for Knights, Magic & Dovahkiin1/20 c1 AvidGamer1124
Fucking hell man... no one cares about all the "super duper cool shit" Jon has from vanilla Skyrim. You're wasting everyone's time listing out every damn thing he's taking and/or wearing. And it's enough to make me drop this bc it's almost always a sign of a subpar story
Fucking hell man... no one cares about all the "super duper cool shit" Jon has from vanilla Skyrim. You're wasting everyone's time listing out every damn thing he's taking and/or wearing. And it's enough to make me drop this bc it's almost always a sign of a subpar story
1/11 c10 Shadow55
When you about to update new chapter please
When you about to update new chapter please
12/13/2022 c3 Darkestcalling
far far to little information if she is tapped into it and also has spies of her own
also you are making Jon to human for the dovakin for supposedly being able to do everything he did and anyone who knows elder scrolls that definitely isnt human level ability
far far to little information if she is tapped into it and also has spies of her own
also you are making Jon to human for the dovakin for supposedly being able to do everything he did and anyone who knows elder scrolls that definitely isnt human level ability
11/29/2022 c8 
16Puffgirl1952 the 2nd
Reread the whole story and hoping for another update in the future...
16Puffgirl1952 the 2ndReread the whole story and hoping for another update in the future...
11/20/2022 c10 52pyrohelixdrago
I truly love this story well built and a lot of great plot can't wait till the Lannisters see Jon summon a dragon.
52pyrohelixdragoI truly love this story well built and a lot of great plot can't wait till the Lannisters see Jon summon a dragon.
11/16/2022 c10 RoninCav01
Just finished reading chapter 10 of your story. Very intriguing. I actually read it twice and planned on starting over again. Very enjoyable. Hope you update soon.
Just finished reading chapter 10 of your story. Very intriguing. I actually read it twice and planned on starting over again. Very enjoyable. Hope you update soon.
10/20/2022 c10 Shadow55
When you about to update new chapter please
When you about to update new chapter please
10/11/2022 c1 BoredKing
If Jon is endgame level and you take it from a lore perspective than Jon not being able to destroy an army singlehandedly is him being too weak rather than op. There's a shout that stops time, there's one than can call down meteorites, a shout to enthrall people, a shout that can instant kill, and so on. Pair that with the fact he is an Archmage and nothing short of a Daedric Prince/or an Elder Dragon should pose a threat. Seriously the dragonborn in lore is on that level.
If Jon is endgame level and you take it from a lore perspective than Jon not being able to destroy an army singlehandedly is him being too weak rather than op. There's a shout that stops time, there's one than can call down meteorites, a shout to enthrall people, a shout that can instant kill, and so on. Pair that with the fact he is an Archmage and nothing short of a Daedric Prince/or an Elder Dragon should pose a threat. Seriously the dragonborn in lore is on that level.
10/4/2022 c10 Guest
Would be cool if Jon taught Ned a healing spell
Maybe oak flesh to add to his defenses
Would be awesome if Jon also enchanted the bloodskal blade with deferent elements too since he’s the arch mage maybe have the enchanters in winterhold help too
Maybe have it shoot out different elements depending on jons mood
Maybe a fear slash that makes people run away lol
The slash is still damaging like a fully upgraded bloodskal blade but there’s some fear splash damage from the survivors
Maybe hysteria too lol
Maybe he could summon the gatekeeper of Skyrim Valhalla forgot his name but he was a big ass mother fucker
Would be cool if Jon taught Ned a healing spell
Maybe oak flesh to add to his defenses
Would be awesome if Jon also enchanted the bloodskal blade with deferent elements too since he’s the arch mage maybe have the enchanters in winterhold help too
Maybe have it shoot out different elements depending on jons mood
Maybe a fear slash that makes people run away lol
The slash is still damaging like a fully upgraded bloodskal blade but there’s some fear splash damage from the survivors
Maybe hysteria too lol
Maybe he could summon the gatekeeper of Skyrim Valhalla forgot his name but he was a big ass mother fucker
10/4/2022 c8 Guest
I wanna see the others skill tree lol ya could probably wiki it
Would be cool if jon has a very long lifespan like Serana so she won’t watch him wither and die with time
Mirak was alive for a hell of a long time so maybe dragon blood and souls is enough to make him unaging
I imagine in the real world having a soul and blood of a dragon would give him eternal longevity just like the dragons
The winter king is gonna get smacked under Jon’s knee
Jon’s got dragon friends that could make the true north’s winter landscape into hell
Wonder what would happen if Jon and all the dragons shout for storm call in his territory?
Make lightning more plentiful than snow fall that’s what XD
it would totally look like raijin island in one piece
Durnevir could probably command the night kings dead probably lol
I wanna see the others skill tree lol ya could probably wiki it
Would be cool if jon has a very long lifespan like Serana so she won’t watch him wither and die with time
Mirak was alive for a hell of a long time so maybe dragon blood and souls is enough to make him unaging
I imagine in the real world having a soul and blood of a dragon would give him eternal longevity just like the dragons
The winter king is gonna get smacked under Jon’s knee
Jon’s got dragon friends that could make the true north’s winter landscape into hell
Wonder what would happen if Jon and all the dragons shout for storm call in his territory?
Make lightning more plentiful than snow fall that’s what XD
it would totally look like raijin island in one piece
Durnevir could probably command the night kings dead probably lol