for Akane no Mai12/19/2024 c68 
5Darth Necron
Nearly half a year wait for what's nearly a copy past of the Urban Legends chapter...its getting harder to see just what was taking all this time with only minor overall changes at most...we will see soon hopefully at the moment of judgment that hopefully won't take to long to arrive at.
5Darth NecronNearly half a year wait for what's nearly a copy past of the Urban Legends chapter...its getting harder to see just what was taking all this time with only minor overall changes at most...we will see soon hopefully at the moment of judgment that hopefully won't take to long to arrive at.
12/19/2024 c68 15Allfather-Ford
Here we are of the prelude to the protagonists are going to be involved in the Code Vein dimension. It starts of Skyler proposing his marriage to Hifumi. Then, Jinyo and Mido appears to ruin the moment, so Mido sics Jinyo for her to test her strength against her enemies while Mido sits by watching until he stops the fight. Then, Ren and Ann briefly fought a clone of Akira named Akireplica. The evil trio then departs, warning the protagonists to gather their forces for the war in the Code Vein dimension. Besides that, Aslaug and company confront Kraka in coming to terms of being half-sisters and the attempts to free her from Kriemhild’s hold. Also, the Bloodspring tree has been burned down by Mido, signifying the climatic stakes for the endgame, alongside the crossover story of P5/CV is about to reach its end.
In Meiji Shrine, the protagonists are gathered for the preparations. Then surprisingly, Datenshi from the Code Vein dimension appears and warns our heroes of the dangers of the coming Ragnarok Vein. Taking the words to heart, the protagonists venture into the portal and are traversing to the dimension, and for a voice cameo hallucination of Yaldabaoth himself gives his comments to the Phantom Thieves and their allies.
Phila-Del-Phia!
15Allfather-FordHere we are of the prelude to the protagonists are going to be involved in the Code Vein dimension. It starts of Skyler proposing his marriage to Hifumi. Then, Jinyo and Mido appears to ruin the moment, so Mido sics Jinyo for her to test her strength against her enemies while Mido sits by watching until he stops the fight. Then, Ren and Ann briefly fought a clone of Akira named Akireplica. The evil trio then departs, warning the protagonists to gather their forces for the war in the Code Vein dimension. Besides that, Aslaug and company confront Kraka in coming to terms of being half-sisters and the attempts to free her from Kriemhild’s hold. Also, the Bloodspring tree has been burned down by Mido, signifying the climatic stakes for the endgame, alongside the crossover story of P5/CV is about to reach its end.
In Meiji Shrine, the protagonists are gathered for the preparations. Then surprisingly, Datenshi from the Code Vein dimension appears and warns our heroes of the dangers of the coming Ragnarok Vein. Taking the words to heart, the protagonists venture into the portal and are traversing to the dimension, and for a voice cameo hallucination of Yaldabaoth himself gives his comments to the Phantom Thieves and their allies.
Phila-Del-Phia!
12/19/2024 c68 Generic Reviewer
Shinya is joining the party! Guess attempting to do damage to [bad guy voiced by Aizen or Nazeem] really upped his relevance. I just hope he gets a Persona or some unrelated cool buff.
Pancake-kun is still a very high point of this story, if only because I enjoy his shifts from genuine cool guy to buttmonkey who is one wrong move from getting dismembered due to his innumerable sins, and vice versa.
Blood fountain getting obliterated by that one politician is genuinely messed up, but I chuckled purely because said politician is that ridiculously petty. Mido knows how to manipulate the stupid, even if everyone knows he's a bad guy (modern politics are that fucked, but I'm not gonna get into that).
Petty and very biased take from me (don't take it srsly, I'm being 'that guy' again): I feel the Advent Eight outside of off-brand Himura and Kotori could've stayed behind for the Gambler trio feat Midari, Mina, and Kyosuke. I understand why the entire Advent Eight are going, but man I miss the Kakeguruis and the Nioh descendants so damn much.
Long review done. Later days, and Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays!
Shinya is joining the party! Guess attempting to do damage to [bad guy voiced by Aizen or Nazeem] really upped his relevance. I just hope he gets a Persona or some unrelated cool buff.
Pancake-kun is still a very high point of this story, if only because I enjoy his shifts from genuine cool guy to buttmonkey who is one wrong move from getting dismembered due to his innumerable sins, and vice versa.
Blood fountain getting obliterated by that one politician is genuinely messed up, but I chuckled purely because said politician is that ridiculously petty. Mido knows how to manipulate the stupid, even if everyone knows he's a bad guy (modern politics are that fucked, but I'm not gonna get into that).
