just a virgin but try to be more creative with your stories instead of copying other people’s works.
Ah yes, the typical “why would any girl like me?” idiotic choice for a fanfic that directly contradicts Jaune’s character. Do I need to remind you be chased after Weiss Schnee who is literally the most unreachable and out of your league girl you can find yet Jaune believed he could date her?
Like seriously, I know you’re just a virgin but try to be more creative with your stories instead of copying other people’s works.