for Without You, There is No Point in Surviving4/21 c1 avilasamantha
As I was reading, I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story is rich with visual potential, and I’d love to help bring that to life. Whether it’s an intense, action-packed sequence or a quiet, emotional beat, your work deserves to be experienced in a way that captures its full depth and energy.
As I was reading, I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story is rich with visual potential, and I’d love to help bring that to life. Whether it’s an intense, action-packed sequence or a quiet, emotional beat, your work deserves to be experienced in a way that captures its full depth and energy.
3/25 c23 Samuel Secret
I just wanted to say that I love the pace of the story, although I do want a little more chaos. I am almost certain that it was hard to not start making the days too similar, almost repeating yourself, but also not to skip too much time.
I just wanted to say that I love the pace of the story, although I do want a little more chaos. I am almost certain that it was hard to not start making the days too similar, almost repeating yourself, but also not to skip too much time.
3/25 c10 Samuel Secret
I lived this chapter, but I also love the idea that after Sweeney and Nellie slept together, (without any clothes) Nellie wakes up with a jolt and finds Sweeney completely clothed, standing in the middle of the room, and Nellie would suspect that something happened, but Sweeney would keep saying no. I hope you understand what I mean, and I also wonder if you like that idea.
PS- It's okay that you have typos, it doesn't make your writing worse.
I lived this chapter, but I also love the idea that after Sweeney and Nellie slept together, (without any clothes) Nellie wakes up with a jolt and finds Sweeney completely clothed, standing in the middle of the room, and Nellie would suspect that something happened, but Sweeney would keep saying no. I hope you understand what I mean, and I also wonder if you like that idea.
PS- It's okay that you have typos, it doesn't make your writing worse.
1/19/2022 c25 
201Jenny Heidern
I loved it, I read it from the beginning to the end... I loved every detail of this couple and above all I loved how you handled their personalities... The great adventure of these two, without a doubt, I loved it. What seemed somewhat unnecessary to me is to continue it in another story... I mean, I think that the birth of Sanson could continue in this story. Sorry if my english is not good... I'm using a translator.
But the truth, I love your story and it has a lot of potential. It's in my favorites, sorry if I don't comment on the previous chapters but I don't go to often. Sweenett forever!
greetings and take care!
Atte J.H
201Jenny HeidernI loved it, I read it from the beginning to the end... I loved every detail of this couple and above all I loved how you handled their personalities... The great adventure of these two, without a doubt, I loved it. What seemed somewhat unnecessary to me is to continue it in another story... I mean, I think that the birth of Sanson could continue in this story. Sorry if my english is not good... I'm using a translator.
But the truth, I love your story and it has a lot of potential. It's in my favorites, sorry if I don't comment on the previous chapters but I don't go to often. Sweenett forever!
greetings and take care!
Atte J.H
7/24/2021 c25 22Ratty Darling
I am so proud of you for writing such a unique, wonderful story. I look forward to re-reading it again and finding out what happens in the sequel. <3 <3 sorry it took me so long to catch up, I wanted to give this the attention it deserves because it means a lot to me. YOU mean a lot to me. <3
22Ratty DarlingI am so proud of you for writing such a unique, wonderful story. I look forward to re-reading it again and finding out what happens in the sequel. <3 <3 sorry it took me so long to catch up, I wanted to give this the attention it deserves because it means a lot to me. YOU mean a lot to me. <3
7/9/2021 c25 3kornikouva
Finally! Though I can’t believe it’s ending. This has really been a great source of comfort through lockdown.
I hope I don’t have to wait long to meet the little bugger! x
3kornikouvaFinally! Though I can’t believe it’s ending. This has really been a great source of comfort through lockdown.
I hope I don’t have to wait long to meet the little bugger! x
4/23/2021 c23 1bellovettrix
The knitting scene was cute...and there's lot of sweet moments, i love it.
1bellovettrixThe knitting scene was cute...and there's lot of sweet moments, i love it.
4/22/2021 c23 bonkers4sweenett
Nice Sweeney is taking care of her. I hope somehow he'd let Nellie know that he truly cares, not only bc of the baby. It would lessen her stress. But they're making progress. Nice chapter. Xoxo
Nice Sweeney is taking care of her. I hope somehow he'd let Nellie know that he truly cares, not only bc of the baby. It would lessen her stress. But they're making progress. Nice chapter. Xoxo
3/19/2021 c22 Guest
i love it! i love it so much and i’m so glad you’ve finally updated it! i’ve been waiting and i was not disappointed!
i love it! i love it so much and i’m so glad you’ve finally updated it! i’ve been waiting and i was not disappointed!
2/23/2021 c21 bonkers4sweenett
Come on, Sweeney. Nellie doesn't owe you a kid. It's not her fault you lost Johanna. Why you punishing her that way. Just admit you love her already. Poor Nellie. I know Nellie loves Sweeney, but she have to realize she is also worthy to be loved as she is.
Come on, Sweeney. Nellie doesn't owe you a kid. It's not her fault you lost Johanna. Why you punishing her that way. Just admit you love her already. Poor Nellie. I know Nellie loves Sweeney, but she have to realize she is also worthy to be loved as she is.
2/22/2021 c21 22Ratty Darling
Such a wholesome, well written chapter. Thank you! I am excited to see what happens next.
22Ratty DarlingSuch a wholesome, well written chapter. Thank you! I am excited to see what happens next.
2/22/2021 c21 3kornikouva
So like our practical baker to nick a dish as a memento. That really cracked me up. BUUUUUUT best of all...stork on its way! Finally! I can’t wait really how she would tell him. Don’t make us wait for so long, love.
3kornikouvaSo like our practical baker to nick a dish as a memento. That really cracked me up. BUUUUUUT best of all...stork on its way! Finally! I can’t wait really how she would tell him. Don’t make us wait for so long, love.
1/28/2021 c20 22Ratty Darling
Awww! Thank you so much for the shout out!
Also, way to "spice things up"! Haha, looks like they are back at it. I look forward to reading what happens next!
22Ratty DarlingAwww! Thank you so much for the shout out!
Also, way to "spice things up"! Haha, looks like they are back at it. I look forward to reading what happens next!
1/24/2021 c15 2Why am I anxious
The parting glass is actually Scottish in origin. Its origin is Robert Burns a poet. Its popular in Ireland but not originated there.
2Why am I anxiousThe parting glass is actually Scottish in origin. Its origin is Robert Burns a poet. Its popular in Ireland but not originated there.