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4/20/2020 c1 25The Chortling Mermaid
I love this story so much. I love how well you captured Nastasia's pain, and how even early on her devotion to her oath was so hard on her. And also the parallels between Timpani saving Blumiere, and then Bleck saving Nastasia. It's also so in-character for Count Bleck to remind her she can leave at any time, but then be so hurt by the suggestion of never seeing Timpani. Ughhh this story hit me in the feels. Nassy really is the best girl. It makes the events of SPM so heartbreaking. I also like how she isn't written to be so like detached or like cold at the moment, and that she realizes that she loves him, never totally losing hope that her love could be mutual one day.

33 stay safe!
3/25/2020 c1 Megan Romero
I hope you're doing okay and this is a nice one shot.
3/25/2020 c1 134lalalei
Aww. This was a really sweet story! Very introspective and sad.
3/25/2020 c1 6GamerGirl54321
i love this
quality spm content is always good to see
3/25/2020 c1 FawfulGirl
Agreed Nastasia is the best girl ever!

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