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12/9/2022 c1 fuze'89
Definitely intrigued so far. Wil definitely keep a lookout for updates
12/9/2022 c10 Wicked Witch of the Web
Just read your story again and I love ever minute thank you for sharing your wonderful writing XD
12/7/2022 c10 4candinaru25
well this is going to be an interresting reaction i can't wait to see.
12/5/2022 c10 Estelle Uzumaki
Too too good.
And the sister/brother relationship between Aria and Kol I love.
Can't wait to read the sequel.
12/5/2022 c10 1BlueLilyInDarkness
I love the way this is coming along. I can’t wait until Brady gets what he deserves. I’m excited for the next chapter!
11/30/2022 c10 Guest
love the dynamic between Kol and Aria
This honestly made my day :)
11/28/2022 c10 1reveress-plegue
More please…when u have time. Thank you
11/28/2022 c10 Margaret M Miller
Awesome so far
Love this story thank so much for ur hard work this is such a great read so far!
11/26/2022 c10 9DaSalvatore
I really enjoyed this. My only issue is that this chapter makes it 4/4 1/2 chapters with a cliffhanger (depending on how you define one). Given that the first chapter is "prologue," that's basically half the chapters ending in cliffhangers. And given you take your time in writing up the next one, it can really feel off-putting once I get to the end and find another one.

Take this chapter. You could have sliced the last part off so we could have immediately seen the reactions. And this situation especially feels like a deliberate "dun dun dun" choice by the author, rather than a natural stopping point.

Don't get me wrong, I absolutely love this story. It's my all-time favorite crossover of the franchises, and I've lost count how often I've reread it. But can we stop for a while? The past three chapters ended with: Cliffy - Kol reveals himself to Aria as her brother, Cliffy - Tyler gets kidnapped, and now Cliffy - Big shock of Aria having a child after the way she and Klaus struggled with the concept previously.

At some point, cliffhangers stop being hooks, and start getting annoying. For me, this story is dangerously close to that line.
11/26/2022 c10 Ajaybelle
I'm excited to read Klaus's reaction to the news about Ingrid having a kid honestly and thank you for updating after all those dreadful weeks of no update
11/25/2022 c10 Guest
During the questioning it's like these stupid werewolves have a suspicion that aria might be tied to teddy and yet they abducted him anyway. They know she's a witch that uses magic in ways that are unknown to them yet they risk pissing off. What a bunch of dumb fucks they certainly got what was coming to them. I hope that we don't have to wait long for another update. I'm curious to see what the stupid mystic falls gang is going to try.
11/25/2022 c10 Guest
idiot..
11/25/2022 c10 rinne.gremory.97
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Me encanto mil gracias por actualizar
11/25/2022 c10 2Angel JJK
Cool. Aria and Kol make a good team. Teddy will like more family. Look forward to more.
11/25/2022 c10 SkyGuardian22
Hello, love that you updated again, and hate you for the cliff hanger ( not really ). I would love to see Nik's reaction to that, hope you update soon.
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