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4/8/2020 c1 5DestinyDragons101
Hey! I wanted to help you clean up your writing style a bit. It looks interesting so far but your writing itself may need a hand. Grammar issues are big turn-aways for readers, so instead of saying - Tony is almost asleep standing up and I have to make dinner, - , try saying something like "Tony is almost asleep standing up, and I have to make dinner," snapped Rosebelle, frustrated, before ignoring Alex.

If you need help with sentencing let me know too! You seem like you're trying, so I'm giving you a chance.

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