for Apex6/12 c27 Guest
I like it!
Turning him into the Toad for punishment?
Chef's kiss!
I like it!
Turning him into the Toad for punishment?
Chef's kiss!
6/12 c15 
5BarbedCaress
The story is great!
Haters gonna hate.
Ignore them.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
5BarbedCaressThe story is great!
Haters gonna hate.
Ignore them.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
6/5 c1 bobweymann1
Aries_Writings on AO3 and (making money off you in Patreon) is plagerising this story. He's called it The Unchosen Champion. It's pissing me off because this is 1 of my favorites.
Aries_Writings on AO3 and (making money off you in Patreon) is plagerising this story. He's called it The Unchosen Champion. It's pissing me off because this is 1 of my favorites.
6/4 c4 Alkaid2020
I think someone is copying this onto AO3, the copy is called Unchosen Champion, I read the first few chapters and it felt really familiar, but I chalked that up to the type of story, but naming the baby basilisk Selena and threatening Rita in the exact same way made me want to at least let it be known it's possible. Extra weird they have the comments turned off
I think someone is copying this onto AO3, the copy is called Unchosen Champion, I read the first few chapters and it felt really familiar, but I chalked that up to the type of story, but naming the baby basilisk Selena and threatening Rita in the exact same way made me want to at least let it be known it's possible. Extra weird they have the comments turned off
5/24 c49 MournfulDuchess
it has been a LONG while since a ff has had a twist ive not guessed or had a clue would happen. LOVE this
it has been a LONG while since a ff has had a twist ive not guessed or had a clue would happen. LOVE this
5/16 c14 maiqsmail
Welp. Now I remember the whole fic after these events in ch15. No reason to reread, I didn't like it that much. Regardless, it was fun while it lasted. Tata!
Welp. Now I remember the whole fic after these events in ch15. No reason to reread, I didn't like it that much. Regardless, it was fun while it lasted. Tata!
5/16 c11 maiqsmail
What a wrong dynamic in a courtroom. Fudge is canonically a placeholder who sells his activities for bribes. You made him into some kind of Supreme Judge. He's at the same time a prosecutor, a judge, and probably a defendant too, but this is a kangaroo court so he's doesn't even bother too be a defendant. No cross interrogation? No additional witnesses? Barty sent Black into Azkaban initially, we don't even have him here? And what's the point of Supreme mugwump then if he's basically just a front row observer? What DMLE doing? And that's how people get life in Azkaban in their society? With approach like that, Sirius could very well be tried originally and still be found guilty.
Even in medieval times long before the Statute of Secrecy the courts were better, cf. Habeas corpus and Magna carta.
What a wrong dynamic in a courtroom. Fudge is canonically a placeholder who sells his activities for bribes. You made him into some kind of Supreme Judge. He's at the same time a prosecutor, a judge, and probably a defendant too, but this is a kangaroo court so he's doesn't even bother too be a defendant. No cross interrogation? No additional witnesses? Barty sent Black into Azkaban initially, we don't even have him here? And what's the point of Supreme mugwump then if he's basically just a front row observer? What DMLE doing? And that's how people get life in Azkaban in their society? With approach like that, Sirius could very well be tried originally and still be found guilty.
Even in medieval times long before the Statute of Secrecy the courts were better, cf. Habeas corpus and Magna carta.
5/16 c7 maiqsmail
More lemons! Come on, you can't just describe Fleur fresh outta shower and in her lingerie, then fade to black. It's against the bro code.
More lemons! Come on, you can't just describe Fleur fresh outta shower and in her lingerie, then fade to black. It's against the bro code.
5/16 c4 maiqsmail
Ahaahaha, now I remember this story! It has the singular most unique thing happening: intimacy between HP and Rita Skitter! I've read hundreds of stories and this is the Only One that has it! Congrats.
Ahaahaha, now I remember this story! It has the singular most unique thing happening: intimacy between HP and Rita Skitter! I've read hundreds of stories and this is the Only One that has it! Congrats.
5/16 c3 maiqsmail
I just suffered from 1/3 of a promising fic where Harry was sorted in Slytherin and everyone treated him like dirt. But it was advertised as "morally grey Harry becoming more pro-active" that's why it took me 1/3 because I was waiting for that and instead of was one humiliation after another. Really freaking hope this sort would be therapeutical after three previous dumpster fire. The fact that Harry grows a spine at the end of chapter 1 already and not like 2/3 in seems very promising.
PS already have a review for ch1 but don't remember ever reading this so...
I just suffered from 1/3 of a promising fic where Harry was sorted in Slytherin and everyone treated him like dirt. But it was advertised as "morally grey Harry becoming more pro-active" that's why it took me 1/3 because I was waiting for that and instead of was one humiliation after another. Really freaking hope this sort would be therapeutical after three previous dumpster fire. The fact that Harry grows a spine at the end of chapter 1 already and not like 2/3 in seems very promising.
PS already have a review for ch1 but don't remember ever reading this so...
4/29 c1 not a fan
The entire chapter is the same thing repeated, but with different words... it's exhausting to see how you just inflate the word count by explaining things multiple times in the same chapter.
Honestly, this chapter could have been explained with half the words and it would still have been too many.
The entire chapter is the same thing repeated, but with different words... it's exhausting to see how you just inflate the word count by explaining things multiple times in the same chapter.
Honestly, this chapter could have been explained with half the words and it would still have been too many.
4/24 c37 Guest
Torture her!
Torture her!
4/24 c21 Guest
She got what she deserved. Whenever I'm in the mood for a fuck hermione story, I always enjoy it when she gets badly hurt.
She got what she deserved. Whenever I'm in the mood for a fuck hermione story, I always enjoy it when she gets badly hurt.