for Knights, Magic & Dovahkiin8/12/2021 c8 shadow-wild1
Great chap , thank for update
I would have liked to see the introduction of jon' s daughters to sansa and arya to learn more about their character and how they will get along with them.
I would have liked to see the introduction of jon' s daughters to sansa and arya to learn more about their character and how they will get along with them.
For "scorched halloween by going back up the chain of events, Petyr is the one responsible for the war, Ned has already declared in front of the whole court that Cersei's children are bastards, the war is inevitable at this point. For the continuation I hope that Jon will quickly discover that Lysa is working with Petyr (magic and intelligence).
Great chap , thank for update
I would have liked to see the introduction of jon' s daughters to sansa and arya to learn more about their character and how they will get along with them.
I would have liked to see the introduction of jon' s daughters to sansa and arya to learn more about their character and how they will get along with them.
For "scorched halloween by going back up the chain of events, Petyr is the one responsible for the war, Ned has already declared in front of the whole court that Cersei's children are bastards, the war is inevitable at this point. For the continuation I hope that Jon will quickly discover that Lysa is working with Petyr (magic and intelligence).
8/12/2021 c8 
1scorched halloween
Love this story. I'm curious how you're going to have Ned convince the Northern Lords to go to war in the south. They participated in the previous two wars because they had a stake in them. In Robert's Rebellion, they were avenging the Starks, and in the Iron born rebellion they were retaliating against the ironborn who have been plaguing them forever. But the Northern Lords have no stake in the war in the South as it currently is. If I were a Northern Lord, I'd say: why should I go to war for the sake of the Tullys, when even the Tullys (Lysa) won't go to war for the Tullys?
Anyways, I really like this story so far! Keep up the good work
1scorched halloweenLove this story. I'm curious how you're going to have Ned convince the Northern Lords to go to war in the south. They participated in the previous two wars because they had a stake in them. In Robert's Rebellion, they were avenging the Starks, and in the Iron born rebellion they were retaliating against the ironborn who have been plaguing them forever. But the Northern Lords have no stake in the war in the South as it currently is. If I were a Northern Lord, I'd say: why should I go to war for the sake of the Tullys, when even the Tullys (Lysa) won't go to war for the Tullys?
Anyways, I really like this story so far! Keep up the good work
8/12/2021 c7 ibzane
Stannis never converted to R'hollor. He doesn't believe in any gods. He only uses Melisandra because of her magic and never because of her religious beliefs. Only his wife and her uncle along with some of Dragonstone guards convert.
Stannis never converted to R'hollor. He doesn't believe in any gods. He only uses Melisandra because of her magic and never because of her religious beliefs. Only his wife and her uncle along with some of Dragonstone guards convert.
8/12/2021 c8 shinigami00000
yeah no,
honestly I thought the story was dead. but even if it made a comeback, it's not off to a good start. cliche and tropes define the chap and you need to explain everything twice. it's third person but it doesn't mean that you need to explain their thought process on top of just reiterating them verbally to fill the word count. a guy would think a writer after taking a break emerges better not worse
yeah no,
honestly I thought the story was dead. but even if it made a comeback, it's not off to a good start. cliche and tropes define the chap and you need to explain everything twice. it's third person but it doesn't mean that you need to explain their thought process on top of just reiterating them verbally to fill the word count. a guy would think a writer after taking a break emerges better not worse
8/12/2021 c8 xXwolfsterXx644
Definitely Can't wait for the next update for this and the other stories
Definitely Can't wait for the next update for this and the other stories
8/11/2021 c8 3Fyr RedNight
Brilliant work on this chapter.
Personally I think that you're doing a great job with Game of Thrones' lore.
Very much looking forward for the next update!
3Fyr RedNightBrilliant work on this chapter.
Personally I think that you're doing a great job with Game of Thrones' lore.
Very much looking forward for the next update!
8/11/2021 c8 jonale.fm
The waiting, the insufferable wai- *clears throat*, very good so far and will say sansa taking up arms, did not see that coming so soon but with the way things are going it may be fruitful for them to witness the healing of bran from Jon, and i wish you luck in the next update.
The waiting, the insufferable wai- *clears throat*, very good so far and will say sansa taking up arms, did not see that coming so soon but with the way things are going it may be fruitful for them to witness the healing of bran from Jon, and i wish you luck in the next update.