for Bringing the Dawn2/11 c58 Church21
Jon could have ended this war much faster if he hadnt decided he needed a side quest every other chapter. His dragons are big enough to draw his enemy into the feild and light them on fire. On top of that he has the Tyrells the riverlands and the North. Why isnt he at the gates of kings landing. Those 3 armies alone feild about 125 thousand troops per cannon. The weaterlands is like a quarter of that and they dont have dragons. Seems like hes wasting time to let his enemies plan
Jon could have ended this war much faster if he hadnt decided he needed a side quest every other chapter. His dragons are big enough to draw his enemy into the feild and light them on fire. On top of that he has the Tyrells the riverlands and the North. Why isnt he at the gates of kings landing. Those 3 armies alone feild about 125 thousand troops per cannon. The weaterlands is like a quarter of that and they dont have dragons. Seems like hes wasting time to let his enemies plan
2/10 c6 Church21
Plunge the North into war? Give me your daughter or i’ll attack the North lol. Easy to avoid just lazy reasons to accept
Plunge the North into war? Give me your daughter or i’ll attack the North lol. Easy to avoid just lazy reasons to accept
2/10 c5 Church21
Thats a little dumb; both Cat and Ned said they’d support Jon if he wanted to go for the thrown, yet when Robert comes they are going to agree with a betrothal for Sansa and Joeffry? They are effectively saying they are willing to sell their daughter to the enemy and then go to war with her husband. Like her have a free hostage for your side on us. In cannon it makes sense but in this scenario it makes no sense. You’d think they’d keep all their kids in the north just in case. Ned doesn’t have to accept the proposal. Sansa is like 13. He could just put off saying they will talk when shes older. It made little sense why they brought Arya south in cannon instead of leaving her at home with her mother in winterfell but I bet they will bring her and Sansa along in this just to mirror cannon
Thats a little dumb; both Cat and Ned said they’d support Jon if he wanted to go for the thrown, yet when Robert comes they are going to agree with a betrothal for Sansa and Joeffry? They are effectively saying they are willing to sell their daughter to the enemy and then go to war with her husband. Like her have a free hostage for your side on us. In cannon it makes sense but in this scenario it makes no sense. You’d think they’d keep all their kids in the north just in case. Ned doesn’t have to accept the proposal. Sansa is like 13. He could just put off saying they will talk when shes older. It made little sense why they brought Arya south in cannon instead of leaving her at home with her mother in winterfell but I bet they will bring her and Sansa along in this just to mirror cannon
1/31 c79 Guest
Musste es schon wieder die gierige Margary gibt so viele anständige Reachfrauen.
Musste es schon wieder die gierige Margary gibt so viele anständige Reachfrauen.
1/16 c50 Guest
This story is so stupid that it borders on insulting
This story is so stupid that it borders on insulting
1/16 c46 Guest
You had Jon marry sloppy seconds Margaery? This story is a joke.
You had Jon marry sloppy seconds Margaery? This story is a joke.
1/16 c43 Guest
Less dialogue in this story would be better for you, because the more you write, the dumber you sound.
Less dialogue in this story would be better for you, because the more you write, the dumber you sound.
1/16 c37 Guest
I can’t believe I’m saying this, but I think this is the undisputed dumbest written story in the fandom. Every action taken in this story is too nonsensical.
I can’t believe I’m saying this, but I think this is the undisputed dumbest written story in the fandom. Every action taken in this story is too nonsensical.
1/16 c34 Guest
Holy shit. Who is writing this? Nothing makes sense in this story. Coherency is a foreign concept. Author has to be in their early teens or even younger. This is ridiculous.
Holy shit. Who is writing this? Nothing makes sense in this story. Coherency is a foreign concept. Author has to be in their early teens or even younger. This is ridiculous.
1/16 c26 Guest
The Ned Stark talking like a retarded edgelord in the throne room was so stupidly cringe. Impossible to read.
The Ned Stark talking like a retarded edgelord in the throne room was so stupidly cringe. Impossible to read.
1/16 c23 Guest
You really do need to turn your brain off to enjoy this. Each chapter feels like it gets dumber and dumber in every aspect.
You really do need to turn your brain off to enjoy this. Each chapter feels like it gets dumber and dumber in every aspect.
1/8 c17 
19nagiten
so griff is aegon or is it a triple bluff first bluff blackfrye second bluff aegon rhaegar son third bluff Targaryen but not rhaegar son?
19nagitenso griff is aegon or is it a triple bluff first bluff blackfrye second bluff aegon rhaegar son third bluff Targaryen but not rhaegar son?
1/5 c79 avarath1
Has a long time happened between the publishing of the last couple of chapters and the ones before? Because there are glaring contradictions when comparing to something that happened only a few chapters back. For example, here Jaeron is an honorable fool because he sought peace wirh his brother and offered an army to reinstate Dorne. Except that when Aegon asked for a truce and aid, it was Margaery who came up with the idea and offered to write her brother on the spot.
Has a long time happened between the publishing of the last couple of chapters and the ones before? Because there are glaring contradictions when comparing to something that happened only a few chapters back. For example, here Jaeron is an honorable fool because he sought peace wirh his brother and offered an army to reinstate Dorne. Except that when Aegon asked for a truce and aid, it was Margaery who came up with the idea and offered to write her brother on the spot.