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8/20 c3 Guest
? Sooo what happens
7/27/2021 c3 K
Isn’t it time that you completed stories instead of just leaving them and starting a new one? Your stories show promise, but that’s all!

Author Reply: I am finding I have significantly less time and motivation to write in comparison to what I once did. My enthusiasm for the site in general has also waned considerable. I don’t know if this is temporary or permanent. Sorry.

Thanks for the compliment all the same. Glad you see my stories show promise.
6/12/2021 c3 K
A year on a cliff edge - really!

Author Reply: Although I haven’t abandoned any of my stories, I found my time to write and inspiration lacking. You have a point, and I am sorry.
9/3/2020 c3 christjp05
An interesting ride. Left on a cliff hanger, I hope you can resolve it. So far the writing is good with tone and character voice. Keep up the good work.
6/20/2020 c3 hunzbookwyrm
Interesting start,hope to see more from you soon.
6/19/2020 c3 2mwinter1
Awaiting more.
6/19/2020 c3 35Car45
Another great chapter. Don't leave us on this cliffhanger too long.
6/18/2020 c3 7csg-III
I can definitely see why Dudley's change of attitude, although welcome, rubs Harry off the wrong way and make him more suspicious of "Nora". At this point, he knows she doesn't want him dead, and he knows she somehow made Dudley change for the better. And, in his point of view, she kissed him out of nowhere. It's very possible that he might be thinking that he has a dangerous stalker with a crush and is wary of getting closer to her over these concerns.

I very much enjoyed Dudley being friendly to Harry. And I also enjoyed that Dudley still cracks jokes at Harry's expense, but in a much more friendly manner now - the "Now I am not so sure" bit. I know that they warmed up to each other eventually in canon (with mentions that their children played together), and I like to see it happening early here.

Hehehe If only Professor McGonagall knew that Tonks is not so much above misbehaving XD But yeah, I can definitely see why Tonks wants to omit some details, like the long and slow kiss she gave Harry. Hope Professor McGonagall doesn't find out about that so soon. It will be very interesting to see how Tonks herself will handle her blossoming feelings for Harry, especially since it's a very much forbidden romance.

I'm sure the young Mr. Potter bit made Bellatrix suspect there was something wrong with "her sister". Narcissa would be more likely to refer to Harry as "Potter scum" than "Mr Potter" I think. And the bit of the "recruit the witch in Germany" was a clever way to confirm her suspicious, and unfortunately Tonks fell for it. I just hope she can escape the Death Eaters before they can hurt her.

Excellent chapter as usual.
6/18/2020 c3 BMS
Well, that didn't go well.
Amatuers should never play spy.
6/18/2020 c3 James Birdsong
Delightful story

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6/18/2020 c3 Brockster550
Wow, Tonks as Nora kissing Harry was an unexpected, but excellent way to get him to relax to the point of willingly having his face covered to avoid Bellatrix the insane to spot him. Tonks using her metamorphmagus abilities to transform into Narcissa and try to throw Bellatrix off track was something I didn't see coming. Now it seems like Tonks will be taken prisoner and if the death eaters discover her true identity, they could have her arrested for identity theft. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
6/18/2020 c3 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
6/18/2020 c3 27JustBored21
Brilliant chapter
6/14/2020 c1 Bostonette
Oh great, another one of these "keep Harry in the dark" fics. Im out
6/6/2020 c1 2Joshua Ruehadan
Definitely a good premise to begin writing on, i’m always happy to see another fan keeping the Harry/Tonks ship afloat!
This plot has the potential for a shit ton of slow burn angst when Harry has to deal with the truth.
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