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5/13 c15 KnightyNight
Get that overconfident Mechanized-Angel Seraph Zealot, make her pay for EVERY OUNCE of pain that poor Micaela suffered and died upon in the Original Paradox Story, PLEASE don't let poor Micaela die... *sniffles* T_T
4/25 c1 KnightyNight
I personally would've preferred that Luka's LoC-gained weapon was the "Sword of the Heavens" that is obtained after defeating LoC-Micaela as it is a weapon exclusive to both Micaela-chan and Luka after all and as such it'd be a LOT more badass that way, but I suppose Excalibur is just as splendid, just not as impactful as the "Sword of the Heavens" would be imho is all. ;

Looking forward to reading more regardless, hopefully IlliAss (yes, I spelled her name like that on purpose due to her generally shitty personality in regards to monster girls and so forth) actually develops genuine compassion and a sharp change from her usual "kill all monster girls and all who don't revere/worship", otherwise she'll be an absolute pain in the ass like she was all throughout the entire main story/sidequests in part 1/2 of MGQP, here's hoping this fic applies a MUCH NEEDED fix to her in that regard as well as a few notable changes that I REALLY hope do occur.
3/3 c67 2Jamie-OG
: Ending was crazy, Paradox Luka breaking down and giving made it more realistic, very good.
12/12/2022 c67 6Proud Parent
The balls to having everyone in this story die in a way that would make the Doomslayer proud
Chaos God Luka route unlocked
11/3/2022 c67 Guest
Fantastic story! You manage to make parts of it, funny, awesome and tragic. This was an awesome story with lots of interesting characters. Brilliant work!
6/6/2022 c66 genilgames
Hahahaha, good Luka, knowing you can't kill them (and I believe death would be a very mild punishment) you did something they feared even more than death, will force them to work together hahahahahah
6/5/2022 c34 genilgames
Damn Ilias, this will come back, we will exterminate your archangels and display their heads as trophies.

And then I'll earn the title of Champion (God Slayer) by finishing you off.

(If I were Luka I would have tried hard to kill at least 1 Seraphim, Gnosis, she won't be missed by anyone, and as she tried to kill his aunt, it's only fair that he does the same)
6/4/2022 c29 genilgames
Alipheese Fateburn XV(15), I used to look up to you, I saw you as a true hero who fought for freedom, equality and peace.

But seeing your descriptions in Paradox, I was very, disappointed, I misjudged you, it seems that in the end, you were no different from the cruel monsters that abused their power.

So when part 3 comes out, I won't hesitate to take you down
6/2/2022 c20 genilgames
I'm sure Ilias won't be happy about this, you guys need the hero's support and antagonizing him like that will make him accumulate a lot of negative points about you
6/1/2022 c6 genilgames
Well Luka boy, you are in the crosshairs of the 3 greatest forces of the multiverse, I pray mercy for your poor soul and for your Luka jr, because all beings aiming at you will not have mercy from a Shota like you
4/23/2021 c67 32NeoScriptGenius12
As dire as the steaks were, the parts with the Chaos Goddess felt flat given how she had the verbosity and vocabulary of a 5th grader in a schoolyard fight. It’s rather hard to take BA seriously during these dire scenes when she speaks like on over the top womanchild whose pissed because she didn’t get her snacks.

Maybe the way she spoke and acted was supposed to come off as creepy, but it just didn’t click for me.
12/5/2020 c67 6Fish on Land
Congratulations on finishing this story. You've done a great job on translating Paradox into a prose format.

I'm looking forward to your next story, and I'm glad that you've decided to alter the Ancestors' personalities. There's a good chance that their blog post profiles are negatively biased, anyway, just as the Archangels' profiles are implied to be positively biased.
12/5/2020 c67 3The-4uditor
Imma tip my hat to you for being able to finish a story, which i did my hardest (and failed) to succeed in like 12 different stories. I'm sure it took quite a bit of brain to put this together, so how about some ginger ale and 48 hours of playing with your imagination to see how your future story goes?
12/5/2020 c67 A Confused Gender
Haha, well I do suppose this ending is as fitting as any other. Thank you for your hard work and effort in writing this great story, even despite the absolutely underrated attention this fic is receiving. When it comes to self-motivation and update speed, you're an exceptional one among the writers of fanfiction, and you should damn well be proud of that.

Good work, pal. Thanks for everything! I look forward to your next story.
12/2/2020 c66 6Fish on Land
Now Luka is ready to solve the paradox, once and for all.

Do you plan on continuing this story, or are you going to start a new one?
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