Petty and very biased take from me (don't take it srsly, I'm being 'that guy' again): I feel the Advent Eight outside of off-brand Himura and Kotori could've stayed behind for the Gambler trio feat Midari, Mina, and Kyosuke. I understand why the entire Advent Eight are going, but man I miss the Kakeguruis and the Nioh descendants so damn much.
Long review done. Later days, and Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays!
12/19/2024 c68 7Chaosblazer
So now we've got replica's on the prowl, and talk about a bummer.
losing your source of food or something similar to stay sane forcing your hand, never a good thing.
hope the heroes make it through the coming war, and back alive.
keep up the awesome story dude, always nice to read
7ChaosblazerSo now we've got replica's on the prowl, and talk about a bummer.
losing your source of food or something similar to stay sane forcing your hand, never a good thing.
hope the heroes make it through the coming war, and back alive.
keep up the awesome story dude, always nice to read
12/5/2024 c1 Jsmine Lucas
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Akane no Mai" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
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I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Akane no Mai" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
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8/3/2024 c67 5Darth Necron
And Wulf-Edda at last closes...with a full on universe closer.
I'll just say, Balder's Gate 3 was a game with a very mature story that had sex and violence...but also knew how to not overdo it...it would be wise if you looked at how that game did it for...better ideas at balance in the future.
So for now...we get a few new things. Kraka and Aslaug being the scion's of the monsters is indeed new, I just wonder if there parent drama will just be upstaged by the mad Guilty Crown like Doom's upstaging Kang...guess only one way to find out.
Well we are getting to a different final arc so now time to raise the hype meter a tad, till next time.
5Darth NecronAnd Wulf-Edda at last closes...with a full on universe closer.
I'll just say, Balder's Gate 3 was a game with a very mature story that had sex and violence...but also knew how to not overdo it...it would be wise if you looked at how that game did it for...better ideas at balance in the future.
So for now...we get a few new things. Kraka and Aslaug being the scion's of the monsters is indeed new, I just wonder if there parent drama will just be upstaged by the mad Guilty Crown like Doom's upstaging Kang...guess only one way to find out.
Well we are getting to a different final arc so now time to raise the hype meter a tad, till next time.
8/3/2024 c67 7Chaosblazer
of course all this chaotic stuff ends with the bad guy.
Mido always was, is and will forever be one big problem.
and now things are picking up, the heroes had better be ready.
reading all this norse stuff was cool man, keep it up with this awesome story.
7Chaosblazerof course all this chaotic stuff ends with the bad guy.
Mido always was, is and will forever be one big problem.
and now things are picking up, the heroes had better be ready.
reading all this norse stuff was cool man, keep it up with this awesome story.
8/3/2024 c67 15Allfather-Ford
Völva has succeeded in killing her former bully, who is named Hollie based on a certain minor character. Surtr and his forces immune to necromancy stands a fighting chance against the nightmarish zombie apocalypse. Oh look, our despicable hateful feminine Valkyrie attempts to plead her sister to save her, but thanks to Kriemhild creating a mental link in connecting the two minds, this allows the sister to see through her lies and tricks (had Kriemhild never done that, and Geirskögul save her without that assistance, then Skögul would kill her afterwards), and leads to the Selkie Shrine destroyed in cutting all ties and what finally drove Skögul into a rape trauma syndrome villainous breakdown, swearing her and her butch lover in vengeance on all the Nine Realms.
We reach the climax of the war against Kriemhild herself, including her one-winged angel form as a demonic dragonfly that the transformation sequence is nightmare fuel indeed. As they are about to defeat Kriemhild and Surtr ending Asgard, Kriemhild and the Yami Matter destroys everything and the Wulf-Edda universe. Sometime afterwards, Kriemhild has nine Valkyrie bodies, and splits her soul into these bodies in giving birth to the Vamkyries (and showing their demonic visages remind of Buffy’s vampires). And this is where the Vamkyries meet Mido.
So yeah, Kraka is Kriemhild’s daughter, and Aslaug is Brynhildr’s daughter, both are terrible mothers to a sole kind-hearted husband. The big reveal of Aslaug is like the Noah’s ark that carries the souls of the Wulf-Edda people. And now the protagonists are hearing the warnings of Ragnarok Vein, of what’s to come for the next YM event. The other Norse figures spirits alongside Volsung appear to interact with the protagonists. And yeah, even Brynhildr’s mother averts and subverts the motherly remorse to her daughter, that with no hesitation that she knows full well that Brynhildr is a bloodthirsty monster by her own choice. Now we wonder can Aslaug soften her mother? Plus, it seems that the four Yggdrasil kids and their deer decide to get involve in Ragnarok Vein. As they leave the dreams in about to wake up, they are going to be ready.
