
11/28/2023 c1 Bluenait
so he had not enough and is not fed up with the village?
so sill stupid pussy beta bitch Naruto ?
so he had not enough and is not fed up with the village?
so sill stupid pussy beta bitch Naruto ?
11/17/2023 c1 Unknown
So hiruzen repeated reasoning for allowing the circumstances that naruto is in because of avoiding the probability of war so it is we let you suffer because the villagers need to vent their anger and we know we could let your life better and godfather would have been there for you but we choose not too even though your parents sacrifice and hiruzen vowing to help your mother
Naruto letting that slide is quite sad
So hiruzen repeated reasoning for allowing the circumstances that naruto is in because of avoiding the probability of war so it is we let you suffer because the villagers need to vent their anger and we know we could let your life better and godfather would have been there for you but we choose not too even though your parents sacrifice and hiruzen vowing to help your mother
Naruto letting that slide is quite sad
11/16/2023 c1 Guest
Hiruzen basic apology is like we knew that you we suffering and alone even though your parent's sacrifice and currently you have godfather we could have made your life better but choose not too for it might or might not cause a war among villages but this doesn't mean you have the right to lash out and please don't hate the village for clearly it's ideas about you
Hiruzen basic apology is like we knew that you we suffering and alone even though your parent's sacrifice and currently you have godfather we could have made your life better but choose not too for it might or might not cause a war among villages but this doesn't mean you have the right to lash out and please don't hate the village for clearly it's ideas about you
11/16/2023 c1 Unknown
It started nice but there needs to be redemption chapter for hiruzen because his way of redemption shouldn't be a few words that totally sums up to "we let you suffer even though we knew of your parents and godfather being not to take responsibility. We could have done better but choose not too"
It started nice but there needs to be redemption chapter for hiruzen because his way of redemption shouldn't be a few words that totally sums up to "we let you suffer even though we knew of your parents and godfather being not to take responsibility. We could have done better but choose not too"
10/28/2023 c37
5jamthacreator
This story is amazing, I'm sorry you experienced such immature comments, hopefully you still write because you have an amazing talent and skill for crafting stories. Thanks for the amazing read!

This story is amazing, I'm sorry you experienced such immature comments, hopefully you still write because you have an amazing talent and skill for crafting stories. Thanks for the amazing read!
10/25/2023 c1 not a fan
After reading the first chapter, this story caught my attention... the only problem is that I have read the reviews and if he goes from having suicidal thoughts to forgiving everything... no thanks, I would have liked to see how Naruto had to little by little they manage those thoughts, as they almost decide to commit suicide several times because the villagers are idiots, until little by little they see how their intolerance is taking them to the brink of another attack by the nine-tailed fox... and finally Look at all the damage you have caused to who you should see as your hero or guardian...
the fact that you also limit the use of clones... that's why you take away the technique and don't use it... if you're going to limit it... it's not worth having it
I just hope that if one day you decide to continue where you left off, you will think about redoing the story to make it a little more believable.
In real life a person with suicidal thoughts will not stop having them without a lot of help and a lot of time... your Naruto has overcome it in 2 chapters which is stupid... just a comment
After reading the first chapter, this story caught my attention... the only problem is that I have read the reviews and if he goes from having suicidal thoughts to forgiving everything... no thanks, I would have liked to see how Naruto had to little by little they manage those thoughts, as they almost decide to commit suicide several times because the villagers are idiots, until little by little they see how their intolerance is taking them to the brink of another attack by the nine-tailed fox... and finally Look at all the damage you have caused to who you should see as your hero or guardian...
the fact that you also limit the use of clones... that's why you take away the technique and don't use it... if you're going to limit it... it's not worth having it
I just hope that if one day you decide to continue where you left off, you will think about redoing the story to make it a little more believable.
In real life a person with suicidal thoughts will not stop having them without a lot of help and a lot of time... your Naruto has overcome it in 2 chapters which is stupid... just a comment
9/18/2023 c37 Guest
Good your stories suck 6pu limpdick
Good your stories suck 6pu limpdick
9/17/2023 c19 GrandTacoBell
It’s torture and interrogation not tourture and investigation. Just curious where did you hear that?
It’s torture and interrogation not tourture and investigation. Just curious where did you hear that?
9/2/2023 c37 Guest
So you quit the fanfic called “I quit” lol
So you quit the fanfic called “I quit” lol
8/19/2023 c17
13Write Your Wrongs
This story is a bit underappreciated. So far, it is a very enjoyable read.

This story is a bit underappreciated. So far, it is a very enjoyable read.
6/9/2023 c37 Guest
Good riddance and FUCK YOU!
Good riddance and FUCK YOU!
6/8/2023 c37 Guest
good riddance and fuck you
good riddance and fuck you
6/10/2023 c10 Username6166
It definitely is becoming a more generic fic but honestly I'm okay with that, it's still enjoyable and better-written than most similar fics
It definitely is becoming a more generic fic but honestly I'm okay with that, it's still enjoyable and better-written than most similar fics