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4/17 c7 Kay
Wow. I thought actual Flashpoint did really well at getting into the mental/emotional side of the characters' work and their relationships with each other but these stories take it even a step further. And the timing of the stories fits ... In the early season this wouldn't have fit Ed but towards the end of the show and beyond works. I like that you're exploring the transition to Ed being in charge of the team but still have Greg in the story in a way that makes sense. He and Ed have been through so much together, of course Ed would still go to him for support even if it does take quite a while to admit it. And your descriptions are so evocative, especially in terms of the physical contact and their reactions to it. I know Flashpoint has been over for a long time but I hope you keep writing them. Thanks so much for sharing your stories with us :)

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