The end scene shows Jinyo and Kraka have their sparing match and watch over by their evil parents. Complete Monster abusive parents think alike that they’re preparing for Ragnarok Vein. Oh, Pandora (of course her real appearance remain hidden (ambiguous as describe)) reappears in resume her disguise as Miki.
Phila-Del-Phia!
15Allfather-FordVölva has succeeded in killing her former bully, who is named Hollie based on a certain minor character. Surtr and his forces immune to necromancy stands a fighting chance against the nightmarish zombie apocalypse. Oh look, our despicable hateful feminine Valkyrie attempts to plead her sister to save her, but thanks to Kriemhild creating a mental link in connecting the two minds, this allows the sister to see through her lies and tricks (had Kriemhild never done that, and Geirskögul save her without that assistance, then Skögul would kill her afterwards), and leads to the Selkie Shrine destroyed in cutting all ties and what finally drove Skögul into a rape trauma syndrome villainous breakdown, swearing her and her butch lover in vengeance on all the Nine Realms.
We reach the climax of the war against Kriemhild herself, including her one-winged angel form as a demonic dragonfly that the transformation sequence is nightmare fuel indeed. As they are about to defeat Kriemhild and Surtr ending Asgard, Kriemhild and the Yami Matter destroys everything and the Wulf-Edda universe. Sometime afterwards, Kriemhild has nine Valkyrie bodies, and splits her soul into these bodies in giving birth to the Vamkyries (and showing their demonic visages remind of Buffy’s vampires). And this is where the Vamkyries meet Mido.
So yeah, Kraka is Kriemhild’s daughter, and Aslaug is Brynhildr’s daughter, both are terrible mothers to a sole kind-hearted husband. The big reveal of Aslaug is like the Noah’s ark that carries the souls of the Wulf-Edda people. And now the protagonists are hearing the warnings of Ragnarok Vein, of what’s to come for the next YM event. The other Norse figures spirits alongside Volsung appear to interact with the protagonists. And yeah, even Brynhildr’s mother averts and subverts the motherly remorse to her daughter, that with no hesitation that she knows full well that Brynhildr is a bloodthirsty monster by her own choice. Now we wonder can Aslaug soften her mother? Plus, it seems that the four Yggdrasil kids and their deer decide to get involve in Ragnarok Vein. As they leave the dreams in about to wake up, they are going to be ready.
The end scene shows Jinyo and Kraka have their sparing match and watch over by their evil parents. Complete Monster abusive parents think alike that they’re preparing for Ragnarok Vein. Oh, Pandora (of course her real appearance remain hidden (ambiguous as describe)) reappears in resume her disguise as Miki.
Phila-Del-Phia!
8/2/2024 c67 Generic Reviewer
Aslaug's backstory is fully revealed, Pancake-kun is bringing his A-game, and Pandora ominously foreshadows something greater than Mido's endgame.
Good chapter. Later days!
Aslaug's backstory is fully revealed, Pancake-kun is bringing his A-game, and Pandora ominously foreshadows something greater than Mido's endgame.
Good chapter. Later days!
7/24/2024 c66 5Darth Necron
Yah...you made it clear now how much you love your Valkyrie hentai kink at this point good greif.
Well...when the sexual depravity is on the level that even Homelander and the Seven would start to feel it was to much I suppose we have reached a new level of...something.
Well...Loki did not get the break his MCU Counterpart has...no becoming God of stories for you...and if Odin knew Zantstsuken like his Final Fantasy counterpart he might have done just a tad better.
Meanwhile Kriemhid is getting Comic Joker under Tim Snyder levels of edgy with the face wearing...bloody hell indeed.
I suppose the only real new thing from Urban Legends is just how Aslaug is related to all this...and if its part of Mindo's plan and if she's going to be part of the solution or the problem.
But at last the torture Valkyrie porn side show is at the last act so we can get back to the Persona stuff to see at last if we have any real changes to add with Royal and Strikers and maybe Tactica to see if the wait all these years amounts to...till next time.
5Darth NecronYah...you made it clear now how much you love your Valkyrie hentai kink at this point good greif.
Well...when the sexual depravity is on the level that even Homelander and the Seven would start to feel it was to much I suppose we have reached a new level of...something.
Well...Loki did not get the break his MCU Counterpart has...no becoming God of stories for you...and if Odin knew Zantstsuken like his Final Fantasy counterpart he might have done just a tad better.
