for Monster girl quest Paradox: New Game Plus8/16/2020 c40 
1Triforcedlink
Hmmm. I don't think they understand that part of the reason he can go back in time is because Reaper is supporting him. I highly doubt they'll let a brainwashed Luka wreck havoc on timeline, hell, they'll probably reverse any mental damage they do to him. lol
1TriforcedlinkHmmm. I don't think they understand that part of the reason he can go back in time is because Reaper is supporting him. I highly doubt they'll let a brainwashed Luka wreck havoc on timeline, hell, they'll probably reverse any mental damage they do to him. lol
8/13/2020 c39 Triforcedlink
I honestly can't tell if if Pocket!Morrigan would have been better off staying in the castle or not.
Also surprised myself when I felt a pang of sympathy for her when I she called out for her sisters. Not that she doesn't deserve it considering how many people she's probably killed without mercy.
I honestly can't tell if if Pocket!Morrigan would have been better off staying in the castle or not.
Also surprised myself when I felt a pang of sympathy for her when I she called out for her sisters. Not that she doesn't deserve it considering how many people she's probably killed without mercy.
8/12/2020 c39 7Fish on Land
At least Ilias has had some character development.
...On the other hand, Morrigan has received some comeuppance.
[Yao then fell on her sword first]
You might want to reword this, because "fall on one's sword" is an idiom that means you accept responsibility for a mistake.
7Fish on LandAt least Ilias has had some character development.
...On the other hand, Morrigan has received some comeuppance.
[Yao then fell on her sword first]
You might want to reword this, because "fall on one's sword" is an idiom that means you accept responsibility for a mistake.
8/12/2020 c39 2Waifugodsama
This chapter was quite nice seeing how ilias finally decided to accept monster, though I do feel quite bad for Morrigan though after all she was one of Luka's companion for a while. Maybe her soul would be transfered and fuse with the other Morrigan in the world? Cause I feel it would be quite a waste to just get rid of her like that.
2WaifugodsamaThis chapter was quite nice seeing how ilias finally decided to accept monster, though I do feel quite bad for Morrigan though after all she was one of Luka's companion for a while. Maybe her soul would be transfered and fuse with the other Morrigan in the world? Cause I feel it would be quite a waste to just get rid of her like that.
8/10/2020 c38 17Najee
And to think that the Luka over at the other story is having fun sexy times with adult Tamamo, but Luka and Tamamo are in absolute agony here.
17NajeeAnd to think that the Luka over at the other story is having fun sexy times with adult Tamamo, but Luka and Tamamo are in absolute agony here.
8/8/2020 c38 1Triforcedlink
I am really wondering just what Shiki!Tamamo was thinking? Not only was Alice crucial to their allaince with the 15th, but she was also central to the timeline, which means killing her only would spread chaos.
Well I geuss that's what you get when you're thinking with only your murderboner.
1TriforcedlinkI am really wondering just what Shiki!Tamamo was thinking? Not only was Alice crucial to their allaince with the 15th, but she was also central to the timeline, which means killing her only would spread chaos.
Well I geuss that's what you get when you're thinking with only your murderboner.
8/5/2020 c37 Triforcedlink
Wow. I think this is the grimmest chapter you've made yet. Did not expect this too happen either so count me surprised.
Wow. I think this is the grimmest chapter you've made yet. Did not expect this too happen either so count me surprised.
8/5/2020 c37 geno13345687
Well luka is going to go on a war path and Morrigan is kinda screwed all in all the story has me hooked
Well luka is going to go on a war path and Morrigan is kinda screwed all in all the story has me hooked
8/5/2020 c37 7Fish on Land
New types of Apoptosis, a new Tartarus (nearly), and the deaths of Alice and her companions... This is a story when I can never predict what is going to happen next.
7Fish on LandNew types of Apoptosis, a new Tartarus (nearly), and the deaths of Alice and her companions... This is a story when I can never predict what is going to happen next.