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3/26/2020 c1 Guest
Hello. This is a good start. There are some tweaks needed here and there but not enough to take one's attention away from the story. Looking forward to where you take it.

I'm sorry if this sounds weird but uh... in case there is some semblance between this OC and you in real life in terms of your situation, then I hope you're okay now. This may just be words coming from a stranger on the internet but know that it's true. If I assumed incorrectly and the backstory is completely unrelated to you, then I'm glad.
3/23/2020 c1 2AnimeLover229
Great start.

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