Meanwhile Kriemhid is getting Comic Joker under Tim Snyder levels of edgy with the face wearing...bloody hell indeed.
I suppose the only real new thing from Urban Legends is just how Aslaug is related to all this...and if its part of Mindo's plan and if she's going to be part of the solution or the problem.
But at last the torture Valkyrie porn side show is at the last act so we can get back to the Persona stuff to see at last if we have any real changes to add with Royal and Strikers and maybe Tactica to see if the wait all these years amounts to...till next time.
7/24/2024 c66 Generic Reviewer
The Berserking continues with a messed up orgy, followed by Grani and Sigurd zombies getting one-tapped harder than Freeza soldiers. Loki keeps on suffering, while Pancake-kun and Aslaug slowly understand each other; this lore sidetrack is Akechi's shining moment. Now all that's left is the usual escalation to this Norse hellscape, then its time to deal with not!Xehanort and Mengele-flavored Shido.
Later days!
The Berserking continues with a messed up orgy, followed by Grani and Sigurd zombies getting one-tapped harder than Freeza soldiers. Loki keeps on suffering, while Pancake-kun and Aslaug slowly understand each other; this lore sidetrack is Akechi's shining moment. Now all that's left is the usual escalation to this Norse hellscape, then its time to deal with not!Xehanort and Mengele-flavored Shido.
Later days!
7/24/2024 c66 15Allfather-Ford
The battles of Yggdrasil is great, especially the Norn orgy is one of the hottest and erotic moments that surpasses god-like tier as a force of nature of me masturbating many times (even more than the hateful lesbians being raped). Oh, a new addition is Harald and Skuld are also being entranced and having that off-screen orgy with Gjölldí. Also like the part of Urd and Slidis became pregnant by their man.
Ragnarök becomes intense when Brynhildr and Odin fight in the throne room. Brynhildr destroying her mother’s portrait is bad enough for another kick the dog, but insulting Baldr’s death takes the cake of Odin going furious papa wolf as both become Land Before Time in wrecking everything to each other. The real Brynhildr would have still done her kick the dog moments besides the illusion, showing she doesn’t care about anything but herself to show a huge dislike towards her unlike Brunhilde in YYGDM (and even Kratos). As Odin is about to deliver the killing blow, Fenrir arrives to grievously bites him as Brynhildr finishes Allfather off with her bare hands like Kratos punching Zeus. Before that, Kriemhild revived Sigurd and Grani as the undead to make more soap opera drama and Brynhildr more furious, then Víðarr kills Fenrir and Brynhildr (afterwhich Sigurd and Grani as weaklings), saving Asgard from the vengeful Valkyrie plague and Brynhildr a hated pariah in history. Kriemhild then betrays and kills Loki, as she raises her own undead for the climax.
Aslaug’s curiosity is getting close to the truth of her connection to Brynhildr and Sigurd. Just one more chapter left of the Wulf-Edda arc.
Phila-Del-Phia!
15Allfather-FordThe battles of Yggdrasil is great, especially the Norn orgy is one of the hottest and erotic moments that surpasses god-like tier as a force of nature of me masturbating many times (even more than the hateful lesbians being raped). Oh, a new addition is Harald and Skuld are also being entranced and having that off-screen orgy with Gjölldí. Also like the part of Urd and Slidis became pregnant by their man.
Ragnarök becomes intense when Brynhildr and Odin fight in the throne room. Brynhildr destroying her mother’s portrait is bad enough for another kick the dog, but insulting Baldr’s death takes the cake of Odin going furious papa wolf as both become Land Before Time in wrecking everything to each other. The real Brynhildr would have still done her kick the dog moments besides the illusion, showing she doesn’t care about anything but herself to show a huge dislike towards her unlike Brunhilde in YYGDM (and even Kratos). As Odin is about to deliver the killing blow, Fenrir arrives to grievously bites him as Brynhildr finishes Allfather off with her bare hands like Kratos punching Zeus. Before that, Kriemhild revived Sigurd and Grani as the undead to make more soap opera drama and Brynhildr more furious, then Víðarr kills Fenrir and Brynhildr (afterwhich Sigurd and Grani as weaklings), saving Asgard from the vengeful Valkyrie plague and Brynhildr a hated pariah in history. Kriemhild then betrays and kills Loki, as she raises her own undead for the climax.
Aslaug’s curiosity is getting close to the truth of her connection to Brynhildr and Sigurd. Just one more chapter left of the Wulf-Edda arc.
Phila-Del-Phia!