for Monster girl quest Paradox: New Game Plus3/22/2020 c4 
7Fish on Land
Am I really the only person leaving reviews?
I don't have any knowledge of JoJo and I still got that reference.
The discussion in this chapter reminded me of how, in canon, few monsters actually show any signs of pleasure from sex, to the point that TRTR needed to address this in a Q&A.
7Fish on LandAm I really the only person leaving reviews?
I don't have any knowledge of JoJo and I still got that reference.
The discussion in this chapter reminded me of how, in canon, few monsters actually show any signs of pleasure from sex, to the point that TRTR needed to address this in a Q&A.
3/18/2020 c3 Fish on Land
It's always interesting to see how characters react to a NG.
This isn't a criticism of your writing, but it's weird to think of Alicetroemeria being yandere towards Heinrich when she also has a request scene.
[Time to make this world a service]
This should be "Time to do this world a service".
It's always interesting to see how characters react to a NG.
This isn't a criticism of your writing, but it's weird to think of Alicetroemeria being yandere towards Heinrich when she also has a request scene.
[Time to make this world a service]
This should be "Time to do this world a service".
3/16/2020 c1 Fish on Land
It would be better to put more description of how Luka is different: is his expression less cheerful, is his armor made out of better metals?
Doesn't Nero only stop time if you run away from him?
It would be better to put more description of how Luka is different: is his expression less cheerful, is his armor made out of better metals?
Doesn't Nero only stop time if you run away from him?