for Monster girl quest Paradox: New Game Plus12/2/2020 c66 
3The-4uditor
I don't see a Completed tag, so I guess there is still much more to work with, especially with the new collab going on.
By the way, now Ilias' conversation at the start of the game makes kind of sense... If Part 3 will actually show that Luka really went through this kind of New Game before the plot started, props for you.
3The-4uditorI don't see a Completed tag, so I guess there is still much more to work with, especially with the new collab going on.
By the way, now Ilias' conversation at the start of the game makes kind of sense... If Part 3 will actually show that Luka really went through this kind of New Game before the plot started, props for you.
11/29/2020 c65 7Fish on Land
...Wow. This entire chapter* is amazing, from the battle of the Black Alices to the destruction of the Paradox world. I especially liked Tamamo's last words: hopefully something like this will happen in Part 3 as well.
* aside from some minor issues, e.g. "finished to break her mood" would probably be better as "broken her good mood"
7Fish on Land...Wow. This entire chapter* is amazing, from the battle of the Black Alices to the destruction of the Paradox world. I especially liked Tamamo's last words: hopefully something like this will happen in Part 3 as well.
* aside from some minor issues, e.g. "finished to break her mood" would probably be better as "broken her good mood"
11/28/2020 c65 A Confused Gender
Granberia's a damn badass as always, huh? Even with the limited screentime. Oh boy, now what... Luka's basically won a bittersweet victory at this point, but then there's the foreboding from the last few chapters with the Reaper... Hmm. Curious, curious. I shall eagerly anticipate the next chapter, thanks for providing such great content as always.
Granberia's a damn badass as always, huh? Even with the limited screentime. Oh boy, now what... Luka's basically won a bittersweet victory at this point, but then there's the foreboding from the last few chapters with the Reaper... Hmm. Curious, curious. I shall eagerly anticipate the next chapter, thanks for providing such great content as always.
11/25/2020 c64 A Confused Gender
Huh. Well, I wasn't expecting Uriela's death to be quite so solemn, nor did I forsee Lilith's end to be but a mere footnote. Splendidly done as always, this story really is too underrated in my opinion.
Huh. Well, I wasn't expecting Uriela's death to be quite so solemn, nor did I forsee Lilith's end to be but a mere footnote. Splendidly done as always, this story really is too underrated in my opinion.
11/22/2020 c63 1Triforcedlink
Zion's dryed fish. And Paradox Tamamo's likely going to teach Ilias word of dispel to help turn the tide. What a fun chapter. Lol
1TriforcedlinkZion's dryed fish. And Paradox Tamamo's likely going to teach Ilias word of dispel to help turn the tide. What a fun chapter. Lol
11/18/2020 c62 7Fish on Land
Normally, I don't like it when battles drag on for multiple chapters, but I've been engaged this whole time.
I wonder if Part 3 will also have Kagetsumugi turning against Black Alice.
7Fish on LandNormally, I don't like it when battles drag on for multiple chapters, but I've been engaged this whole time.
I wonder if Part 3 will also have Kagetsumugi turning against Black Alice.
11/16/2020 c61 Fish on Land
Just a tip, you should include some kind of line break when you switch perspectives. Early in the chapter, I got lost when you switched from Zion to Morrigan and then to Uriela.
Just a tip, you should include some kind of line break when you switch perspectives. Early in the chapter, I got lost when you switched from Zion to Morrigan and then to Uriela.
11/14/2020 c61 1Triforcedlink
This can't end well. I'm thinking that this might end up being a dead end route for Luka since he and his party are surrounded on all sides by hostile parties.
1TriforcedlinkThis can't end well. I'm thinking that this might end up being a dead end route for Luka since he and his party are surrounded on all sides by hostile parties.
11/12/2020 c60 7Fish on Land
The battle continues, and I still can't predict how things will turn out.
7Fish on LandThe battle continues, and I still can't predict how things will turn out.
11/7/2020 c59 Fish on Land
Two of the things this fanfic does well are translating MGQ combat into a written format and showing the perspective of a range of characters, and this chapter is a great example of both.
It's also funny how everyone keeps getting creeped out by Neris.
Two of the things this fanfic does well are translating MGQ combat into a written format and showing the perspective of a range of characters, and this chapter is a great example of both.
It's also funny how everyone keeps getting creeped out by Neris.
11/7/2020 c59 1Triforcedlink
I think there was some foreshadowing way back with Micaela... Did Makai manage to make their own fallen angels?
1TriforcedlinkI think there was some foreshadowing way back with Micaela... Did Makai manage to make their own fallen angels?
11/6/2020 c58 7Fish on Land
Sorry I couldn't leave a review until now, this site has been having problems.
Anyway, it's good that Luka is back and everyone else is learning to work together. But it doesn't look like the Paradox will be ending anytime soon...
7Fish on LandSorry I couldn't leave a review until now, this site has been having problems.
Anyway, it's good that Luka is back and everyone else is learning to work together. But it doesn't look like the Paradox will be ending anytime soon...
10/28/2020 c56 7Fish on Land
I was definitely not expecting the Goddess of Chaos herself to intervene.
Micaela has died as well... the party is slowly but surely dwindling.
Now it's Ilias' time to shine. Hopefully she can help Luka
7Fish on LandI was definitely not expecting the Goddess of Chaos herself to intervene.
Micaela has died as well... the party is slowly but surely dwindling.
Now it's Ilias' time to shine. Hopefully she can help Luka